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  1. goraya

    Aik pagal si larki

    helo dear, where is ur new poem i means new addition iam waiting for it. take care bye ahmad
  2. goraya

    Aik pagal si larki

    helo dear how r u? i hope u will be enjoying . i am waiting for ur another azad nazam whaen it is coming . keep it up please take care bye ahmad
  3. goraya

    Aik pagal si larki

    hi , first of all how r u? thanks for replying me . ok i think u have mind it of criticism on ur poem ,if u mind it paradon me .i was not present on net due to illness of my mother so i am replying u little bit later .well ihave wrot u sahib or sahiba because mostly on net itis blunder so i wrote it so, i want to know ur name by urself if u dont mind . i am waiting for ur another poem now ok take car bye ahmad
  4. goraya

    Aik pagal si larki

    dear aarzoo sahib ya sahiba i dont now , it was not a poem ,its looks just a prose and think it was good jesture and passion towards writing and u have good potential towards writning .and it was a really a ur inner feelings just from ur heart ,loooks like u have been hearted by some one . May God give him good track towards u who have hearted u . and i am really preying for u to get back ur love. i hope u will give me ur coments about ur poem ahmad
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