sensetive 0 Posted March 19, 2004 Asalam-o-alikum, hello! every1 sorry, yar bas thora busy tha to koi shairi karne ka time hi nahin mila ab thora sa farigh tha to soocha kuch likh hi lein.Yar..............kuch ziyada nahin ho gaya yeh bhashan chalo....... "uNkI fItRaT bAdAL nAhIN sAkTi" "UNKI FITRAT BADAL NAHIN SAKTI. JINKO APNI MOHABET AR NAZ THA WOH JO APNI ANA KI KHATIR KHOLOS KA LIBADA URIEH HUM SE MOHABBAT KI ARH MEIN DUSHMANIYAN KARTE CHALE WOH JO HUMARA DUM BARHTE THAY KISSI AUR KE HO CHALE ABHI BEAKHTIYAR SOOCHON MEIN GHUM KI ANDHEERI WADIYON MEIN AITAMAAD KI REET KO SAMBHLTE SAMBHLTE QALB KI BIKHRI KIRCHION KO UTHANE KI KHATIR KHUD LAHO LAHO HOWAY HAN! SACH HI KHETE HAIN BATOOL WO UNKI FITRAT BADAL NAHIN SAKTI WOH JO ZEHNON KI TARIQION MEIN REHTE HAIN." "sEnSetIvE" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted March 19, 2004 I HOPE U'LL LIKE IT! "sEnsEtiVe" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted March 19, 2004 WAH WAH ZABURDUST BHE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted March 19, 2004 WAH WAH ZABURDUST BHE Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 19, 2004 nice jee khaatin hai rah-guzr, thori dooR sath chalo bohut karra hai safr thori dooR sath chalo tamaam umr kahaan koi sath dai-ta hai yeh jan ta hooN magar thori dooR sath chalo Nashe mein choor hooN mai bhi tumhein bhi hosh nahin baRRa maza ho agar thori dooR sath chalo yeh aik shub ki mulaqaat bhi ghaNimat hai kise hai kal ki khabr thori dooR sath chalo abhi to jaag rahae hein chiragh rahooN ke abhi hai dooR sahr thori dooR sath chalo tawaf-e-manzil-janah hamein bhi karna hai Faraz tum bhi agar thori dooR sath chalo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 19, 2004 very nice sensetive :hi: mon ho na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted March 20, 2004 ThAnXsAnnObEr QazI, mEiN hO Na & uMaIrZm "SeNsEtIve" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 20, 2004 keep on posting ur gr8 stuff :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 20, 2004 ZIKER TUMHARA HOTA HAI...!!! Hawa Jab Teez Chalti Hai Tumhari Yaad Aati Hai Jab Pattey Sar-Saratey Hain Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Kabhi Bholey Sey Shab Ko Meray Dil Main A Ker Dekho Hai Aik Mahfil Sajji Hoti Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Tumhin Kesay Bataoon Kitni Chahat Main Nay Ki Hai Tum Sey Kay Jab Bhi Aansoo Chhalaktey Hain Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Kabhi Chanda Ko Main Dekhon Kabhi Tarey Main Gintta Hoon Kabhi Chandni Muskurati Hai Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Zamana Hai Bohat Zalim Kahin Yeh Chhen Na Lay Tum Ko Isi Liyey Main Buss Khamosh Hota Hoon Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai thanx SeNsEtIve Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 20, 2004 wahh wahh main ho na :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted March 20, 2004 GR8 mEIn hO nA! "sEnSeTiVe" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 21, 2004 teray khawab ki arzu "tujhay dekhein ne dekhein ek adat hay shab ko Sone say pehlay teray khawab ki arzu kerna Palkoon mein tujhay chupana aur sochtay rehna Kitne haseen lagata hay tujhay rubaru kerna Baat be baat chonkna aur khoay khoay rehna Khud say beghana ho ker teri justaju kerna Khud ko dekhna aur pase aainna tujhay rekhna Phir chup ker sargoshioon mein tujh say guftagu kerna Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted March 21, 2004 Hey Very Nice You alll! aaj phir raat bhar yadoon k mailay main koi maray saath raha woh bhee gum thaa main bhee gum thee woh chup thaa to main gum sum thee tanhai bol rahi thee hawa ga rahi thee sookhay pattay raqas main thay khizan par bahar ka joban thaa kion k aaj phir raat bhar yadon k mailay main koi maray saath thaa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted March 22, 2004 NICE UMAIR AND NADAN! "sEnSeTivE" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 22, 2004 thanx sensetive :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 22, 2004 Aehl-e-wafa ki khatir ik sheher banaya jay Khaluse ki ho shama roshan ulfat ka deep jalaya jay Suno ae mohabat ko pa ba zanjeer kerne walo Mohabat ko rasem-o-zanjeer se azad banaya jay Aehal-e wafa ki basti mein na be wafa koi dakhil ho In butoon ko meray rastay se hataya jay Hum sheher-e wafa ke basi hein wafa he apni fitrat mein Kuch to qadaq ho apni hum ko na thukraya ja tufan aaein bhanwar mein uljhein chahay door kinara ho Azam ye ker lia hay ke kashti ko paar utara jay Shad rahein nashad rahein chahay hum berbaad rehein Ulfat ka taqaza hay na ghum chehray pe sajaya jay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 22, 2004 very nice main ho na :hi: Na JANE KIS SAY BICHRA HOON "Mein khushian pane nikla tha Annsu le ker lota hoon Mein kirchi kirchi betha hoon Mein is terha say toota hoon Lahoo lahoo sab khawab meray Na jane kis say bichra hoon Hay sanse dafan mein be kafan Kis daldal mein ye utra hoon Karab zadha hein sab yadein meri Jo yadein mein le ker betha hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted March 22, 2004 nice both of you! "sENsEtIve" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 26, 2004 sensetive apni colection dikhao ab Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted March 27, 2004 (edited) ACHA?REALLY SACH BATAO UMAIR.ZM KIA KARO GAYE MERI FAZOOL SE COLLECTION DEKH KAR? CHALO TUM BHI KIA YAAD KARO GE LO IK SUNNO............... "KIUN ZINDA HUN" GHUM KI JAB HAR IK LEHR CHATTI, USDIN SE AJ TAK, TUJH SE KIA HAR EHD NEBHATA HUN, YEH SOOCH KAR, DARD SE CHIKH UTHTA HUN, TUM KISI AUR KE HO GAYE HO PHIR BHI, MEIN KIUN MOSQURRATA HUN, KIUN MEIN ZINDA HUN. I HOPE U'LL LIKE IT! "senSeTiVe" Edited March 27, 2004 by sensetive Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 28, 2004 senSeTiVe mein tu nice hoon hi poetry k c hai zara batana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 28, 2004 KOI BOHAT TOOT KAR YAD AARHA HO YA KOI SATH CHOR KAR JARHA HO LABON PAY MUSKAN SI BIKHRI HO YA ANKHOON MAIN BARSAT UTRI HO KHUSHI HO YA GAM DIL UDAS RHETA HAY SAWAN RUT KI KOI PHELI BARSAT HO YA DECEMBER KI KOI YAKH BASTA RAT HO MARCH KI KHUSHGAWAR HAWA CHAL RAHI HO YA JUNE KAY GARAM THAPARON SAY FAZA JAL RAHI HO KOI BHI HO MOSUM DIL UDAS RHETA HAY BASANT BAHAR AOR ZINDAGI KAY JHAMEELON MAIN KHUSHBOO AOR RANGOON KAY IN MELOON MAIN AAY MERAY HUMDAM DIL UDAS RHETA HAY APNAY GHAMOO KI GHYERAI MAIN DOB KAR KAL RAT TANHAI MAIN DOOB KAR MAIN NAY LIKHI AIK NAZAM DIL UDAS RHETA HAY KHUSHI HO YA GAM AAY!MAINRAY HAMDAM TUM BIN YAY DIL BOHAT UDAS REHTA HAY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sensetive 0 Posted March 28, 2004 nice mein hun naa Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 29, 2004 ohh sensetive jigar superb wahh wahh ... main hon na gr8 yar safar doreeon kay itna roea hoon kay ab ankoon maan pani bi nahi maan nay yah baat magher is ko batani bi nahi zandgi; ab too talak ki yahi soraat hay tuj say rakni bi hay are tuj say nabani bi nahi seraf ankheen haan jo ban jahaan too yah bi hay bohat pori taswer mughay is ki banani bi nahi koi bay faz safer payoon say lapta hay kay ham chaltay rahtay bi haan are nakal makani bi nahi aak dewaar kheri hay mari are is kay mabaan maan nay rakhni bi nahi is nay garani bi nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 29, 2004 Is raat ki.. tanhaeeyo ke Sab rang badal gaye hai Chand nikla hai waise hi Andhere badal gaye hai Jinke bharose thi khusiyan Wo badal gaye hain Manzile to abb bhi wo hi hain Kuch rastay badal gaye hain Jinpe kiya tha bharosa humne Wo dost bicharr gaye hain Dakhe thay kabhi jo humne Wo kahwab badal gaye hain Jo banay thay kabhi hamsafar Aaj wo hi mukarr gaye hain Ais tutay huye dil kay saray.. jazbaat badal gaye hain Na badle kabhi hum Na badle hamaray khayalat Bas rona hai yahi...... KUCHH LOG BADAL GAYE HAIN .. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
