*R@Z@* 0 Posted September 4, 2004 Na Poocho Main Kesay Jiaye Ja Raha Hoon Bas Ik Khawaab Say Dil Ko Behla Raha Hoon Ya Sochoon Ki Waadi Khialoon K Chashmay Main Yadoon K Pholoon Say Mehka Raha Hoon Ghum_e_Deher Kia Hay Bala Main Kia Janoon Abhi Teri Zulfoon Ko Suljha Raha Hoon Yahi Hay Mera Fan Nahi Or Kuch Bhi Tera Aks Lafzoon Ko Pehna Raha Hoon Suna Hay Preshaan Hay Wo Bhi Bichar Ker Usay Bhool Ker Main Bhi Pachta Raha Hoon Gila Bayrukhi Ka Hay Kion Mugh Say Yaro Jo Mugh Ko Mila Main Wo Lota Raha Hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*R@Z@* 0 Posted September 4, 2004 Ik Chehra Jo Chasm_E_Khawaab Main Tha Aks Us Ka Her Ik Gulaab Main Tha Sukh K Sapnay Thay Us Ki Aankhoon Main Dukh To Sara Meray Hisaab Main Tha Hamnafs Mugh Say Bayrukhi K Baad Mubtila Khud Bhi Ik Azaab Main Tha Ik Fasana Jisay Kahin Chahat Namukammal Her Ik Kataab Main Tha Nasha Jo Us Ki Aankh Main Tha Fani* Wo Bhala Kab Kisi Sharaab Main Tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 5, 2004 Raza Good Starting! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*R@Z@* 0 Posted September 5, 2004 Thanx Nadan ji Bas Aap nay really mughay bohat hoslay dia hay & thanx again 4 dis.main try keroon ga k main achi poetry send keroon or haan ager mugh say kahin koi mistake ho jaye to plz is baray main mughay zaroor bataye ga ok Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*R@Z@* 0 Posted September 5, 2004 Main Kisi Ki Yadoon Ka Aasmaan Hoon Main Kisi K Khawaboon Ki Kehkshaan Hoon Raha Her Zamanay Mai Ziker Jis Ka Main Hi Baykasi Ki Wo Dastaan Hoon Jo Khoo Gia Hay Talaash_e_Manzil Main Main Hi Khawahishoon Ka Wo Karaan Hoon Mughay Sooch Na Hi Talaash Ker Tu Main To Ik Khiyaal_e_Baynishaan Hoon Jo Kisi Ki Aamd Ka Muntazir Hay Main Wo Ujra Hua Aashiaan Hoon Meri Zaat Mugh Say Bicher Gai Hay Mughay Koi Dhoonday K Main Kahan Hoon Jahan Mugh Ko Choora Tha Aaj Tak Main Unhi Khawaab Rastoon K Dermiaan Hoon Tu Kahan Hay A K Deakh Tu Bhi Teri Pur Aman Waadi Main Bay Aman Hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*R@Z@* 0 Posted September 5, 2004 (edited) PLZ TELL ME ABT DAT DID U LIKE MY POETRY OR NOT OK I M WAITING 4 UR REPLY BYE Edited September 5, 2004 by *R@Z@* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*R@Z@* 0 Posted September 5, 2004 (edited) ANY ONE CAN TELL ME ABT DAT HOW CAN I ATTACH ANY FILE OF POETRY WID DIS PAGE PLZ HELP ME COZ I M NEW HERE :( Edited September 5, 2004 by *R@Z@* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*R@Z@* 0 Posted September 6, 2004 Aqel Say Bala Raha Main Bhi Nisaboon Ki Terha Wo Bhi Kuch Uljha Hua Hay Meray Khwaboon Ki Terha Main Sumnder Hoon Koi Rait Ka Derya To Nahi Tum Kisi rooz Bars Jao Sahaboon Ki Terha Hijer To Hijer Hua Kerta Hay Lakin Mugh per Sohbat_e_Yaar Bhi Guzri Hay Azaboon Ki Terha Ab Bhi Us Shokh Ki Khushboo Hay Taswer Main Jo Mehakta Hua Milta Tha Gulaboon Ki Terha Waqt K Sath Jawan Or Hua Us ka Nasha Us Ki Taseer Hay Hay Goya K Sharaboob Ki Terha A Dost Bohat Raat Hui Gher ko Chalo DerBader Yuoon Na Phiroo Hum Say Kharaboon Ki Terha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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