saamia 0 Posted March 10, 2004 umair aap iss tarah karain k neend ki gooliyaan kha laitay neend aajani thee decent u r going very good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted March 10, 2004 shukriya shukriya doustooooooo aap loug bhi zaburdust hein bhe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted March 10, 2004 VERY NICE SANOBER REALY NICE HAI KHOYE KHOYE Hoosh main bhi bahoosh se ho shoor main bhi khoye se ho khushi main bhi gumghin se ho neend main bhi jagee se ho haal main ho kar mazee main ho saathy k saath bhi tahnaa se ho khuch kahna chaty ho par zaaban hote hoye ba zaban se ho zindaa lagty ho par ba jan se ho ye baat maloom hai ke tum khoye khoye se ho Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 10, 2004 decent n sanober zabdasrt posting saamia>> goliyan nahien rakhita main :P warina kha leta ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted March 11, 2004 thanx uamirrrrrrrrr zaburdust decantttttttttttttt Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted March 14, 2004 Hey Snober jus Fabulous!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 15, 2004 Tere baray mai.. tere bare main jab soocha nahi tha main tanha tha magar itna nahi tha teri tasveer se kerta tha batein mere kamre main aaina nahi tha samander ne mujhe pyasa hi rakha main jab sehra main tha pyasa nahi tha manane roothne k khel main hum bichar jaein ge ye soocha nahi tha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted March 15, 2004 bohut achaye dosto :) humhe bhi khwabon ki duniya azeez hai lekin zameen pay rehna ka ehsaas maar dayta hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted March 15, 2004 nahee yeh nahee ho sakta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted March 15, 2004 wahw ah jaan, main _houn_na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted March 15, 2004 thanks main hoon na tareef ke liye .main aap ki shayeri ki bhi tareef karti per mujhe urdu nahi aati ,per phir bhi jo bhi likha hoga acha hi hoga. :) seza yeh di hai aankhon se cheen li neendayen kasoor yeh tha ke jeena ke khwaab dekhaye thay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 15, 2004 kaash! key mein aik qalam hoti jab to likhta tanhai mein dil ki baat! chupkey se kaghaz per utarti aur teray haathon key lams se samajh pati teray jazbon ko 'shaam ke surmai andheron mein jab tu nikalta almari se mera dil khushi se jhoomta phir zara deir talak teri unglion mein qaid rehti kaash tu mujhey umer qaid dedey! phir teri baatein khatam hoti tu mujhey chor ker chala jata intizar kerney key liye! per woh intizar bhi bemaza na hota kuch milney ki tarap hoti kuch dil beqarar hota mujhey aadat hoti teri qurbat ki tu pyar ki baatein , meray liye na sahi per mujh se to likhta kaash mein aik qalam hoti! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted March 15, 2004 zaburdust mai noun na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 15, 2004 aadab aadab nawazish u too zaberdasht sanober Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 15, 2004 phir is duniyaa se ummiid-e-vafaa hai tujhe ai zindagii kyaa ho gayaa hai ba.Dii zaalim nihaayat bevafaa hai ye duniyaa phir bhii kitanii Khush-numaa hai har ik apane hii Gam me.n mubtilaa hai kisii ke dard se kaun aashnaa hai mere naqqaad merii shaayarii to mere TuuTe huye dil kii sadaa hai kahaa.N huu.N "Shad" mai.n to shaad saa huu.N vo shaad-e-Khush-navaa to mar chukaa hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tabishami 0 Posted March 16, 2004 assalam o alykum,, usay kehna k palkoon pay na tankay khuwab ki jhalar samunder k kinaray ghar bana ker khuch naheen milta jigar ho jay ga chalni yeh ankhen khun rooain gi wasi bay faiz logon say nibha ker khuch naheen milta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites