samra 0 Posted October 31, 2003 marnay ka teray gham main irada bhi nahi hay hay ishq magar itna zayada bhi nahi hay keon daykhtay rahtay hain sitaron ki taraf hum jab un say mulaqat ka waada bhi nahi hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted October 31, 2003 good irada... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 1, 2003 innocent samra waqayee nice irada :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 2, 2003 thanx umair n innocent wasay ye mera nahi poet ka irada hay:wub: :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 3, 2003 ah Very realistic poet!! Good!! i like it..!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 4, 2003 wasay suna hay k jis ko ye beemai ho vi realistic nahi hota Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 4, 2003 yes sahee suna hay!! buhat son ko dekha is bemare kay hato zaya hotay!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SLLeepyism 0 Posted November 4, 2003 realistic kia hota hay kia ya beemari hay :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
neesha 0 Posted November 4, 2003 nice samra!!!!!!!!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
R@DhEy 0 Posted November 4, 2003 hi samra bhoout acha sher hai i like 2 Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 4, 2003 nahi realistic hona beemari nahi balka hum kisi aur beemari ki baat kar rahy hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 4, 2003 thanx neesha n radhay mohan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 4, 2003 nadan main nay bhi bohot son ko dekha hay magar kya karain is stage par un ko kuch samajh nahi aati Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 4, 2003 (1) aj kal ke larkian kakhaz ka phool hain dakhnay may khubsoorat magar bay wafa zaroor hain (2)her phool ke kasmat may khan nazay aroosan. kuch phool too hootay hain mazaron k leye. (3)hamain appnow nay loota gharrow mey khay dham tha meri kasty whan dooby jahain panny kum tha. (4)kuch hare gai taqdeer mari kuch toot gay mary supnay kuch duny nay barbad kiy kuch loot gay mary appnay. (5)kisi nay kub hamain jinay ka ikhtar dyia tujay ajjul nay mujay zinghy nay mar dyia kisi say ashiq ka azharr jis main karnai tha khubar nahien ka woo lamha khana ghzar dyia. achi hai na.....hmmmmmmmmm Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
R@DhEy 0 Posted November 4, 2003 (1) aj kal ke larkian kakhaz ka phool hain  dakhnay may khubsoorat magar bay wafa zaroor hain (2)her phool ke kasmat may khan nazay aroosan.   kuch phool too hootay hain mazaron k leye. (3)hamain appnow nay loota gharrow mey khay dham tha   meri kasty whan dooby jahain panny kum tha. (4)kuch hare gai taqdeer mari kuch toot gay mary supnay   kuch duny nay barbad kiy kuch loot gay mary appnay. (5)kisi nay kub hamain jinay ka ikhtar dyia   tujay ajjul nay mujay zinghy nay mar dyia   kisi say ashiq ka azharr jis main karnai tha   khubar nahien ka woo lamha khana ghzar dyia. achi hai na.....hmmmmmmmmm innocent keep going brother ,, bhoout acheee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 5, 2003 aik mari taraf say bhi tumhara zarf hay tum ko mohabbat bhool jati hay hamain to jis nay bhi hans kar pukara yaad rahta hay mobahhat aur nafrat aur talkhi aur sheereeni kis nay kis tara ka phool mara yaad rahta hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 5, 2003 thanx............................... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 7, 2003 samra thanx for sharing :) ab meri taraf se ;) TERE LEA ES DIL ME PYAR AJ BI HAI "Tere lea es dil me pyar aj bi hai! Es dil me tera intazar aj bi hai! Chaho ge ek din tum bi hume! Maan me ye umeed aj bi hai! Pyar kab tak na karo ge humse! Honton per ye sawal aj bi hai! Dil de diya tume ek nazar me humne! Pyar tume kya hadh se zada humne! Intazar hai bass tere izahar ka! Es dil me to iqrar aj bi hai! Chahe ge tuje yon he umer bhar! Sath jo mil jaye tera humko! Kal bi tujhe se mohabbat thi or aj bi hai! Tere lea es dil me pyar aj bi hai... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 7, 2003 a nice one by u umair. chalo nher per nahany chulty hain chuti kolge sy kal be thee ajj be hai.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 7, 2003 woooooooooooooooooow! thats gr8 umair n innocent aap ka'zoak'to bohot acha hay hahahhahah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 7, 2003 thanx innocent :) ab kuch aur arz hia ;) Woh tere tarhaan koi thii "Younhii daush per sambhalay Ghani zulf kay daushalay Waheen sanwalii sii rungaat Waheen nain neend walay Waheen manpasand qamaat Waheen khushnumaa sarapaa Joo badan main neem khawabii Too lahoo main rut jagaa saa Kisii aur hi safar main saray raah mil gayee thii Tujhey aur kia bataoon Woh tere tarhaan koi thii Mujhey dil say us nay poojaa Usay jaan say mainay chahaa Isii hum rahii main akhir Kaheen aa gaya daurahaa Phir aik aisee sham ayee kay woh sham akhri thii Koi zalzala saa aya Koi burq sii giri thii Ajab andhiaan chaleen phirr Kay biqhar gayee gayee dil-o-jaan Naa kaheen gul-e-wafa thaa Naa chirageh ahd-o-paimaan Woh jahaz uter gaya thaa Yeh jahaz uter gaya hay Tere ankh main hain ansoon Mera dil Pighal raha hay Too jahan mujhey mili hay Woo yaheen juda hoi thii Tujhey aur kia bataoon Woh tere tarhaan koi thii Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 7, 2003 oooooooooooh umair gr8 i ve read that its very nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted November 8, 2003 cooooooooool umair bahi... now me ...arz kia hai... Yeh pichlay ishq ki baatein hein jab aankh mein khwaab damaktay thay jab dil mein daagh chamaktay thay jab palkein sheher ke rastoon main ashkon ka noor lutatee thein jab saansein ujlay chehron ke tan-man mein phool sajati thein sochon mein bhanvar par jaatay thay jab aik talatum rehta tha apnay be-ant khayalon mein har ehad nibhaanay ki kasmain khat khoon se likhnay ki rasmain jab aam thein hum dil walon mein ab apni ujree ankhoon mein jitni roshan si raatein hein us umer ki sab soughaatein hein jis umer ke khwaab khayaal huye woh pichlii umer thi beet gaii woh umer beetay saal huye ab apni deed ke rastay mein kuch rang hai guzray lamhon ka kuch ashk ki baraatein hein kuch bhoolay bisray chehray hein kuch yaadon ki barsaatein hein yeh sab pichlay ishq ki baatein hein Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
