Sweetoo 0 Posted June 21, 2004 Tumhi milte tou accha tha......! Jahan pholoon ko khilna tha wahin khilte tou accha tha Tumhi ko hum ne chaha tha tumhi milte tou accha tha Koi ager hamien pooche tumhain kaise bhulaya hai Tumhare khat ko ashkoon se shab-e-gham me jalaya hai Hazaroon zakhm aise hain ager sulagtey tou accha tha Tumhi ko hum ne chaha tha tumhi milte tou accha tha Tumhain jitna bhulaya tha utne yaad aaye hai Bahare no jo aaye hai wohi khushboo hi layee hai Tumhare lab merey khatir ager hilte tou accha tha Tumhi milte tou accha tha Jahan pholoon ko khilna tha wahin khilte tou accha tha Tumhi ko hum ne chaha tha tumhi milte tou accha tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 21, 2004 my favourit one :) .. simple & soft wording ...i think yeh Saad Ali shah ki hay ..! nice collection Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sweetoo 0 Posted June 22, 2004 Ji haan aap ne sahi guess kia hai k yeh poem Saad Ali shah ki hay .. waisey yeh merey bhi fav hai. aap ki bhi tou hone he the kiunke hamare choice jo aik hai... ;) sweetoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 22, 2004 Yeh sach hai un se nigahain kabhi mila na sakay hum un ki yaad ko lekin kabhi bhula na sakay Woh khush naseeb sahi,tujh se jo qareeb hain hum budnaseeb hain jo ghum se dur jaa na sakay Chah ker chandni bhi us husn ko pohanch na sakee nikhar ke phool bhi us ka shabaab laa na sakay Qaid-e-ghum main bhi yeh aansu khushi ke qasid hain jo un ke deedar ke doraan hum chuppa na sakay Hazar Gardish-e-doraan ke saath khail chukkay magar tumharee nazar ka mizaaj paa na sakay jhijik jhijik ker nazar un ke dil tak aa pohanchii yeh woh safar hai ke manzil jise bhula na sakay Masroof tha mulaqaat main magar yeh maslihat thi ke hum donoon muskura na sakay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 22, 2004 very nice posting sweetoo :hi: very gud mhn yara Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 22, 2004 yaar app ko pata tu hai mein hoon na very good ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 22, 2004 maqsade_e_hayat ki taqmeel ho jay ger ik baar yeh kaho k tum meray ho :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 22, 2004 umairrrr mein tumhara hoon dost Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 22, 2004 sweetoo > lolzzz yeh to main bhool gayee thee ;) .. waysay mujhay hayrat hay main to samjhee thee app ko poetry main itnrust nahi ho ga per yahan to mashallah :D nice poetry mhn & umair :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 22, 2004 SALAM, NICE MHN ,UMAIR,SWEETOOO KISI HURF KISI BAB MAIN NAHIN AAYE GA, TERA ZIKER MERI KITAB MAIN NAHIN AAYE GA, TERI RAH TAKTE RAHE AGARCHA KHABAR BHI THI, KE YEH DIN BHI TERE HISAB MAIN NAHIN AAYE GA. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sweetoo 0 Posted June 22, 2004 very nice RUBY_4u,umair.zm and mein_ hoon_ na :D well rukh ab tou pata chal gaya na mujhe poetry mien intrest hai. yeh alag baat hai k itnaa nahin tha jitna yahan posts karne k baad ho gaya hai Accha one more from me Judayee dene wale tum se umeede wafa kaise?? taaluq tout jayee jab Mohabbat roth jayee jab Tou phir rasm-e- duaa kaise? Millan ki iltaja kaise? Bhanwar mien dolte kashtee p sahil ki tamana kaise? Ukhatre saanz hoon tou zindagi ki arzoo bhi kya? Jo manzil kho chuke ho uss ki phirr se justajuu bhi kiun? Razayee dost per ab accha......Sir-e-tasleem kham karna siskna se yehi behtr hai na umeed hi marna Sweetoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 23, 2004 SALAM, HMMM SWEETOO VERY NICE ZABAR10 KASH TUMHEN DEKHA NA HOTA! KASH TUMHEN DEKHA NA HOTA DIL MAIN GHAM KE PHOOL NA KHILTE HOTOON PER FARYAD NA HOTI TANHAYI KE DARD NA MILTE APNI HASTI BAR NA HOTI MARNE KA ARMAN NA HOTA SANS BHI EK TALVAR NA HOTI KASH TUMHEN DEKHA NA HOTA AJ ITNE MAJBOOR NA HOTE SAB LOGON SE ULFAT KERTE AUR KHUDA SE DURR NA HOTE KASH TUMHEN NA DEKHA HOTA!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rosh 0 Posted June 23, 2004 acche selection hai sub ki nafratain bhi us say hain muhabtain bhi us say hain yeh dil kay mamlay bhi hova kartay hain ajeeb na tot kar juray na jur kar totay yeh qurbaton kay faslay bhi hova kartay hain ajeeb na khushyan kabhi paye na chahtain kabhi paye yeh hasraton kay alao bhi hova kartay hain ajeeb usay dekhon to na chahon na dekhon to chahay jaon yeh dil kay faislay bhi hova kartay hain ajeeb wo milay to na milon wo na milay to milnay ki justujon karon yeh muhabton kay imtihan bhi hova kartay hain ajeeb Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sweetoo 0 Posted June 23, 2004 very nice RUBY_4u and rosh Hai duaa megar harfe duaa yaad nahin merey naghmat ko andaaze nawa yaad nahin mien ne palkoon se diryaar p dastak de hai mien woh saaill hoon jise koi sada yaad nahin mien ne jin k liyee rahoon mien bichayaa tha lahoo hum se kehte hain wohi ehde wafa yaad nahin sirf dhundlayee sitaroon ki chamak dekhi hai kab hua? kon hua? kis se khafa yaad nahin zindagi jabre musalsal ki tarah katee hai jaane kis jurm ki payee hai saza yaad nahin Aao aik sajda karien alme madhooshi mien log kehte hain k saghir ko Khuda yaad nahin..! Saghir saddique Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 24, 2004 nice one sweto ..khas tor pper is kay alfaz bohat umda hain .. ruby > nce collection tumhain jub kabhi millian fursatain meray dil say bojh utar do main bohat dinnoo sau udas hoon mujhay koi sham udhar do mujhay apnay roop ki dhoop do kay chamk sakian maray khalokhad mujhay pany rang main rang do meray sary zang utar do kisi or ko mere haal say na gherz hay na koi wasta main bikher gya hoon samayt lo main bigger gaya hoon sanwar do mere wehshatoon ko berha diy hay judaiyoon kay azab nay meray dil per hath rakho zara mere dherkanoo ko qarar do tumhain subha lagee kaysee kaho meray khuahisoon kay dayar ki jo bhalee lagee to yahenn raho isay chahtoon say nikhar do wahan gher main kon hay muntazir kay fikker ho dair sawair ki bare muaktasir see yeh rat hay isee chandne main guzar do koi bat kerne hay chand say kisi shaksar ki oot main mujhay rastay main yaheen kaheen kisi kunj gul main utar do aitbar sajid Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 24, 2004 sweeto, ruby n rukh :hi: no nice colection all :hi: n thanx :) mhn >> thanx buddy :) do din ki zindagi ka maza hum se poochiyee "ek pal mein ek sadi ka maza hum se poochiye do din ki zindagi ka maza hum se poochiyee bhole hain rafta rafta inhien muddatoo mein hum kistoon mein khudkushi ka maza hum se poochiyee aghaaz ashiqi ka maza ap janiyee anjaam ashiqi ka maza hum se poochiyee hansne ka shok hum ko bhi tha ap ki tarah hansyee magarhansi ka maza hum se poochiyee woh jan hi gaye ke hume un se pyar hai ankhoon ki mukhbari ka maza hum se poochiyee jalte diyoon mein jalte gharoon jaisi zoo kahan sarkaar roshni ka maza hum se poochiyee hum toba karke mar gaye kabal ajal khumaar tuheen e maykashi ka maza hum se poochiyee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sweetoo 0 Posted June 25, 2004 thanx rukh and nice post :hi: very nice umair.zm kisse ko manaoon yeh jee chahta hai hansoon aur hansaon yeh jee chahta hai sire rah aanchal woh rukh se hata dien k phir zakham khaon yeh jee chahta hai mujhe jaam aisa nazar se pilla de ghamoon ko bhulaoon yeh jee chahta hai k ab bin tumhare basr kaise ho ge mien un ko sunaoon yeh jee chahta hai tabahi ka ehsaas apne dilla ker unhain azmaon yeh jee chahta hai baharoon ka mausam mujhe raas aaye mien ghunche khilaon yeh jee chahta hai mujhe un se ulfat huee ja rahe hai mien un ko bataon yeh jee chahta hai ujaale akhuwat k phelein jahan mien dia woh jalaon yeh jee chahta hai diya dars ulfat ka Iqbal tum ne jahan ko sunaoon yeh jee chahta hai. Sweetoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 25, 2004 sweeto jie app ka jee bohut acha chahita hia so nice posting " (bhool) kahan main kahan sath taira mairee soch kitni fazool thi mujhay muaaf ker mairay humsafar, tujhay chahna mairee bhool thi main nay khud ko khud hi mita diya, jo hisaab tha woh chuka diya jo bhuree gaee mairee mang main woh tairay kadmoon ki dhool thi na kabhi zubaan say shikwa kiya pass_e_purda baith ker ro liya zara daikh aa ker o sungdil tairee bayrukhee bhi kabool thi. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 25, 2004 salam, very nice umair bohot bohot aachi lagi *aee! Kash tu bhi sunta kabhi ah-haton ki gunj tu bhi meri tarhan se kabhi dhoonta mujhe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 25, 2004 Koi bina pooche meri yadon main sama jaata hai gar yehi hai muhabbat to haan! Woh mera mehboob hai Uske honton se Kahi jaane waali her baat Sachi lagti hai Gar yehi hai aitmaad To haan! Mujhe usper aitbaar hai Koi bhi baat jo Usse munsalik ho jaye Achi lagti hai Gar yehi hai ulfat To haan! mujhe usse pyaar hai Har shakhs se Jo usse jaanta bhi na ho Uske bare main poochhna Gar yehi hai deewaangi To haan! main uske liye paagal hoon Wo jo paas aaye to Dil dharrakta hai Aur paaas jaane to ji machalta hai Gar yehi hai nasha To haan! mujh per uska khumaar hai Usse meelon durr rehna Phir bhi her waqt woh mere paas hai aisa lagna gar yehi hai chaahat to haan! main ussi ko chahti hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 25, 2004 thanx ruby :hi: nice shair :) mhn >> nice posting yara Iqraar "Koi bina pooche meri yadon main sama jaata hai gar yehi hai muhabbat to haan! Woh mera mehboob hai Uske honton se Kahi jaane waali her baat Sachi lagti hai Gar yehi hai aitmaad To haan! Mujhe usper aitbaar hai Koi bhi baat jo Usse munsalik ho jaye Achi lagti hai Gar yehi hai ulfat To haan! mujhe usse pyaar hai Har shakhs se Jo usse jaanta bhi na ho Uske bare main poochhna Gar yehi hai deewaangi To haan! main uske liye paagal hoon Wo jo paas aaye to Dil dharrakta hai Aur paaas jaane to ji machalta hai Gar yehi hai nasha To haan! mujh per uska khumaar hai Usse meelon durr rehna Phir bhi her waqt woh mere paas hai aisa lagna gar yehi hai chaahat to haan! main ussi ko chahta hoon :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sweetoo 0 Posted June 26, 2004 very nice umair.zm,mhn and ruby Mohabbat..! jab se wapis aaya hai tou kuch badla lagta hai sochoon ki dehleez per terey yaad ka pehra hai koi ansoon palkoon tak aa ker bhi ruk jaata hai merey baad karo ge kya? aaj yeh us ne pooch hai aaj hi marna thehra tha aaj he us ne roka hai khawab sajaana aankhoon mien jeevan bhar ka dhoka hai..! saath chalo ge manzil tak tum ne phir kya socha hai haath machienoon k andar ankh mien tera chehra hai. Sweetoo. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 27, 2004 thanx sweeto :hi: so nice colecton urs too KarooN MaiN YaaD "Karoon Main Yaad Magar,Kis Tarhan Bholaaon Usay Ghazal banaya Karoon Or Gungunaaon Usay Wo khaar khaar Hai Shakh-e-Gulab Ki Manind Main Zakham Zakham Hoon,Phir Bhi Galay Lagaaon Usay Ye Log Tazkiray Kartay Hain Apnay Logon Kai Main Kaise Baat Karoon Or Kahan Se Laaon Usay Jo Hamsafar Sar-e-Manzil Bichar Raha Hai..FaraZ! Ajab Nahi Hai Agar Yaad Bhi Na Aaon Usay Jab Se Tumhari Yaad Main,Main Gumm Ho chuka Hoon Main Abb Main Nahi Raha , Tumm Ho Chuka Hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 27, 2004 salam, very nice umair ,mhn,sweetoo Tab yaad bohot tum aate ho Jab raat ki nagan dastee hai Nas nas main zehar utarta hai Jab chand ki kirnee teezi se Is dil ko cheer ke aate hain Jab ankh ke under hi ansoo Zanjeeroon main bandh jate hain Sab jazboon per chaa jate hai Tab yaad bohot tum aate ho Jab dard ki jhanjer bajtee hai Jab raks ghamoo ka hota hai Khowaboon ki taal per sare dukh Wehshat ke saaz bajatee hain Gate hain khowahish ki le main Masti main jhoomte jate hain Sab jazboon per chaa jate hain Tab yaad bohot tum aate ho Tab yaad bohot tum aate ho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
