ManPaki 0 Posted March 29, 2003 meray saathi meri yey rooh meray jism say parwaaz kar jaye tu... laut ana... meri bay khuwaab raatoon kay azaboon par sisaktay shahar ma tum bhi zara si dair ko rukna meray bay noor hontoon ki duaoon par tum apni sard peeshaani ka pathar rakh kar ro dena bas itni baat kah dena "mujay tum say muhabbat hai" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted March 29, 2003 salam wah wah ....nice stuff......i don't agree with u cute_ooky......its good but it isn't that good :P ....ghalib was sum1 special......"and those other old ones" were brilliant 2.... hmm so u think he is the best ever?? :P come on! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooooolll 0 Posted March 29, 2003 anyway .......its ur choice....:P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_ooky 0 Posted March 30, 2003 Awwwwww that was so sweet. Tears are floating in my eyes now. Keep it up yo. Aww I can't say how much I liked it. It's very nice. If u wrote it pal.....then u r the greates poet ever..... better than ghalib and those other old ones...... but if someone else wrote it, well......... still......... thanx for sharing it. good stuff. Keep it up. ur friend.......ooky! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ManPaki 0 Posted March 30, 2003 thanks for comments <b> "FARAAR " Main ne tumahri yaad ko Shehur ki gaali kochoon mein tuqseem kerdiya hai Taakey aaney jaaney waley logon ki dhool Unhein dhundla kerdey Main ne tumahri mohabbat ko buhat sare logon mein Baanth diya hai takey yeh kumzoor perh jaey Aur khod ko buhat sari ankhoon ke liey tuqseem kerdiya hai Taakey judayi ka dukh mujeh talaash kerta rahey Aur kabhi kamiyaab nah hosakhey </b> Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 21, 2003 hello! ManPaki kiya baat hai aap ki aap ne to sab ko maath dedi :) keep it up bye kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iqra 0 Posted August 26, 2003 ie soch kar ke gham ke kharidar aa gae ham khwab bechne sare bazar aa gae har bar awaz de ke chup gai zindagi ham itne sada dil the ke har bar aa gae Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
