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~~~~~!!~~~~~~~~~KHUAB ~~~~~~~!!~~~~~~~

NAHI MAIRE KOI HAISAIAT IS KAI ILAWA

AIK BAY QEEMAT SA ANSOO AIK KHUAB BIKHRA HOA

MAINI IS DIL KO MANAIA ;BOHAT BAR SAMJHAYA

NAHI THA WOH APNA ..WO TO THA PARAYA

DIL-E-BYQARAR NAI HER BAR YEHEE POOCHA

DHERKANO MAIN US KO PHIR KION HAY BASAYA

BAY BUSEE YEH MERE KAHAN TAK LAY AYEE

HER CHEHRAY PER BUS TERHA HEE GUMAN AYA

JAHAN KAHEEN BHI DEKHA MUHABAT KA SAYA

ZABAN PER FAQAT TERHA HEE NAM AYA

MAIN TOOT GAYEE BIKHER GAYE ZARA BAY NISHAN HO GAYEE

IN KHUABOON NAI MUJH KO YEH KIA MUQAM DIKHAYA

~!! RUKH ~~!!

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;o it's urs??????? superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :yes: :yes: :flower:

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ver nice :yes:

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:) thanxs for appriciation BOTH OF U :flower:

YEAH KIRAN ITS MY OWN POETRY .. :down:

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:weep: thats..shoo :down:

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~~~~~!!~~~~~~~~~KHUAB ~~~~~~~!!~~~~~~~

  NAHI  MAIRE KOI HAISAIAT IS KAI ILAWA

  AIK BAY QEEMAT SA ANSOO AIK KHUAB BIKHRA HOA

  MAINI IS DIL KO MANAIA ;BOHAT BAR SAMJHAYA

  NAHI THA WOH  APNA ..WO TO    THA  PARAYA

  DIL-E-BYQARAR NAI HER BAR YEHEE POOCHA

    DHERKANO MAIN US KO PHIR KION HAY BASAYA

  BAY BUSEE YEH MERE KAHAN TAK LAY AYEE

  HER CHEHRAY  PER  BUS TERHA HEE GUMAN AYA

      JAHAN KAHEEN BHI DEKHA MUHABAT KA SAYA

    ZABAN PER FAQAT  TERHA  HEE NAM AYA

    MAIN TOOT GAYEE BIKHER GAYE ZARA BAY NISHAN HO GAYEE

    IN KHUABOON  NAI MUJH KO  YEH KIA MUQAM DIKHAYA

~!! RUKH ~~!!

Wah wah.. kya kehnay janaab dil ko chhu jaaney wali poetry likhi hai aap ne.. its wonderful Rukh.. well done :yes:

DIL-E-BYQARAR NAI HER BAR YEHEE POOCHA

DHERKANO MAIN US KO PHIR KION HAY BASAYA

Sx

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wafa tuj se ai bhulanay walay, chahti houn

meri sadgi dekh kiya chahti houn

teri arzoo hai agar jurm koi

tu is jurm ki main saza chahti houn

Edited by fati

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Rukh :yes:

Buhat Buhat Buhat achi hay..

Well Done!!

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FATI > bus aisee hee hayy poetry kuch sad kuch bad ..jaisay hum waisai ilfaz :down:

SHABO >thanx a lot 4 ur appriciation boht dinoo bad app ki post apnai toic main dekhee ..feeling good :)

NADAN > thanx u too ..:flower:

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good one achee post hay aap shairi bhe kertee hain yeh achee khaber hay lakin kuch umeed bharee shairi bhee kerain best of luck

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

nice poetry

its realy very nice

:hello::yes:

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woowwwww bohut khoob rukh shabash :hi:

MERI UMEEDAIN

"MERI UMEEDON KE CHARAAG BHUJTE JA RHAE HIAN TUM HUMSE OUR HUM TUJSE DOOR JA RAHE HAIN TUMHARE BAGER TO JESE HUM MER HI GYE HAIN TUJSE BICHER KE HUM ZINDAGI SE HI DOOR JA RAHE HIAN

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Umair very Nice!!

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hummmmmm

changa hai :yes:

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THANX hadiqa umair paki rythm :flower:

umair > GOOOOOOOD ONE :yes: "TUM SAI BICHER KER HUM ZINDGEE SAI HI DOOR JA RAHAY HAIN .!"

PAKI >thanx 4 advice :)

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:hi: :flower:

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MAINI MEHSOOS KIA HAI OS AHSAS KARAB KO

DAME MARG PER KOI JUB ZINDGEE KI KHUWAHISH KERAY !

howz dis guys ?

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wah wah wah baki wah :lol: app kie kya baat hia :D

ab hamari taraf se kuch ;)

suna hay

" suna hay loog usaay aankh bher kaay dekhtay hein , suna hay hasher hein uss ki ghazal si ankhin ager aisaa hay too chalo chal ker dekhtay hein. suna hay bolaay too bataaon saay bhool jhdtay hein aisa hay too challo baat ker kaay dekhtaay hein. hum uss kaay shehar mein therin yaa coooch ker jain chalo imran sitaray safer kaay dekhtay hein

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UMAIR :yikes: yeh AHMAD FARAZ KI NAZAM HAI IMRAN KAHAN SAI AGYA :o

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Hum Wo Be-dard Hain

Hum Wo Be-dard hain...............

Khawab ganwa ker bhi Jinhain Neend aa AJti hai

Soch soch ker Bhi

Jin k Zehnoo ko Kuch Nnahi hota

Toot Phoot ker Jin k Dil Dharakna YAad

Rakhty HAin

HUm wo Be-dard hain....................

K jin K Ansoooo.......

Ankh ka rasta Bhool JAty hain

toot ker Rony ki koshis main jo

BAat be baat Muskaraty hain

Shaam Sy pehly MArr jany ki

khawahish main..........

Jitay hain..............

or

Jitay Hi Chaly JAty hain..........................

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VERY NICEEEEE NADAN ..very aggresive wording :weep:

is berus bhi ankhoon ki wehshat na gayee

ik ummer ka hasil tha jo khuab bikher giya

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Kaise bataayain aur kis ko bataayain

Ke kaisi theen woh muskurahatein

Jin mein zindagi ke ujaalay thay

Kaisi theen woh nighaaein

Jo is dil ko cho leti thee

Kaisi theen woh khamosheyaan

Jo kahaaneyaan sunaatii theen

Kaise thay woh haath

Jo abb in haathoon main nahin...

Yes Rukh!! asa he hay!! :weep:

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nadan main hoon na mujhey batao :lol:

rukh baji apni aakhain to seedhey kar lo :laugh: imraan aa gaya to main kya karon :P

nice both poetries nadan :hi:

Jab kabhi tera naam letay hain

"Jab kabhi tera naam letay hain, Dil say hum inteqaam letay hain, Meri barbadiyon kay afsaanay, Meray yaaron kay naam letay hain ! Bas yahi ek jurm hai apna, Hum mohabbat say kaam letay hain ! Har kadam par giray magar seekha Kaisay girton ko tham letay hain ! Hum batak kar junoo ki rahon mein, Akl say inteqaam letay hain !

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DO CHAR DIN OR HAIN KHUABAOON KAI SILSILAY

PHIR TO MUSTIQAL HAIN AZABOON KAI SILSILAY

:down: lo umair maini ankhain neechay hee ker leen hain

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