rukh 25 Posted December 6, 2005 (edited) ****** ik member . ik shair***** female members NaDan > kion rehtay ho udas, kion rehtay ho bayzar lagta hay chura le hay kisi nay MUJJ tumharee Kiran > kuch badal say gaye ho, bohat.Shair perhnay lagay ho kis cheez ka badla tum cy member say laynay lagay ho Ariba > khaber hay humain guzertay ho roz cy k raston say tum yeh or bat hay udhar mangnay k der say samnay atay nahi Aaman_eman > roz roz anay say kam ho jatee hay qadar isleey kam ker dya hay humare mehfil main ana Sanum > intizar tumhara itna taweel ho gya goya Ptv ki nashryat dekh rahay hoon hum Perfectionist > bula to liya hay humain apni mehfil main mager ab Treat k der say khud bhag rahay ho cute _ooky > karachi ky badiloon kay manind ho tum ya to berstay nahi ,barus jao to phir thumtay nahi Emira> app kay dum say hay ab cy per kuch hal chul kahen Election main to nahi kheray ho rahay ho Laraib > ifsos kay alyzbith ko urdu ki na soojhee werna ajj ap urdu say anjan na hoteen Maha > sadgee per kon na ho jaye in k qurban stupid question k answer bhi hain in k pas tyar Raiha > cy kay ishq nay nakama ker dya werna hum bhi admi thay baray kam k Ibtisam her shair lagta hay humain apna fasna yeh kis nay mukhbare ker dee mere dil ki male members Mansoor > post kernay k waday kertay nahi pooray contract ker lytay hain payment nahi kertay majid > jo kaha un say na kero yoon shairon per situm samjhay woh is ko mazak hee mazak main Add> chair ker hum ko buch k jaye to koi zara udhar per sooda hum kabhi kia nahi kertay Waqas> hazaroo saal member apni post ko rotay hain baree mushkil say hota hay post main reply tumhara Asim > awaz mujhay tum day layna , yaad mujhay tum ker layna kisi post main jo jhgra ho jaye ,member ko ger masla ho jaye Pakistani > 2004 main poocha tha kia haal hay app ka 2005 main jawab aya Allah ka karam hay silver> kion her post kerna perta hay delete or edit kash k admin k dil main uter jaye mere bat Sorry for dat ..dont take it serious ..just enjoy ps> jin members ka nam nahi us k ley sorry .. ik wajha to yeh k un ki posts say nawaqfiyat hay ya ho sakta hay nam zayhan say nikal gya ho ..so dont mind u also participate here & posts ur observation in poetic way Rukh Edited December 6, 2005 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maha23 0 Posted December 6, 2005 rukh zaberdast,gr8,welldonne,sab se different,sab per fit, gr8 post yara i really like it KEEP IT UPPPPPPPPPPPP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aaman_Eman 0 Posted December 6, 2005 (edited) Rukh Maha nai etnay buht saray appreciative words use kiyee hain k ab mujay likhnay ko kuch be nahi mil raha :) ..well really nice effort .. ;) .. :angel: Edited December 8, 2005 by AAMAN_EMAN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silver 0 Posted December 7, 2005 lol funnny......waisay mujhe pata lag gaya..kay meri posts kithay jati hain..rukh delete ya edit kar deti hai...shucks..lol.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emira 0 Posted December 7, 2005 Wooooooow that was excellent...zabardast aur sab par fit bhi theek thak hotey hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kurios 0 Posted December 7, 2005 hm really nice rukh waise aapp bohot shararti ho gaee hain :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sweetoo 0 Posted December 7, 2005 Zabardast rukh Keep it up !!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mansoor 0 Posted December 7, 2005 hmm RukH Dats gr88 :D :( soory again main INSHALLH iss ka replyy zaroorrr karoon gaa :D MansOor Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 7, 2005 thanx to all for tareefain shareefain ..waisai is kiz aroorat nahi thee lolz zaroorat thee app ki muskurahtoon ki .( dialouge bolny main masters kia hay maini lolzz) Silver> main MOD nahi hoon main kis terah app ki posts ko delete keroon gee YEH MAMLA KOI OR HAY : p Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
raiha 0 Posted December 8, 2005 rukh appi u rox itnay mazay kay shair likhain hain aur saab pay kitnay sahi jatay hain ahahahaha i like mine Raiha > cy kay ishq nay nakama ker dya werna hum bhi admi thay baray kam k kitna sahi kaha hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 8, 2005 Sab zaberdast ker rahay ho! Koi Rukh Ko acordingly Jawab tu do na Yaar..! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silver 0 Posted December 8, 2005 Rukh..yeh tumharay liyay RUKH>> barsa kay wo sab pay shairoon ki barish khud apna daman bacha rahii hain ulu ko bhi maat di hai inhoon nay gadhay say wo shart laga rahi hai CY ki regular memmber samajhti hai apnay aap ko pata nahi koon sa no. ghuma rahi hain maheenay maheenay gayab rehti hain aur aatay saath hi rugular ka award paa rahi hain admin say panga na lena aai Silver yeh admin ko b paisay laga rahin hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted December 8, 2005 silver > Ulu ,Gadha , admin per paisay lagana yeh to kafee namunasib qisam k alafaz hain behter hota app shaista or munasib alfaz ka chunao kertay ager mere post main app ko aisee koi shikyat hay to app batain main edit or mazrat kernay per tyar hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ibtisaam 0 Posted December 8, 2005 salam... :flower: Ibtisam her shair lagta hay humain apna fasna yeh kis nay mukhbare ker dee mere dil ki hahaha.... :D mukhbari to aapne RuKH kardi....har CY member ki........ ok ok tumhein shairi mein jawab deti hun... har CY member par hai rukh ki cheel si nazar kar diya sabko hairaan jab mara teer nishane par... khud apne hi baare mein jaankar.... muskurahat si aagayi sab ke chehre par..... :) :luv: Well Done...!...RuKH keep it up..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
silver 0 Posted December 9, 2005 hey..rukh..thas was jus fun..aisay hi shair bana diya..kya hua mind kiya..main apna shair edit kar deta hoon...aainda..no shair..frm my side...SORRY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted December 9, 2005 :D rukh thx magar jal ker kyon likha hai sher mere liye :angry2: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rainbow 333 Posted December 10, 2005 Laraib > ifsos kay alyzbith ko urdu ki na soojhee werna ajj ap urdu say anjan na hoteen very nice and great like it but aap ka apna kahan hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
a1b2c3 0 Posted December 28, 2005 Very cute idea but I can not read all of these shairs. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Laiba Khan 0 Posted December 28, 2005 very nice idea but rukh main tu yaha ho hi naahi Rukh api Us ki Soorat bhi tere liye kitni zalim hai faiz Bhulao to bhoolti nahi yad karo to rulati hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
