rukh 25 Posted February 27, 2004 boht khooooob mansoor ..kisi baymaree ka ziker nahi kia :P .well its nice one ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted February 28, 2004 Thank you Rani n Rukh Specially mohabbat ki tabeat main yeh kaisa bachpana qudrat nai rakha hai rukh> its your own poetry its a very genius poetry if its a choice then its a ginius choice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted February 28, 2004 choti si galat fehmi karde gi juda hum ko halaat itnay badal jayenge, maloom na tha hum ko kya bus yeh rishta itna kamzoar tha humara ? jisay chaha pal bhar mein toor diya is ko ... jo aik lamhay k liye bhi duur na hotey thai ... aaj le jana para unhein judai k ghum ko .. kabhi apne hi rastey per bichaye thai hum ne phool .. aaj kaantey bichaye khud hi jaga dee pathar ko .. ab to aik dard aur takleef rehti hai is dil mein ... koi to aye ..marham lagaye is zakhm ko ... ab bhi milan ki aas hai hum dono k dil mein koi na samajh paye ga is pyar ki shiddat ko mana k chahat abhi bhi bohat hai humein .. to kyun na phir se uthayen pyar k qadam ko... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 29, 2004 DIL HAI PAKISTANI > :D app ka nick or app ka avatar ..kuch match nahi banta .. picture indian actor ki dil hay app ka pakistani YEH TO MOHABBAT nahi hoyee pakistan say :) THANX for ur appriciation ..well its not mine poetry ! FATI > oh its my favourit poem ... i love it akser oqat main yeh ghazal gungunatee hoon ..bohat sall pehlay maini yeh ghazal teena sani ki awaz main sunee thee ..or ajj tak yad hai its great ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 29, 2004 hazaroon dukh peray sehna mohabbat mer nahi sakteee hai tum say bus yehee kehna mohabbat mer nahi saktee tera her bar meray khat ko perhna or roo daina mera her bar likh daina mohabbat mer nahi saktee bhalay hum ko paray merna mohabbat mer nahi saktee jahan main jub talak punchee chehktay urtay phirtay hain hay jub tak phool ka khilna mohabbat mer nahi saktee poranay ohad ko jub zinda kernai ka khiyal ayee mujhay bus itna likh daina MOHABBAT mer nahi sakteee woh tera hijjjer ki shaab phone rakhnai sai zara pehlay bohat rotay hoye kehna mohabbat mer nahi saktee ager hum hasratoon ki qabber main hee dafan ho jaiin to yeh kutboon pey likh dina mohabbat mer nahi sakte poranay rabtoon ko phir nayee waaday ki khuahish hai zara ik bar to kehna MOHABBAT mer nahi saktee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
gmmalak 0 Posted February 29, 2004 salam koe hoye ranjha to koe romeo , koe banay majnoo to koe farhad iss rang roop kee MOHABBAT jane kitne hoye barbad khush rahein AH Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 1, 2004 gmmm ... to phir app yeh garee per beth ker kis say milnay ja rahay hain :P wisal ki tamazat sai bersoon ki ryazat sai kia milla MOHABBAT sai AIK THAKKA HOa ANSOoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 1, 2004 Yeh Sach hai Yeh sach hai un se nigahain kabhi mila na sakay hum un ki yaad ko lekin kabhi bhula na sakay Woh khush naseeb sahi,tujh se jo qareeb hain hum budnaseeb hain jo ghum se dur jaa na sakay Chah ker chandni bhi us husn ko pohanch na sakee nikhar ke phool bhi us ka shabaab laa na sakay Qaid-e-ghum mai bhi ye aansu khushi ke qasid hain jo un ke deedar ke doraan hum chuppa na sakay Hazar Gardish-e-doraan ke saath khail chukkay magar tumharee nazar ka mizaaj paa na sakay jhijik jhijik ker nazar un ke dil tak aa pohanchii yeh woh safar hai ke manzil jise bhula na sakay Masroof tha mulaqaat main magar umair yeh maslihat thi ke hum donoon muskura na sakay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted March 3, 2004 hello too much nice all of u umair Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 3, 2004 bacha k khood ko guzarna muhaal lagta hai tamam shahr mairay rastoo mai rahta hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted March 3, 2004 (edited) aaaaye hasil_e_Mohabbat bataa kia jawab doon ? Duniya yaa Poochtee hai main kuin Udas hoon ? Edited March 3, 2004 by mansoor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 3, 2004 napster aag kyoon lagha rahey ho :P very nice saamia n masoor :) phool "jahan phoolon ko khilna tha vohin khiltae to acha tha tumhain hum na chaha tha tumhin miltae to acha tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 4, 2004 (edited) well said all of u guys MOHABBAT mohabbat raks ki soorat kabhi ik aks ki soorat mohabbat dil sai dil kai rabtay ki akhri manzil mohabbt tajerba hai ik mohabbt narsayee hai mohabbat justajoo bhi hai mohabbt rooth jaye to sada ka roog ban jayee yeh aisa soog ban jayee kai baze hernay walay khud apny app ko harain khud apnay app ko marain mohabbat ik alamat hai kissi kai zinda honay ki kissi kay zinda rehnay ki Edited March 4, 2004 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted March 5, 2004 hello rukh> vase bat ap ki bhi theekh hi agar log ziada hoon tu asay hi hoog a vase this is good tip ..... yeh dunia har tarah ka anjam karti hi yeh dunia mohbat karne valoon ko saream karti hi joh marte hain mohbat kay nam par har vakat ishaq mohbat main joh zuban kholta hi usay tu mohbat hi benam karti hi mohbat main joh dil toot jate hain mot ki dehlez phir inka anjam karti hi ro detay hain aksar tery judai main hum humrai mohbat khon kay toor par jam karty hi teray begar ji na sakeen gay hum teray begar yeh dunia humra bura anjam karty hi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 6, 2004 NIGHAEEN BOLTEE HAI BAITAHASHA MOHABBAT PAGHLOON KI GHUFTAGO HAI . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
modhi 0 Posted March 6, 2004 NIGHAEEN BOLTEE HAI BAITAHASHA MOHABBAT PAGHLOON KI GHUFTAGO HAI . hahahahaha kyaa baat hey kyaa baat bolee hey saamiaa jii aap ney bilkul sahee khaa mey bhee asee hee sochtaa hu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 6, 2004 khawab tha wo k jal raha tha raat . bech darya maikoi ghar tanha . hum nay daikhay hain shaam k sayay . hum nay katti hai dophar tanha . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
modhi 0 Posted March 6, 2004 saamiaa>wah samiaa jii :P jawab nahe aap kaa aap ki sahiree kaa aeik sher arz hey wabistaa teray name sey kuch talkhyaa bhee thee (s) acha he kyaa ju tuney hamin faramosh kerdyaa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 6, 2004 tazaad e mohabbat mai yeh nazuk maqaam aaya to kia karoo gay . mai roo raha hoon tum hans rahay hoo , mai muskaraya to kia karoo gay. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted March 6, 2004 assalm umair>yar umair bhi aap ka bhi jawab nahee rukh>well difine saamia,napstar>kia baat hai aap ki modhi>bhi modhi aap bi gul khilao Kia mohabbat ka is se ach rukh hai khuda karta hai mohabbat makhlooq se itni k jis ka andaza sattar man sa hai k utara pehlay risk tera jisne baad main tujhe khalq kia usne kiya tu soch ta hai k ye uska ehsaan nahee har namat atta ki tujhe jisne k le tu fida unse kiya tu shukr karta hai ye uski maherbani nahee tujhe aqal di usne k tu uski khalqat ki research karey k tu yaad karta hai usko k ye uski mohabbat nahee khuda karta hai jo makhlooq se apni kia mohabbat ka is se acha rukh hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 7, 2004 pakitani dil>> dats ma kind pleasure yar :) ur poetry is gr8 :hi: saamia n modhi>> nice shiars titliyon jaisi thi wo "Aisi waisi nahin periyon jaisi thi wo Machalti ghataoon ki badliyon jaisi thi wo Shoukh rang manchali tabiyat say bher poor Chaman chaman phirti titliyon jaisi thi wo Ik ehsas-e-tazgee ik mehek ka gumaan Ik sarapa ghazal kaliyon jaisi thi wo Chamak thi bala see situm maar dala Sawana main berpa bijliyon jaisi thi wo Wasta na raha zindagee main dukhon say Hamesha ko hasil khushiyon jaisi thi wo Naaz-o-andaaz shaiki us kay juda they Kahan aam see lerkiyon jaisi thi wo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted March 8, 2004 Assallam, umair>yar itni khoobsurat larki,khush naseeb ho yar tum,khuda use salamat rakhe, Allah use buri nazar se bachai,AAmeen Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
