Zaini 22 Posted September 27, 2008 Hi members come here & write a shair Daily Kisko Ehssas Mere Shiddat-e-Jazbaat Ka Hai Meri Haalat Meri Wehshat Ki Khabbar Kisko Hai Kon Veeran Makaanuun Ki Khabbar Rakhta Hai Meri Ujjrri Hui Qissamat Ki Khabbar Kisko Hai 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 27, 2008 Bohat dinOn mai jo dekha usay to kia kahiyee Lagi hai USs ki khamoshI bhi guftago ki trha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NoTanki 0 Posted September 28, 2008 Woh Chaand Tha Jo Sitaron Mein Ghir Gaya Sooraj Ko Daikho Woh Samandar Mein Utar Gaya Daali Say Toota Phool Matti Mein Mil Gaya Aansoo Gira Aankh Say Rooh Mein Utar Gaya Marney Ke Baad Rooh To Parwaaz Kar Gayi Jo Dard Tha Woh Fiza Mein Bikhar Gaya Aasman Ki Wusaton Ka Kya Shumaar Hai Neelgon Gubaar Nigah Mein Thehar Gaya Apney Zameer Ko Sar-E-Bazaar Baich Kar Insan Khud Apni Nazar Hi Mein Gir Gaya ...!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 28, 2008 Nice mahi n Iman Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 28, 2008 Ruksat hau to baat meri maan kr gaya Jo kuch us k pass tha sub daan kr gaya Bichra kuch is ada sy k rut he badal gye Ik shakhs sare shehr ko veeran kr gaya 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NoTanki 0 Posted September 28, 2008 salamzzz ahaaa wow nice one zaini n thxxxxx tusi tay chaaa gy hooo jeee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NoTanki 0 Posted September 28, 2008 Terey Baad Yoon Badli Hai Tabiyat Mairi Khushi Detey Hain Gham Ke Qissey Mujh Ko ....! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 28, 2008 Thanks zainii... Uss nay jitni umer biita di hai Raazi` Buss utna hi mera jeevan hai mjh main Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LeGend 1 Posted September 28, 2008 Jheela hai main nay galay mil ker bichernay ka azab myray mabood aysi saza kisi aur ko mat dayna 1 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 28, 2008 Buss aik shaam bari khamsoHi say toot gaya Humain Jo maan teri Dosti pay rehta tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 28, 2008 iman main to already chaie hue hon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 28, 2008 Ik baar woh mila thaa mujhay be-rukhi k saath Uss din sa dil ka shehar baraa-bar udaas ha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 28, 2008 ye Kon bola hai adam itni chah say Ehsaas-e-bartari say khuda Ho gaya Hun main Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 28, 2008 Aik aisi bhi gharee ishq mein aye thi k hum khaak ko haath lagatey to sitara karty Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 28, 2008 Nice zainii !!! Jiss terha Khwab mere Ho gaye raiza raiza iss terha say na kabhi toot k bikhray Koi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 28, 2008 Socha kahin k toot na jaye kisi ka dil Guzrii hai apnii umrr issi dekh bhaal main Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 29, 2008 Bus ik musalsal hairat hai kia sahil ,kia grdaab mere ik basti dasht ki rait hai Or raiza raiza khwaab mere Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
LeGend 1 Posted September 29, 2008 Wah jee wah Kia khoob Topic strat kia hai@Zaini Lerkiyooo khoob maza laga rakha hai u nay shair per shair lols Kuch hum bhi Arz kr lain --- Laboon pay rang-e-tabassum na dil main Moaj-e-Zaroor Myray watan kay agreeboon ki eid kia ho gi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 29, 2008 thanx Gul gul aik bat to sabit ho gye k CY ki larkion ka zooq bht acha ha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 29, 2008 Buhat hi muddat key baad kal jab Kitaab-e-maazii ko main nay khola Buhat say chehray nazar main utray Buhat say naamon peh dil paseeja Ik aesa safha bhii uss main aayaa Likha huwa tha jo aansuon say Keh jiss ka unWaan hum-safar tha Safha yeh sub say hi mo'tbar tha Kuch aur aansoo phir uss peh tapkay Phir uss say aagay main parh na paayaa Kitaab-e-maazi ko band kar kay Ussii kii yaadon main kho gyaa main Agar woh miltaa tou kaisa hotaa Inhii khyaalon main sou gyaa main Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 29, 2008 Usay khaber thi k poray nahi mere hissay wo shakhs Phr b mjhy jorta raha kesayyy !! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 29, 2008 Go sab ko baahum saagar-o-baadaa tou nahi tha Ye shehar udaas itana ziyaada tou nahi tha Vaaiz se rah-o-rasm rahii rind say sohabat Farq in me koi itna ziyada to nahi thaa THak kar youn he pal bhar k liye aankh lagi thi So kar he na uthain ye iraada tou nahi tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted September 30, 2008 tu Jo kehta hai k tere jesay kaai Or b hain tujh Ko dawa hai to phr khud sa dikha aik b shakhs !!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted September 30, 2008 Woh aik hi chehraa tou nahin saaray jahaan main Jo door hai woh dil say utar kion nahi jaataa Main apni hi uljhii hoii raahon kaa tamaashaa Jatey hain jidher sub main udher kion nahi jaataa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
