sabah 97 Posted June 30, 2012 aslam o alikum kase hai sab.. here iam................... with new competition guess karo sab? poetry ka he competition hai mein ek word bat rahi hoon sab ku is word se share karni hai poetry tu word ye hai aziyat kuch rules bat rahi hoon jinhein sab ne folllow karna hai `1 10 july tak sab ne share karni hai apne poetry raat ke 9"00 bache k baad kisi ke bhi sharing except nahi ki jayegi 2 sirf ek poetry share ki jaye.. 3 edit wala thread except nahi kiya jayege 4 same poetry share mat ki jaye isey halaat mein jine pehle post ki usey except kiya jayega dosre ku nahi. 5 koi behias nahi ki jayegi .. samj gye sab .. jise kuch samjh na aya ho wo poch sakta hai shukriya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sho_shweet 657 Posted June 30, 2012 nice,,, me try krungi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sho_shweet 657 Posted June 30, 2012 kisi ko alwida kehna,,, bht takleef deta hy... umeden toot jaati haen... yaqeen per be-yaqeeni ka keher kuch aesa chrta hy... dikhai kuch nhi deta. sujhai kuch nhi deta... dua k lafz hontoon pe musalsal kapkapaaty haen... kisi khwahish k andeshy ... zehn mae dorr jaty haen... gumaan kuch aesy hota hy... k jesy mil na paaen gy... ye gehry zakhm furqat k kisi sy sill na paaen gy... kbhi aesa b ho ya,,, RAB....!!! duaeen maan leta hy.... tou koi moajza kr dy to aesa kr b skta hy... mery haathun ki janib dekh inhaen TOU bhar b skta hy... judai ki ye theekhi daar dil ka khoun krti hy... judai ki AZIYAT sy .. mera dill ab b drta hy... judai do ghri ki ho to koi dill ko smjhaye... judai chaar pal ki ho to koi dill ko behlaaye... judai umer bhar ki ho... to kya charaa kry koi... k ik milny ki hasrat mae bhala kab tk jiye koi.... mery moula karam ker dy...tou aesa kr b skta hy... mery haathun ki janib dekh inhaen tou bhar b skta hy........... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sho_shweet 657 Posted June 30, 2012 lo kaam khatam hua mera.... its not best,, but better hy.... kaam chly ga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sabah 97 Posted July 3, 2012 last time ki tarha mujhe lagta hai is bar b humdunu he part lenge Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sho_shweet 657 Posted July 3, 2012 ary part le lo koi wrna mae bilamuqabla winner bn jaungi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noreen 59 Posted July 8, 2012 Chara Saazo,n Ki Aziyat Nahin Dekhi Jatii Tere Beemaar Ki Haalat Nahi Dekhi Jaati Dene Waale Ki Mashiyat Pe Hai Sab Kuch Mauqoof Maang Ne Waale Ki Haajat Nahin Dekhi Jaati Din Behel Jaata Hai Lekin Tere Dewaano’n Ki Shaam Hoti Hai Toh Wehshat Nahin Dekhi Jaati Tamkanat Se Tujhe Rukhsat Toh Kiya Hai Lekin Hum Se Inn Aankho’n Ki Hasrat Nahin Dekhi Jaati Kaun Utraa Hai Yeh Aafaaq Ki Pehnaayi Mein Aaina Khaane Ki Hairat Nahin Dekhi Jaati Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noreen 59 Posted July 8, 2012 is baar noreen bheee hai SR Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sho_shweet 657 Posted July 8, 2012 nice sharing noreen Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sabah 97 Posted July 10, 2012 bas timing khatam ap duno kua bara shukriya part lene k liye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sabah 97 Posted July 10, 2012 jab part sirf 2 loagu ne liya hai tu vote koun dega chalo hum 3no milke k faisla karte hai mera vote sho shweet ku jata hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noreen 59 Posted July 11, 2012 lo fir bera grq ho jaye ga Cy da Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noreen 59 Posted July 11, 2012 jay koi lbya e na ethye ty Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sho_shweet 657 Posted July 11, 2012 thanx sabah... rehny do competetion start ker k aik ghalti ker di hy na wohi kafi hy fesle ko kya krna hy?? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sho_shweet 657 Posted July 13, 2012 koi b nhi winner,,, sb looser Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
noreen 59 Posted July 18, 2012 a ty sai a SR koi howe ty kry Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
