pakistani 0 Posted January 7, 2004 Yeh sher pata nahe mujhay bohat attract kerta hey kisi doc sahib ka hey naam yaad nahee shaid aap ko bhe pasand aae Woh jo derya ke paar rehtee hey Meree ankhoon se roz behtee hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted January 7, 2004 yes pakistane a nice one by some one Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted January 7, 2004 bohat koob kaha hai jis nai bhi kaha hai ...i think DR ka hai to zaroor is main ANKHOON KI BAYMAREE ki teraf ishara hai roz behna to khternak hai ;) ik SHAIR MERE TERAF SAY] US KO KUCH TO BANA DIYA HAI HUM NAI THORA SA DHIYAN DEY KER :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted January 7, 2004 thanx both for apriciating and Rukh aapnay apna sher likh ker meray post ko do miray laga diye thanx a lot Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hadiqa 0 Posted January 7, 2004 hi welcome2 kool yar & nice shair 2 :D have a nice time Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 7, 2004 ahem ahem.. doc here oyee pakistani yeh kiun se doc ne kaha hia :P naam bata us ka wesey jis ne bhe kaha bohut kjhoob kaha hia :) ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted January 7, 2004 joo humaray zabut peh heran hain qateel un see keh doo jo ankh see nahin girte woh ansoo dil peh girte hain hain thiek hai ya gurbar hai kahin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 7, 2004 Mohabbat Aisa Deriya(river) Hai Kay Barish Roothe Bhi Ja'ay Tou Pani Kum Nahin Hota...... very Nice Pakistani...!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted January 8, 2004 thanx Ariba for your sher me khud qatel shifai ka fan hoon punkhay wala nahee doosray wala :P Hum na hoon to zamanay kee saans ruk jae qateel hum waqat ke seenay me dharaktay hain ager ghalat likha ho to corection ker dena Nadan its gr8 aapka sher itna acha laga ke likhnay ke zaroorat bhee nahee peree foran yad ho giya bohat khoob bohat hee acha sher hey dil khol ker daad denay ko jee chahta hey :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 8, 2004 yes pakitani dast true :) shairi or mohabbat "ajab bhed mohabbat ki zindagi ke he use goman bhi na tha hum us ke he kahee ameeq kahe dard ko baseet kiya hamari zeest par ehsan shairi ke hee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 8, 2004 Thank s Pakistani.. Umair nice stuff!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rythm 0 Posted January 9, 2004 nice Umair.. zeeest kia hota hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted January 9, 2004 lo gee zeest ka nahe pata hain aapko urdu nahee aatee kiya aapko zeest ka matlab bhee nahee pata me aapko khud bataoon ga zeest ka matlab lakin zara urdu kee lughat dekh loon :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted January 9, 2004 WOH MILTA NAHI AIK BAR HUMAIN OR YEH ZINDGEE DOBARA NAHI ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted January 9, 2004 wow Rukh zaberdast aapkey paas kamal kee colection hay achay sheroon kee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 9, 2004 hmmm sirf ek sher... ok try kerti hoon POOCHTE HAIN LOOG MUJHE MERA KIYA LAGTA HAI WOH KOI NAIKI THI MERI JIS KA SILA LAGTA HAI WOH.... [QATIL] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Uss kee bewafaee bhee mustaqil nahee hoteee Dil sada woh rekhta hey do rukhoon kee hasrat me Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 9, 2004 BICHARTE LAMHE WOH DER TALAK ROYA THA WOH ISS SE BERH KER MERA AITERAF KIYA KERTA YAHAN TO PAL MAIN BADAL LETE HAIN "KHUDA" BHI KAI WOH TAMAM UMER MERA TAWAF KIYA KERTA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted January 9, 2004 ik teri muskaan per kia kia guzri jaan per Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted January 9, 2004 kesay jaati meray badan say beetay lamhon' ki khushboo khwaabon' ki is basti main , kuch phool meray hamsaye thay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted January 9, 2004 in barishoon se dosti ache nahee faraz kacha tera makan hay kuch to khiyal ker Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 9, 2004 Khuloos ko bhi akhlas sumjhte ho Faraz Dost hota nahi her haath milane wala Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Mujhay yeh gham hay teree arzoo na mit jae Bohat Dino se tabiat mereee udas naheeee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 9, 2004 gr8 kiran shabash :hi: pakistani u r really cool yar :D keep dat alwaz up guyss ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted January 9, 2004 Gham ki Barish mein har Fan Aik Fun ko Jilla milti hai Tu bhi kabhi Kissi Aag mein Jal tu bhi Nikahr jayega Share this post Link to post Share on other sites