hi ,
first of all how r u? thanks for replying me . ok i think u have mind it of criticism on ur poem ,if u mind it paradon me .i was not present on net due to illness of my mother so i am replying u little bit later .well ihave wrot u sahib or sahiba because mostly on net itis blunder so i wrote it so, i want to know ur name by urself if u dont mind . i am waiting for ur another poem now
ok take car bye
ahmad