Shabo 0 Posted July 22, 2002 Sab doston ko salaam! Your contributions are welcomed on the "new" community... please continue to post your replies as actively as before!! Bichar gaiey tho phir milaingay hum dono ik baar, Ya iss basthi duniya mey ya iss ki hadon k paar..... Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted July 22, 2002 Salaamz Shabo sis kya haal hai yaar? man new community page looks cool but kindda weird cuz we are not used to it. anyhow well here is my post 4 u! Hum bhi kya log hai khusbo key riwayat say alag Khud pay zahir na howay tujh ko bhulanay kay liyay love yaz all Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 22, 2002 Salaam Nazish Boy am I glad of a response Mey samjhi humari community k regulars humey chor gaiey.... but seems I got it wrong!! Hey come on everyone else I would love to hear from you.... just like the "old" days. lol Aap sab ki nazar.... Tassavur tera jo chupkay say mujhay choo jaye Meri har saans se teri hi khushboo aaye Pyaar main yeh kya haal ho gaya ai dost Jheel main aks tu mera ho par nazar tu aye... Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted July 23, 2002 Hey salam everyone khussusan bil khussus SHABO & NAZ Ankh se dur na ho dil se utar jayega Vaqt ka kya hai guzarata hai guzar jayega Itna maanuus na ho Khilvat-e-Gham se apney Tu kabhii Khud ko bhi dekhega to Dar jayega Tum sar-e-rah-e-vafa dekhte rah jaaoge Aur vo baam-e-rafaaqat se utar jayega Zindagi teri ata hai to ye jaanevalaa Terii bakhshiish teri dahaliz pe dhar jayega Doobtey Doobtey kashtii to ochaalaa de duun Main nahin koi to saahil pe utar jayega Zabt laazim hai magar dukh hai qayaamat kaa 'nazish' Zaalim ab ke bhi na royega to mar jayega ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 23, 2002 Salaam Ibrahim.. "ji" aiyaan nu!! It was good to read your shairi :;): Jaan-e-sakoon aa bhi ja tera hee intezar hai, Aankhon sey ashk hai ravaan jaan bhi beqaraar hai! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted July 23, 2002 salaamz all nahi nahi shabo sis we won't leave you alone that easily:). hum jis pay chipack jaii to utartay nahi;). lolz anyhow wuz up all Apna pan bhi is biganay pan mein hai Poora alim aik dewanay pan mein hai Yay jo tum say mein anjaan bina phirta ho Sari baat issey anjatay mein hai love yaz all Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 23, 2002 Awww that's so nice of you Naz.. thanks! This is for you..... Mohabbat main nahin hai farq jeenay aur marnay ka Us he ko daikh kar jeetay hain jis kaafir pay dum niklay Hazaaroan khuwahishain aaisee kay her khuwahish pay dum niklay Bohat niklay meray armaan laikin phir bhi kum niklay. Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted July 24, 2002 salam all members. suna tha ke who aeen ge anjuman mey suna tha ke un se mulaqat hoooo geee thanks farhannnnnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 24, 2002 Salaam Farhan How r u? Keeping fine I hope! Salaam to everyone.... here are a couple more shair for you to read! Shaiyad koiee manzil nahi iss raah mey parthi, Waapis nahi aatha koiee yaadon k safar sey.. Dil ki veeraan basthi mujh sey aksar poocha karthi hai, Basthay hain kis dais mey ab wo log yahaan jo aiey thay?!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted July 24, 2002 hey shaboo jee, suna hay log use ankh bhar ke dekhate hain so us ke shair me.n kuch din thair ke dekhate hain suna hay bole to batoon se phool jarte hain ye bat hay too chalo bat kar ke dakhate hain suna hay din ko use titliyan satati hain suna hay rat ko jugno thair ke dakhtay hain suna hay uske laboon se gulab jalte hain so ham bahar per ilzam thar ke dakhtay hain suna hay uske badan ki qarash asi hay ke phool apni qabaeen katar ke dakhate hain suna hay uske shabistan se mutasil hay bahisht makin udhar ke bhi jalway idhar ke dakhaty hain ruke too girdesheen uska tawaf karti hain chale too usko zamane thahar ke dekhaty hain kese naseeb ke be perhan use dekhe khabi khabi dar-o-divar ghar ke dakhtay hain ab uske shair mey thahare ya kuuch kar jaayeen faraz aao sitaray safar key dakhtay hain. umeed hay appko pasand aay ge. thank keep smile. farhannnnnn. :( :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 24, 2002 Shukriya Farhan... mujhay pasand aiee!! Teri baatien hee sunaanay aiey Dost bhi dil hee dukhaanay aiey Phool khiltay hain to ham sochtay hain Teray anay kay zamaanay aiey Aisi kuch chup si lai hai jaisay Hum tujhay haal sunaanay aiey Ishq tanhaa hai sar-e manzil-e gham Koun yeh bojh utthaanay aiey Ajnabi dost hamein dekh keh ham Kuch tujhay yaad dilaanay aiey Dil dharaktaa hai safar kay hangaam Kaash phir koiee bulaanay aiey Ab to ronay say bhi dil dukhtaa hai Shaiyad ab hosh thikaanay aiey Kya kaheen phir koiee basti ujree? Log kyoun jashn manaanay aiey So raho maut kay pehloo mein ~FARAAZ~ Neend kis waqt na-jaanay aiey..... Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted July 24, 2002 salaamz all kaissay ho aap sub log? i don't have any book wid me so i'll add a shair wid my memory :P it's a common shair so oh well phir bhi here it is. BarishooN say dosti uchi nahi faraaz Kacha tera makaan hai kuch to khyaal ker. Kaissa gotta go tcz love yaz all Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted July 25, 2002 salam shaboo jee, good poetry pasand aii. kuch shair appki nazar karta hoon ye koi mukamal ghazal nahee hay bs aik aik shair hay. mey too ghazal suna ke akela khara raha sub apne apne chahne waloon mey kho gaye. ............................. waseem who roth gye hain to roth jane do zara se bat hay barh jaye ge manane sey .............................. who bhi kya thay sun tera km tha sin liye main ne sun tere ghungroo gya sina chan gya dil bhi chin jese bole chon tere ghungroo ............................... who roth kar bhi mujh se muskora ke milta hay yehi to aik bat achi hay mery herjai ki ................................ ghum mery sath sath buhat door tak geey mujh mey thakan na pai to becharay thak gaey ................................ meri talab tha aik shux who jo nahee mila to phir hat doa se yoon gira bhool gya sawal bhi ................................. itni bari kaynat mey may ne bas aik shux ko manga tha mujhay wohi na mila. ................................ thanks, farhannnnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted July 25, 2002 hey naz jee, how r u . faraz ka buhat acha shair app ne likha. usne nazar hi nazar mey ase bhalay suqun kahay hum ne to uske paoon mey sara kalam rakh diya aur faraz chahiyeen kitni mohabateen tujhay maoon ne tere nam per bachoon ka nam rakh diya. thanks keep smile take care farhannnnnnnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted July 25, 2002 Shabo and Farhan really yours shairi so great hey..also Naz ACHA KHASA BETHEY BETHEY GOOM HO JATA HOON UB MEIN AKSAR NEIN NAHI REHTA TUM HO JATA HOON LOVE YOU ALL :P IBRAHIM Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted July 25, 2002 salam ibraheem jee, kese hain sir app salam sir, salam,' naraz na hoo to arz karoon. sar jhukaao ge to pathar devataa ho jaayega itna mat chaaho use wo be-wafa ho jaayega ham hain derya hame appna hunar maloom hay jis taraf bhi chal paren ge rasta ho jaaaye ga ruuth jana bhi mohabat ki alamat hay magar kya khabar thi who mujh se itna qafa ho jaeeyega tahnks, loves for u keep smile take care qush rahain abad rahain farhannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 25, 2002 Salaam Farhan Wah ji kaafi shaiyaraana mood mey hain aap.. thats VERY good! Pehlay iss mey ik naaz tha andaaz tha Ab tho rootna theri aadath mey shamil ho gaiya :;): Ibrahim ji aap k liyay..... Woh aiey bazm mey ithna tho "hum" ney dekha Uss k baad chiragon mey roshni na rahi :P Hey Naz nice shair... Lootay mazay ussi ney teray intezar k, Jo had-e-intezar sey aagay nikal gaiya!! Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted July 25, 2002 hey shabo jee, who rootha rahay mujh se ye manzoor hay lakin yaroo use samjhao mera shair na chooray farhannnnnnnnnn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted July 25, 2002 hello everyone yahi haalaat ibtadaa se rahe log hamashe Khafaa Khafaa se rahe bevafaa tum kabhii na the lekin ye bhi sach hai ke bevafaa se rahe in chiraagon mein tel hi kam thaa kiyun gilaa phir hamen havaa se rahe bahas, shatranj sher mausiqii tum nahin rahe to ye dilaase rahe uske bandon ko dekhakar kahiye hamako ummiid kyaa raza se rahe zindagi ki sharaab maangate ho ham ko dekho ki pi ke pyaase rahe . hey shabo this is for you shair oron ke to bohat hein zamaney ke liye tu miley to mein tujhey shair sunaoon apney;) ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ibraahim 0 Posted July 25, 2002 hello everyone yahi haalaat ibtadaa se rahe log hamashe Khafaa Khafaa se rahe bevafaa tum kabhii na the lekin ye bhi sach hai ke bevafaa se rahe in chiraagon mein tel hi kam thaa kiyun gilaa phir hamen havaa se rahe bahas, shatranj sher mausiqii tum nahin rahe to ye dilaase rahe uske bandon ko dekhakar kahiye hamako ummiid kyaa raza se rahe zindagi ki sharaab maangate ho ham ko dekho ki pi ke pyaase rahe . hey shabo this is for you shair oron ke to bohat hein zamaney ke liye tu miley to mein tujhey shair sunaoon apney;) ibrahim Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Farhan 0 Posted July 25, 2002 salam ibrahim jee, appke aqri shair ko mokammal kar raha hoon mazrat ke sath. tere raste ka jo kanta bhi mayaser aaye. mey use shooq se coller pe sajaon apney farhannnnnnnnn. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted July 25, 2002 Hey Farhan kaho tho "kanton" ka haar bhaij doon yeh aik kaanta saja k kya karo gai Ibrahim ji thanks sooooo much.. your shairi is excellent as per usual :) shukriya, karam, nawazish!!! Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted July 25, 2002 salaamz all yaar aap log gr8 shairi write kurtay ho, i'm proud of alll of you, goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo all of u :o ucha here is a little thing from my side. Tum jo chaho To hum Aaj bhi apni sansoo ka her sur Tumhay sonp day Sirf betey hoi chahtoo kay auz. love yaz all Naz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nazish 0 Posted July 25, 2002 Bhool ker zaat tum ko yaad kya Baat bay baat tum ko yaad kya Neend naraz ho gai hum say hum nay jis raat tum ko yaad kya love yaz all Naz :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites