molajut 0 Posted October 29, 2004 Blue Eyes> thanks a lot aap nay to kuch zayada he tareef kar di kher mein to bas Thanks he kar sakta hun aap ka aur aap ki posting bhi shandaar thi..Carry on Bitha K pehlu mein yaar ko Ghalib Jo kuch nahin kartay Kamaal kartay hain Haath chootay bhi to rishtay nahi choota kertay....... waqt ki shaakh say lamhay nahi toota kertay....... jisnay pairon kay nishaan bhi nahi choray peechay...... uss musaafir ka pata bhi nahi poocha kertay....... tu nay awaaz nahi di kabhi murh ker werna....... hum kai saddiyaan tujhay ghoom kay dekha kertay....... beh rahi hay teri jaanib hi zameen pairon ki....... thakh gaye dortay daryaaon ka peecha kertay.... jis ki awaaz main silwat ho nighaahon main shikan...... AEsi tasveer kay tukray nahi jora kertay....... shehed jeenay ka mila kerta hay thora thora...... jaanay walon kay liay dil nahi tora kertay....... lag kay saahil say jo behta hay usay behnay do...... aisay darya ka kabhi rukh nahi mora kertay....... haath chootay bhi tu rishtay nahi choota kertay....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blue-eyes 0 Posted October 31, 2004 syra>>Nice Kamal..ooohoo i mean nice shair s :D ..and thanks for appriciating.. Molajut>>Tareef Us KHuda ki jis nay ye jahan banaya :D ....nice KAMAL from ur side 2! thanks for appriciation... :) Mohabbat Jab Laho Ban Kar Ragoon Main Sar Saraey To Koe Bhola Hua Chahra Aachanak Yaad Aey To Tehar Jana , Samajh Laina , K Ab Wapas Palatnay Ka Aamal Aagaz Hota Hay Qadam Mushkil Say Uthtay Hon, Erada Dagmagaey To Koe Madham SAy Lehjay Main Tumhay Wapas Bulaey TO Tehar Jana , Samajh Laina , K Ab Wapas Palatnay Ka Aamal Aagaz Hota Hay Kabhe Tanhaeon Ka Dard Aankhon Main Samaey To Koe Lamha Guzeshta Chahaton ka Jab Sataey To Tehar Jana , Samajh Laina , K Ab Wapas Palatnay Ka Aamal Aagaz Hota Hay Kese Ke Yaad Main Rona , Tumhay Bhee Khoon Rulaey To Aagar Tum Say Tumhara Dil Kese Din Rooth Jaey To Tehar Jana , Samajh Laina , K Ab Wapas Palatnay Ka Aamal Aagaz Hota Hay Kaheen Aanhoneon Ka Dar, Parendoon Ko Udaey To Hawa Jab Pair Say Ek Zard Sa Patta Geraey To Tehar Jana , Samajh Laina , K Ab Wapas Palatnay Ka Aamal Aagaz Hota Hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted November 1, 2004 Blue Eyes> Nice one aj youn mosaam nay dien jasnee muhabbat ki kahbar phoot kar ronay lagay hay may mohabbat aur tum hum nay junhi kar liya mehsos manzil hay qareeb rastay kohnay lagay hay may mohabbat aur tum chand ki kirnoo nay hum ko is tarha bosa diya devta honay lagay hay may mohabbat aur tum dahar gaya elzam jub say apni hurmat per koi barishien dohnay lagay hay may mohabbat aur tum aj phir mehromion ki dastanay uoorh kar khak may sonay lagay hay may mohabbat aur tum koh gayee hay andaz bihi awaz bihi alfaz bihi kahmoshii dohndnay lagay hay may mohabbat aur tum Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charmer 0 Posted November 2, 2004 bharkaaein meri pyaas ko aksar teri aankhein sahra mera chahra hei, sumandar teri aankhein khaali hoi jo shaam-a-ghareebaan ki hatheli per kia kia na lutati rahein gohar teri aankhein ab tak meri yaadon say mitaye nahin mitta bheegi hoi ek shaam ka manzar, teri aankhein yoon dekhtey rehna osay acha nahin wo kaanch ka paikar hei to pathar teri aankhein Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blue-eyes 0 Posted November 3, 2004 nice post by all Apni Nazroon se jo gir jaye woh chehra na bana Mujh ko Lamhe-a-Fursat Ka Khilona na Bana Saink'Roon Rastey Hain Ajnabi ho Janey Ke Tark karna hai tou Talook ka bahana na bana Jhoot Ehsaas Ki Qandeel Ko Boojha Deta Hai Muhjey Insaan samjh Khuda ka Farishta na bana Apni Yaadein tu mere Dil main basi rehne dey Is Mehaktey Huay Gulzaar Ko Sehra na bana Mein tu Pehle Hi Zakhum liye Phirta Hoon Muhjey ab MeMoMs Dard-e-tamasha na bana Thak gaeen Hain MeMoNs Ehsaas ki Aakhain Naqsh-e-Deewar per ab koi Afsana na bana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blue-eyes 0 Posted November 8, 2004 Aatish-e-hijr hai aur mein hon Musalsal sabar hai aur mein hon Kabhi to aa keh khushi mere aangun barse ge Abhi to bas abar hai aur mein hon Saamnay tu hai aur mere labon Pe musKurahat Dil par aik jabar hai aur mein hon Itna tanha ho Chuka hon... ZindaGi Qabar hai aur mein hon... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted November 8, 2004 Blueyes> zindagi qaber hai aur mein haun.........itna dard but nice Garmi-a-Hasrat nakam say jal jatay hain!!!!!!!!!! Ham 'Charagon' ke tarha Sham say jal jatay hain Shama jes 'Aag' main jalti hay 'Numaish' k leya!! Ham ese 'Aag' main 'Gumnam' say jal jatay hain Jab bhe ata hay mayra 'Naam' tayray 'Naam' k sath Janay qun Loog mayray 'Naam' say jal jatay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted November 8, 2004 khamosh chahatoon ki mehak is taraf bhi hai ..... jo mairay dil mein hai woh kasak us taraf bhi hai .... hain is taraf bhi taiz bohat dil ki dharkanien ...... betaab choriyon ki khanak us taraf bhi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blue-eyes 0 Posted November 9, 2004 syra>>haan derd waqae bhut hai in shair mein..thanks for liking :)and ur post is also very nice.. saamia>>nice work.. main lafzon mai kuch bhi izhar nahi karta is ka matlab ye nahi k main tujhe pyar nahi karta chahta hoon main tujhe aaj bhi par teri soch mei apna waqt bekar nahi karta tamasha naa ban jaaye kahi mohabbat meri isi liye apne dard ko namoodaar nahi karta jo kuch mila hai usi mei khush hoon main tere liye khuda se taqraar nahi karta par kuch tou baat hai teri fitrat mein zalim warna Mein tujhe chahne ki khataa bar bar nahi karta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted November 10, 2004 Blueyes> zaber10st yah khata baar baar nahi kerta.......wow..... saamia> u r 2 Gud MAGAR TUM NAHI THEY ... AAJ TO WAHAN BOHAT SHOOR THA PANCHION NEY KHUB GEET GAAI IN GEETON MAIN IS SHOOR MAIN HUM TO WAHAN THEY PAR TUM NAHI THEY AJ PHIR WAHAN ZOOR ZOOR BADAL GARJEE BAARISH OUR TUFAN AAI HUM TO WAHAN BOHAT BHEEGE PAR TUM NAHI THEY LAGTA HAI KE WAHAN WAQT THAM SA GAYA HAI SAB RUK SA GAYA HAI HUM TO WAHAN WAQT KE SATH SAATH THEY PAR TUM NAHI THEY WAHAN HUM TO TERAY DEEWANE THEY KAASH KE AGAR TUM HOTEY MAGAR KABHI TUM NAHI THEY SOOCHA THA WAHAN EK PYARA SA GHAROONDA HUM MILKAR BANAAIN GEY HUM TO WAHAN MITTI LEKAR KHARE RAHEE MAGAR TUM NAHI THEY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted November 12, 2004 zakam hi dil pe lagane aao shab_e_furkat mein jalane aao dharkano ne tu sataya hai bout hahaton se bhi darrane aao chata hoon sila milay hum khoon ke aansoon rulane aao hain agher boj teri hasti pe safa_e_hasti se mitane aao sham inhen kaho k sabhi aahe hain tum bhi humhen kaak mein milane aao Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charmer 0 Posted November 16, 2004 Ek kawaab hei os khawaab ko khona bhi nahin hei Tabeer k dhaagay mein paroona bhi nahin hei Liptaa hei merey dil say kisi raaz ki sorat woh shakhs k jis ko mera hona bhi nahin hei Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blue-eyes 0 Posted December 15, 2004 Molajut>>Sitam to yeh hai ke woh bhi na ban saka humara Humne jis ke sahe ghum bhi Khushi ki tarhan very nice..great! Pagal Aankhoon wali larki! itney mehngay khawab na dekho pechtaao gi!! soch ka saara ujlaa kundan zabt ki raakh main ghul jaey ga kecchay pakkay rishtoon ki khushboo ka resham khul jaey ga! tum kiya jano? khawab,safar ki dhoop k taishey khawab,adhoori raat ka douzakh khawab,khayaloon ka pechtaawa khawaboon ki manzil ruswaaii! khawaboon ka hasil tanhaaii!! tum kiyaa jano? mehangay khawab khareednaa hoon to Aankhain baichnaa pertii hain ya rishtey bhoolna pertay hain Andeshoon ki rait na phaankoo piyaas ki out saraab na dekhoo itney mehngay khawab na dekhoo!! thak jaoo gi!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted December 15, 2004 Blue Eyes> Thanks for appreciation ..and who is this Pagal aankhoon wali larki :P Pagal aankhoon wali ya Neeli aankhoon wali :D Meian ney sumjha Pyaar shaffaf dhandey meethey pani ka jharna hai Pyaar ghaney pair ki ghani jhaya Pyaar baharo’n mein barish ki dhandhi bhuwaar Pyaar sardiyo’n mein malagji dhoop ki gharmi Pyaaarr sub kuch paa lainey ka naam hai Lehkin! Mein ney jana Pyaar dhoka hai, fareb hai Pyaar khawab hai sairab hai Pyaar ghazao’n ki khusk hawa Pyaaaarrr garmiyo’n ki tapti dobaher Pyaaarrr apna sub kuchhh kho deney ka naam hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Blue-eyes 0 Posted December 27, 2004 molajut>>neeli ankhoon wali ko tou mein janti hon lakin pagal ankhon wali pata nahi koon hai..aab neeli ankhoon wali pagal ankhoon wali tou nahi bun sekti na..ya ankkhain neeli hoon ge ya pagal.. :D Kitne Aziyat Say Uss Nay Mujh Ko Bhulaya Ho ga... Mere Yadoon Nay Ussay Khub Rulaya Ho Ga.. Baat Be-Baat Aankh Uss Ki Jo Chalki Hoo Gi....... Uss Nay Chahray Ko Bazuoon Main Chupaya Ho Ga Soocha Hoo Ga Uss Nay Din Main Kaye Baar Mujhy....... Naam Hathele Par Bhe Likh Likh Kay Mitaya Ho Ga... Jahan Us Nay Mera Ziker Suna Hoo Ga Kisi Say.. Uss Ki Aankhoon Main Koe Aansoo Tu Aya Hoo Ga.. Raat Kay Bhegnay Tak Neind Na Aye Ho gi Tujhy........ Tuu Nay Takeye Ko Bhe Senay Say Lagaya Ho ga.. Hoo Kay Nidhal mere Yadoon Say Tuu Nay Jana......... Mere Tasveer Pay Sar Apna Tikaya Hoo Ga...... Poocha Hoo Ga Jo Kisi Nay Tere Halat Ka Sabab.... Tuu Nay Batoon Main Khub Us Say Chupaya Ho Ga.... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites