Poetry Competition Legion Of Powers Vs Knight Riders

[Zaini 22]

Rules

1. Both teams 3/3 Poetries share karain geen. Yani aik team sy 3 members is Compeition main particiapte karain gain.

2. Mmebers apnay Team color k sath he post karain gain,

3. Repated Poetry ko reject kar dia jaye ga.

4. Last date Wed 16 June 2010 hai.

Toppic Is Tanhai

Best Of Luck Both Teams

[shahabi 23]

[imi.munib 0]

English poetry hosakti ha ??

[shahabi 23]

i tihnk urdu poetry

[Zaini 22]

English poetry hosakti ha ??

Munin Tanhi URdu ka word hai ya English ka

[SimpleRayyan 4]

ok

[sobe 12]

aaah is comp may to main kuch kar hi naheen sakta hoon :banghead:

[imi.munib 0]

~~ Tanhai from My Side ~~

Katoon si chubhti hai Tanhai

Angaroon si sulagti hai Tanhai

Koi aa kar hum dono ko hansa de

Main rota hoon rone lagti hai Tanhai

Jab bhi tere Hisar se nikalna chaha

Yaadoon k beej bone lagti hai Tanhai

Raat k kisi hise main yeh bhi Bewafa ho jati hai

Main nahi sota sone lagti hai Tanhai

Tum se judaa ho kar is se hi Dil laga lia hai

Mar sa jata hoon jab khone lagti hai Tanhai..

~~* Legion Of Powers *~~

[shahabi 23]

Good Munib

[SimpleRayyan 4]

""Main Or Mari Tanhai""

Rehtey Hain Saath Saath Mai Aur Meri Tanhai

Kartey Hain Raaz Ki Baat Mai Aur Meri Tanhai

Din To Guzar Hi Jata Hai Logon Ki Bheer Mai

Kartey Hain Basar Raat Main Meri Tanhai

Saanson Ka Kya Bharosa Kab Chor Jain Saath

Laikin Rahain Gay Saath Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Aaye Na Tumhe Yaad Kabhi Bhul Kar Bhi Hum

Kartey Hain Tumhe Yaad Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Aa Ke Paas Kyon Door Ho Gaye Hum Se

Kartey Hain Teri Talash Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Tum Ko Rakhain Gay Saath Zeenat Bana Kay Ghar Ki

Reh Jain Phir Na Tanha Main Aur Meri Tanhai

[SimpleRayyan 4]

weldone imi

[Wise_Guy 44]

[chinky 31]

aaah is comp may to main kuch kar hi naheen sakta hoon :banghead:

I THINK ..sawaye ultay ans daynay kay ap ko aur kuch ata bee nahi hay.......

V niCe....imi ,rayyan&wise.....:yes:ALL THE BEST.....

[SimpleRayyan 4]

safwaan bhai weldone yaar gud ........i like it

[SimpleRayyan 4]

I THINK ..sawaye ultay ans daynay kay ap ko aur kuch ata bee nahi hay.......

V niCe....imi ,rayyan&wise.....:yes:ALL THE BEST.....

hahaha......chinky is kukker ko aik yhi kaam to ata hai...mjhy to yakeen nahi ho raah k ye abhi tk team main hai ...........

thx 4 like poetryyyyy

[Wise_Guy 44]

safwaan bhai weldone yaar gud ........i like it

Thanx Kakay

[SimpleRayyan 4]

Thanx Kakay

u wc.....

[shahabi 23]

weldone rayyan

last is me

so stay tuned......

[SimpleRayyan 4]

weldone rayyan

last is me

so stay tuned......

thxxx

nw jeldi se ker do post yaha

[shahabi 23]

Tanhayi Ki Yeh Kuch Aisi Ajab Raat Hai

Tujhse Judi Hui Har Yaad Mere Saath Hai

Kis Kadar Ki Thi Mohabbat Humne Tumse

Soch Kar Hui Aaj Ashqon Se Mulaqaat Hai

Kaisa Junoon Tha Us Ishq Mein Dil Ro Aya

Machal Utha Phir Se Har Woh Jazbaat Hai

Tu Mujhko Bewafa Keh Gaya Najane Kyo

Gar Chahna Bewafayi Hai , To Bewafayi Ki Raat Hai

Tadap Raha Hai Tanha Chand Bina Chandni K

Is Andheri Raat Mein Aaj Kuch Aur Hi Baat Hai

Yu Aye Zindagi Mujhe Akela Chordh Diya Tune

Ke Kafan Odh Rahi Mujh Par Aaj Yeh Raat Hai

[SimpleRayyan 4]

Tanhayi Ki Yeh Kuch Aisi Ajab Raat Hai

Tujhse Judi Hui Har Yaad Mere Saath Hai

Kis Kadar Ki Thi Mohabbat Humne Tumse

Soch Kar Hui Aaj Ashqon Se Mulaqaat Hai

Kaisa Junoon Tha Us Ishq Mein Dil Ro Aya

Machal Utha Phir Se Har Woh Jazbaat Hai

Tu Mujhko Bewafa Keh Gaya Najane Kyo

Gar Chahna Bewafayi Hai , To Bewafayi Ki Raat Hai

Tadap Raha Hai Tanha Chand Bina Chandni K

Is Andheri Raat Mein Aaj Kuch Aur Hi Baat Hai

Yu Aye Zindagi Mujhe Akela Chordh Diya Tune

Ke Kafan Odh Rahi Mujh Par Aaj Yeh Raat Hai

weldone shahabi bhai

[SimpleRayyan 4]

All poetry submitted All

[Wise_Guy 44]

SOBE, RAMZ, MAHI kahan hain aap sab

[Uncleg 2]

The last verse seems to be out of rhyme or rhythm. In my opinion, it should have been "Na janey tum kahan per chhore aye ho Nadeem ous ko ..... Usay phir dhoond laao tum mujay tanhy dasti hey". A very touching piece of poetry. I do like it. Keep it up wise_guy. Your choice is a master piece on the subject of lonliness "Tanhy".

[SimpleRayyan 4]

SOBE, RAMZ, MAHI kahan hain aap sab

bhaaag gaye hain wohhhhhh lolzzzz