KHUSHI 0 Posted October 22, 2003 ASALAM-O-ALIKUM, UMEED HAI KE APP SAB THEEK HUN GAY!I AM A POET SO WANT TO SHARE A POEM WITH YOU I DONT KNOW HOW IT IS PLEASE TELL ME HOW IT IS! :) -)SAKOON-E-DIL TALAASH KARTE HAIN, MANZILON KE LIYAY BEQARAR PHIRTE HAIN, -)BATA AB IS DIL-E-NADAN KA KIA KARIN HUM, TUJHE AB BHI IS MEIN BASAY PHIRTAY HAIN, -)MERI ANKHON SE JO KHAWAB SAATH LE GAYE THAY TUM, UNHAIN LOTA DON KE MUNTAZIR SE PHIRTAY HAIN, -)TUMHAIN ROKNAY KE LIYAY RASTAY MEIN RUKNA PARAY GA, YEH JANTAY HAIN ISI LIYAY KHUD KO ROKAY REHTAY HAIN, -)TO MIL JAYE BAS LABON PAR YEH WIRD HAI AB TO, RAB KABOL KARAY BAS YEH DUA KARTE HAIN, -)FANNI HAI SAB KUCH YEH JANTAY HAIN MAYA HUM BHI, MAGAR PHIR BHI TERE SAPNAY SAJAYE REHTAY HAIN. !*!*!*!*!(I HOPE U'LL LIKE IT)!*!*!*!*! HAVE A GOOD DAY, WITH BEST WISHES, "KHUSHI" !*!*!*!* :wub: :P :) !*!*!*! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 22, 2003 bohut bohut achie poetry thee khushie :) so nice posting .... keep dat alwazz up :D Meri Jaagti Aankhein "meri jaagti aankhein meri jaagti aankhein kia kia kuch dekhain meri jaagti aankhein woh gehra samandar lehro ki larzish woh shoray ghareeban ehsaas ki jumbish ehsaas yeh kia hai gar tu tanha hai phir tanha kyu hai tu to khuda hai kabhi zindah karkay phir maarta hai kabhi taaqat day k lalkaarta hai phir fitna kar k bharkaana kesa insan bana k larwana kesa tu hi khuda hai tu hi khuda hai yeh maanta hoon tu mushkil kusha hai tu maarta hai kiss sangdili say kabhi poocha tum nay uss k kisi say bichernay ka gham hota kia hai bechargi ko tu rota kia hai itna tha zaroori kisi ko peda karna duniya mein laakay khuda ka sheda karna to kyu kiya uss ko shamil hum mein to kyu basaya usay dil-e-najam mein tujh say shikwa karna wallah hai qayamat tu maalik hamara hum teri amanat kuch moqo per tu kar itni sakhawat maa say pehlay beto ko ho daawat woh girya karain apne lakhtay jigger per unn say pehlay hum chalain safar per duniya ki khushiya maa k liyeh ho aakhir mein duniya maa k liyeh ho beshak tu hai buss tu hi tu hai jab tu hi tu hai phir kia justaju hai tu jalal hai tu falah ka markaz tu dablay jung hai hai sulah ka markaz falak sitaray tere nazaray tere nazaray yeh falak sitaray tu anginat hai per hai tu tanha tujhe khabar her ghari her lamha yeh dua hai meri maa rahay salamat zindagi ho purlutf uss ki taa qayamat mein sadqay jawa Louchay k aah per mein sadqay jawa uss jaagti nigah per meri jaagti aankhein meri jaagti aankhein hain ghana samandar meri jaagti aankhein Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 22, 2003 w/sallam yes i am fine and hope you too so aap to buhut acchi hay ka itna pooch rahi hay warna kuch loag apnay ho ka anjanay ban gay hay waisay nice posting Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted October 22, 2003 nice post umair Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted October 23, 2003 YA NICE Mr. umair.zm Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted October 23, 2003 DIL KI DEEWAR_O_DAR PE KIA DEKHA BAS TERA NAAM HI LIKHA DEKHA TERI AANKHON MEIN HUM NE KIA DEKHA KABHI QATIL , KABHI KHUDA DEKHA PHIR NA AAYA KHAYAL JANNAT KA JAB TEREY GHAR KA RAASTA DEKHA TEREY AANEY MEIN AUR JAANEY MEIN HUM NEY SADDIYON KA FASLA DEKHA HAY! ANDAZ TEREY RUKNEY KA WAQT KO BHI RUKA RUKA DEKHA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KHUSHI 0 Posted October 25, 2003 HMMMMMMMMMMMM! "KHUSHI" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
R@DhEy 0 Posted October 25, 2003 khushi ur poem is realy gr8 i like it very much keep going ......achi hai ! bhi app kahan shiree kerti hain humeen bhi batiyee ga kiyoon key hum abhi nayee hain yahaan per .... hope key app zaroor baatadeen gayeeee ........! take care khushi ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KHUSHI 0 Posted October 26, 2003 khushi ur poem is realy gr8 i like it very much keep going ......achi hai ! AOA, THANX FOR LIKING MY POEM . "KHUSHI" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KHUSHI 0 Posted October 26, 2003 bhi app kahan shiree kerti hain humeen bhi batiyee ga kiyoon key hum abhi nayee hain yahaan per .... hope key app zaroor baatadeen gayeeee ........! take care khushi ! AOA MEIN APKA MATLAB NAHIN SAMJH PAA RAHI APP KIA KHE RAHI HO? "KHISHI" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
