umair.zm 0 Posted August 5, 2004 so good to c u after a long time :hi: nice sher :) Yeh jo maray tarey qareeb hein Yeh Gulaab kitnay ajeeb hein Yeh moqadroon ki baraat hein Yeh kisi kisi ke naseeb hein Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted August 7, 2004 bohut khoob dosto :hi: cheharaa meraa thaa nigaahe.n us kii Khaamushii me.n bhii vo baate.n us kii mere chehare pe Gazal likhatii ga_ii.n sher kahatii hu_ii aa.Nkhe.n us kii shoKh lamho.n kaa pataa dene lagii.n tez hotii hu_ii saa.Nse.n us kii aise mausam bhii guzaare ham ne subahe.n jab apanii thii.n shaame.n us kii dhyaan me.n us ke ye aalam thaa kabhii aa.Nkh mahataab kii yaade.n us kii faisalaa mauj-e-havaa ne likkhaa aa.Ndhiyaa.N merii bahaare.n us kii niind is soch se TuuTii aksar kis tarah kaTatii hai.n raate.n us kii duur rah kar bhii sadaa rahatii hai mujh ko thaame hue baahe.n us kii Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 7, 2004 sooooo nice bindu :hi: dekh lo khuaab magar khuaab ka charcha na karo log jal jayan ge sooraj ki tamanna na karo waqt ka kaya hai kisi pal bhi badal sakta hai ho sake tum se to tum mujh pe bharosa na karo kirchiyan tootay hoye aks ki chubh jayan gi aur kuch roz abhi aiina dekha na karo ajnabi lagne lage khud tumhain apna wajood apne din raat ko itna bhi akela na karo khuaab bachhon ke khelonon ki tarah hote hain khuaab dekha na karo khuaab dikhaya na karo bekhiyali main kabhi ungliyan jal jayain gi raakh guzre hoye lamhon ki kureedah na karo . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 9, 2004 wahhhhhhhhhhh umair wah bohot khub :y: Peeta hoo iss garaaz say ke jaal jaye jawani , Wallah kesi shaoq ke mare nahi peeta ,,,,,! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 9, 2004 thanx adil :) jazabati sher :D KUCCH TO APNEE NISHAANEEYAN RAAKH JAA "KUCCH TO APNEE NISHAANEEYAN RAAKH JAA IN KITAABON MEIN TITLIYAAN RAKKH JAA LOG TANHA NA LAUT JAAYEIN KAHEEN TU RAASTON MEIN KAHAANIYAN RAKKH JAA HO RAHA HAI AGAR JUDA MUJHSE MERI AANKHON PE UNGLIYAAN RAKKH JAA AAJ TOOFAN BHI AKELAA HAI TU KINAARON PE KASHTIYAAN RAKKH JAA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
harris 0 Posted November 4, 2004 hi,nice shair gaya Tu kahin bhi rahe sar pe tere ilzaam to hai tere haathon ki lakiiron mein mera naam to hai ....... Mujhko tu apnaa bana ya na bana teri Khushi tu zamaane mein mere naam se badnaam to hai ..... Mere hisse mein koi jaam na aayaa na sahi teri mehfil mein mere naam koi shaam to hai .... Dekh kar log mujhe naam tera lete hain is pe main Khush hoon muhabbat ka ye anjaam to hai ..... Woh sitamagar hi sahi dekh ke usko "Sabir" shukr is dil-e-bimaar ko aaraam to hai ...Sabir Jalalabadi -------------------------------------- Harris :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted February 22, 2005 Muhabbat bandagi hain iss main taan ki Qurbaat na manng Jese choon jaye uss ke poojaa nahi karty ..................! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted February 24, 2005 :hi: kahan han sab loog , jo ho sake tau chala aa essi ki khater tau buhot UDAS hain aik shakhss tere jane say ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted March 1, 2005 :hi: kahan han sab loog ,jo ho sake tau chala aa essi ki khater tau buhot UDAS hain aik shakhss tere jane say ! kahan gaye sab ke sab :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saeedmomin 0 Posted May 6, 2005 kahan gaye sab ke sab :( Salam to aal friends :hi: thats very nice adil bhai keep it up:y: umeed hai k ye shair bhee aap ko pasand aye ga,irshad hai k: undefined Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saeedmomin 0 Posted May 6, 2005 sahil ki bheegi reet pe leikha thaa uss ka naam lihron nay choom choom ke uss ko mitta deya .. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saeedmomin 0 Posted May 6, 2005 [Aik baat tum say pooch bolo jawab do ge ye Husaan ye jawani sarkar keya karo ge Honto ki ye muskurahat bechon tau khareed longa , manzoor ho tau bolo Aanmool daam donga , magar aik baar muskra do , aik baar muskura do !] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 6, 2005 [Aik baat tum say pooch bolo jawab do ge ye Husaan ye jawani sarkar keya karo ge Honto ki ye muskurahat bechon tau khareed longa , manzoor ho tau bolo Aanmool daam donga , magar aik baar muskra do , aik baar muskura do !] salam saeed sahib :hi: wahhhhhhh je buhot khub :) iss say barh ke main tera itbaar keya karta main nay apni zindagi bana leya hain tujh ko Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MOHTARMA 0 Posted May 7, 2005 :hi: :hi: ASSLAM_O_ALAIKUM WARAHMATULLAH HI WABARAKATUHU....HOW R U ALL......HOPE F99 ...I AM NEW HERE......WELL HERE IS SOME POETRY 4 AL OF U..HOPE U LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ' JAB DARD NAHI THA SINAY MAIN TAB KHAK MAZA THA JINAY MAIN ABB KAY SHAID HUM BHI ROIN SAWAN KAY MAHINAY MAIN YADON KA GHAM KIA HOTA HAI MALOM NA THA ANJANON KO SAHIL PAR KHARY HO KAR HUM NAY DEKHA AKSAR TOFANON KO ABB KAY SHAID HUM BHI ROIN YADOON KAY SAFINAY MAIN JAB DARD NAHI THA SENAY MAIN TAB KHAK MAZA THA JEENT MAIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MOHTARMA 0 Posted May 7, 2005 :hi: :hi: ASSLAM_O_ALAIKUM WARAHMATULLAH HI WABARAKATUHU....HOW R U ALL......HOPE F99 ...I AM NEW HERE......WELL HERE IS SOME POETRY 4 AL OF U..HOPE U LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'WELL ADIL UR POETRY IS GREAT......... JAB DARD NAHI THA SINAY MAIN TAB KHAK MAZA THA JINAY MAIN ABB KAY SHAID HUM BHI ROIN SAWAN KAY MAHINAY MAIN YADON KA GHAM KIA HOTA HAI MALOM NA THA ANJANON KO SAHIL PAR KHARY HO KAR HUM NAY DEKHA AKSAR TOFANON KO ABB KAY SHAID HUM BHI ROIN YADOON KAY SAFINAY MAIN JAB DARD NAHI THA SENAY MAIN TAB KHAK MAZA THA JEENT MAIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MOHTARMA 0 Posted May 7, 2005 :hi: :hi: ASSLAM_O_ALAIKUM WARAHMATULLAH HI WABARAKATUHU....HOW R U ALL......HOPE F99 ...I AM NEW HERE......WELL HERE IS SOME POETRY 4 AL OF U..HOPE U LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'WELL SAEED UR POETRY IS GREAT......... JAB DARD NAHI THA SINAY MAIN TAB KHAK MAZA THA JINAY MAIN ABB KAY SHAID HUM BHI ROIN SAWAN KAY MAHINAY MAIN YADON KA GHAM KIA HOTA HAI MALOM NA THA ANJANON KO SAHIL PAR KHARY HO KAR HUM NAY DEKHA AKSAR TOFANON KO ABB KAY SHAID HUM BHI ROIN YADOON KAY SAFINAY MAIN JAB DARD NAHI THA SENAY MAIN TAB KHAK MAZA THA JEENT MAIN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Only Te Lonely 0 Posted May 7, 2005 Mohubbatoon ki saza bemisaal di us ne Uddas rahne ki addat si daal di us ne Jab mere badun per wo aapne zakhum dekh chuka To jaan boojh ker kantoon ki shaal di us ne .. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 8, 2005 Aasalam u alekum :hi: thanksssss MOHTARMA ,and Well Come Only Te Lonely:y: wahhhhh jee buhottttttttt khub :) Jaaty waqat uss ka daaman thaa aur mera Hath main nay daaman paakar kar iltejaa ki uss ki ruk jane ki dua ki magar ......... Aaiy dil ! hamari duaon main atna Aasaar kahan ! uss nay jaaty waqat mujh pe aik NegaaH daali dil ko aik tasalii hain ..! ke jaaty waqat uss ki ankhon main kesi ko khoo deene ka Sadmaa thaa ..! Malum nahi ye akhsass kush FeHmi hain ya Galatt FeHmii ... !!! udas Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted May 8, 2005 dayaar-e-ghair mein kaise tujhe sada dete toh mil bhii jaata to tujhe ganwa dete tumhi ne hum ko sunaaya na apna dukh warna dua wo karte ke hum aasmaan hila dete Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 10, 2005 [ Kanon main bari dair talak gunnj rahi gee , khamush chattano say kabhi bol kar tau deikh ! ] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 10, 2005 [colorhello saeed where r u=red] Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted May 10, 2005 [colorhello saeed where r u=red] yar yye colour kese use karty hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*jadoo* 0 Posted May 14, 2005 beete hoi lamhon ki tarah mughe se bichar ker kiya jane woh kis haal mein hia aur kidhar hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites