cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 itnay toot geye hain k choonay se bikhar jaen gay ab aur dua do gay tou ham mar jaen gay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 19, 2005 na poucho hasalay duniya na pouchoo mera daman hai aur garday safer hai wa ger na alamay wahshat hai ghar mein teray dilĀ mein ager ghar hai tu ghar hai With "G" janab Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 but ab to Y sai aiey ga naaaa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 19, 2005 bab boht of u said sher with N so isliya the second person edit it na :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted April 19, 2005 Apni zindagi se kuch pal dede mujhe Aaj na sahi, tu apna kal dede mujhe Khushi de ya na de marzi teri Apna dukh aur dard tu dede mujhe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted April 19, 2005 (edited) :o OH sorry ALL y say shair banana hay to yeh loo :D Yaad karte hai tumhe tanhai me, Dil duba hai gamo ki gahrai me, hume mat dhundo duniya ki bhid me, hum milenge tumhe fir kisi, hum milenge tumhe fir kisi maykhanay me, Edited April 19, 2005 by sonoo0 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 19, 2005 Aasman humse naaraaz hai Taaron ka gussa behisaab hai Wo sab jalte hain, kyunki Chaand se bhi behtar dost humare paas hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 yeh kis ho raha hai.....bait-bazii.mai........her koi apni pasend se shair likh raha hai........bait-bazii k concept ko to koi follow nahi ker raha <_< Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 sorry kia ho raha hai..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 19, 2005 well "E" is A na isliya i say with A as sonoo was maykhanay me Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted April 19, 2005 Well sweeti maray say agar galti say aik mistake ho gai to i sadi sorry na i know how to follow bait bazi concept but thanks for reminding us :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 it's ok sonooO jee....... sorry ki koi baat nahi :D bus mujhe laga to mai nai keh dia....i hope u don't mind na :) :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 intzar jine ki wajah or zindagi ka nasib hota hai Kaise kahein khushiyoon ko nahi lamho ka intezar kaise kahien lamho ko nahi khushyoon ka intezar kaise kahien hume nahi kisi ka intezaar kaise kaheinptar bun gya sirf intezar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 19, 2005 raahi badal jaate hai par raaste nahi badalte, toofan aaye phir bhi mausam nahi badalte, gile shikwe bhale kitne ho magar sachhe dost nahi badalte... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sonoo0 0 Posted April 19, 2005 Akser yunhi chup chup ker Dekhti hai, janey kiya sooch ker Nazrein chura jati hai Kuch ghabra si jati hai no sweeti i did not mind na becasue u are sweeti na :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 oh thank u.sonooO.....so nice of u :D ik tees si jigar mai uthti hai,ik dard sa dil mai hota hai, hum raaton ko uth ker rootein hein jab sara Alam sota hai, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Qaasim 0 Posted April 19, 2005 inn ankho mein aansu aaye na hote, jo tum piche mudkar muskuraye na hote, tumhare jane ke baad ye gham hota hai, kash tum zindagi mein aaye na hote. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted April 19, 2005 ehsas k andaaz ko nai taazgi mili, tum se mili mujhe nai zindagi mili, jitna bhi intishar tha sab khatam ho gia, meri her soch ko nai shaistagi mili, Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 19, 2005 in barishoon se dosti achi nahi farz kacha tera makaan hai kuch tu khiyal ker Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
junaidrauf 0 Posted April 19, 2005 Riya Kari Seekh li aab labun nay Koi Halat ho Yeh Hansty he Rahain gay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 19, 2005 Yaad rakho tu dil k pass hain hum Bhool jao tu faslay hain bhut Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khurshid4lov 0 Posted April 20, 2005 TANHAA UDAS CHAND KO SAMJHOO NA BE-KHABAR SAB KUCH SUN RAHA HAI MAGAR BOLTA NAHE NEXT IS"E" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 20, 2005 EK Khuab Jo Manjhdaar Mai Barson Se Ghira Hai Us Khuab KO Sahil Na Mila Ab Ke Baras Bhi Berson Se Jhulasti Hui Tanhayee Ka Mosam Bhoole Na Mere GHar Ka Pata Ab Ke Baras Bhi NOW WORD IS.................I Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted April 20, 2005 EK Khuab Jo Manjhdaar Mai Barson Se Ghira Hai Us Khuab KO Sahil Na Mila Ab Ke Baras Bhi Berson Se Jhulasti Hui Tanhayee Ka Mosam Bhoole Na Mere GHar Ka Pata Ab Ke Baras Bhi NOW WORD IS.................I Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
charming 0 Posted April 20, 2005 ibham ki rahoon say nikal ker meray dil mein tum raha-e-haqiqat say chalay kioun nahi atay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites