rukh 25 Posted March 25, 2004 !!~~~~~~!! LAFZOON KI KAHANI !!~~~~~~!! lafzoon ki kahani hay saree zindgee jis per hum nay haree kuch lafz thay us ... kuch laffz thay meray her lafz main thay panhan kaye soo ishahray ik ik isharay mere dil ka aistayaray andheroon main chamkain jaisay taray lafzoon ki kahani hay saree zindgee jis per hum nay haree ahsasa ka lafzoon say woh rishta jaisay wahee lay ker ata ho farishta kia ab tum ko batain kia ab tum ko samjhain woh laffz jo thay dil kay sahray kion ban gaye hain derd kay challay lafzoon ki kahanee hay saree zingee jis per hum nay haree mer jatay hain insan bicher jatay hain rishtay lakin laffz nahi mertay laffz nahi bhoolty ik ik qadam per ik ik jahlak main her ik sahar main her ik lehar main ratoon kay andheroon main andheroon kay jazeroon main charagoon ki loo ki terha yeh laffz hain timtimatay lafzoon ki kahani hay saree zindgee jis per hum nay haree asan nahi hota meree jaan lafzoon ko samjhna dil ka sanbhlna sanbhlany main phir derd ka therna bara dushwar hota hay Rukh un lafzoon ko kissi or ka hotay dekhna jinhoon nay dikhaye thay kabhi humain bhi ujalay lafzoon ki kahani hay saree zindgee jis per hum nay haree !~~~~rukh~~~~! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 25, 2004 Tum Yaaad Aatee Hoo Jab Kabhi Choudhwen Ka Chand Dekhon Tum Yaad Aatey Ho..... Jab Kabhi Subha Ki Pehli Kiran Dekhon To Tumhari Muskurahat Yaad Aati Hai.... Jab Kabhi Souraj Ko Dhalta Dekhon To Tumharey Gham Yaad Aatey Hain... Jab Kabhi Parindon Ki Chechahat sunoo To Tumhari Madham Madhosh Awaz Sunai Day Jab Kabhi Gulab Ko Khilta Dekhon To Tumharey Labb Yaad aaye...... Jab Kabhi Barstey Badal dekhon To Tumhari Yaad Main Doobi...Woh Shaam Yaad aaye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted March 25, 2004 shairi wazan me ho ya na ho lakin dil se niklay howe sher dil per aser kertay hain Rukh i have no words to say anything Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 25, 2004 main hoon na > nice poetry :) pakistani > mere poetry weight less hotee hai is ley is main wazan nahi hota thanx anyway :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 26, 2004 very very nice rukh :hi: main ho na nice shair pakistani :) WOH MUJH SAY YEH NAHIN KEHTA USAY MUJH SAY MUHABBAT HAY MAGAR WOH AAJ KAL AIK JUNOON KI ZAD MAIN REHTA HAY AJAB AIK BAY KHUDEE HAY JO USAY BAYCHAIN RAKHTEE HAY WOH MUJH SAY BAAT KERTA HAY BUHAT HE AAM SEE,MOSAM KI , LOGON KI MEHAZ DUNIYA KI RASMI SEE WOH MUJH SAY BAAT KERNAY K BAHANAY DHOONDTA HAY UN HAWALON SAY SAMAJHTA HAY MAIN US KI AAM SEE BAATON KO BUS "YUNHI" SAMAJHTEE HOON WOH MILTA HAY MUJHAY AKSAR BAHANON SAY K MAIN GUZRA YAHAN SAY TO SOCHA BAAT HE KER LOON SAMAJHTA HAY MAIN US K IN BAHANOON KO NA JANOON GEE KABHI JO PHONE KERTA HAY TO USKI MUHABBAT US K LEHJAY SAY JHALAKTI HAY MUJHAY BAYCHAIN KERTEE HAY WOH MERA DHIYAN RAKHTA HAY MERE HER BAAT KO HE BIN KAHAY WOH JAAN LAYTA HAY SAMAJHTA HAY WOH YEH PHIR BHEE US NAY KHUD KO CHUPA RAKHA HAY KHUD HE SAY MAGAR AKSAR, WOH KHUD ANJANAY MAIN APNA YEH PERDA CHAAK KERTA HAY K JAB MERE BUHAT PEHLAY KAHI HUYEE HER BAAT KO WOH YAAD RAKHTA HAY AUR UNHI LAFZON KO MERE SAAMNAY DUHRA BHEE DAYTA HAY YUN LAGTA HAY K US NAY MERE KAHI HER BAAT KO YUN YAAD RAKHA HAY WOH JAISAY AIK MAHIFA HON WOH MUJH SAY YEH NAHIN KEHTA K US KI KHUAHISH USKO BUHAT BAYCHAIN RAKHTI HAY YA SHAYAD IN DINON WOH KHUD SAY BHEE CHUPATA HAY MAGAR USKI NIGAHAIN AKSAR USAY NAKAM KERTEE HAIN K SARAY JAAM ULFAT K WOH BHAR BHAR KER LUTATI HAIN WOH DERTA HAY KAHIN KHO NA DAY MUJH KO K KOI BAAT US KI MUJH KO US SAY DUUR NA KER DAY WOH MUJH KO SOCHTA HAY JAGTA HAY RAAT BHAR WOH BHEE MAGAR SHAYAD ABHEE US KO MUHABBAT MAIN KHAMOSHI SAY HE JALNA HAY K WOH JAB TAK PERH NAHIN LAYTA YEH AANKHAIN JIS MAIN K US KA NAAM LIKHA HAY K MERE LAHO KI GERDISHON MAIN RAQS KARTI CHAHATAIN US KI WOH JAB TAK PAA NAHIN LAYTA SAMAJH LAYTA NAHIN JAB TAK K MAIN BHEE GAMZAN HOON KHAMOSHI SAY US K RAASTAY PER MAIN BHEE JAGTEE HOON , SOCHTI HOON RAAT BHUR MAIN BHEE JAGTEE HOON , SOCHTI HOON RAAT BHAR US KO MAGAR US SAY NAHIN KEHTI "MUJHAY US SAY MUHABBAT HAY' Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted March 26, 2004 Rukh wow very nice!! Very nice by all!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 27, 2004 DIL JIS KE NAM PE DHARAKTA BHUT HAI DIL KO JIS SE RAKBAT BHUT HAI TERE BAGHAIR TANHA HAI KIUN KIUN PAL PAL TERE DEED KO TARASTA BHUT HAI TERE DEED KI TALAB SOGAWAR HAI KIUN TUJHE PANE KO IS DIL KI CHA BHUT HAI TUM MERE HO HER JAGA YE KHABER -E-AAM TEHRE RUSWAIYON KA KHAUF HAI WARNA YE KUHAHISH BHUT HAI WO BEWAFA NAHIN BEMISAAL MUHABBAT BHUT HAI APNI TAMAM TER NADANIYON KE WO MUJH KO AZIZ BHUT HAI. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 27, 2004 (edited) thanx umair & nadan ..:) main hoon na >nice poetry ! umair > such main mujhay app kay reply per itne hansee arhee hay main bata nahi saktee .. i know app nay poetry to kisii ki bhi perhee nahi ;) coz app nay pakistani ko kaha hay NICE SHAIR ..jub kay pakistani nay to koi SHAIR likha hee nahi hai .... pakray gayee na app Edited March 27, 2004 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 27, 2004 WOH MUJH SAY YEH NAHIN KEHTA USAY MUJH SAY MUHABBAT HAY MAGAR WOH AAJ KAL AIK JUNOON KI ZAD MAIN REHTA HAY AJAB AIK BAY KHUDEE HAY JO USAY BAYCHAIN RAKHTEE HAY WOH MUJH SAY BAAT KERTA HAY BUHAT HE AAM SEE,MOSAM KI , LOGON KI MEHAZ DUNIYA KI RASMI SEE WOH MUJH SAY BAAT KERNAY K BAHANAY DHOONDTA HAY UN HAWALON SAY SAMAJHTA HAY MAIN US KI AAM SEE BAATON KO BUS "YUNHI" SAMAJHTEE HOON WOH MILTA HAY MUJHAY AKSAR BAHANON SAY K MAIN GUZRA YAHAN SAY TO SOCHA BAAT HE KER LOON SAMAJHTA HAY MAIN US K IN BAHANOON KO NA JANOON GEE KABHI JO PHONE KERTA HAY TO USKI MUHABBAT US K LEHJAY SAY JHALAKTI HAY MUJHAY BAYCHAIN KERTEE HAY WOH MERA DHIYAN RAKHTA HAY MERE HER BAAT KO HE BIN KAHAY WOH JAAN LAYTA HAY SAMAJHTA HAY WOH YEH PHIR BHEE US NAY KHUD KO CHUPA RAKHA HAY KHUD HE SAY MAGAR AKSAR, WOH KHUD ANJANAY MAIN APNA YEH PERDA CHAAK KERTA HAY K JAB MERE BUHAT PEHLAY KAHI HUYEE HER BAAT KO WOH YAAD RAKHTA HAY AUR UNHI LAFZON KO MERE SAAMNAY DUHRA BHEE DAYTA HAY YUN LAGTA HAY K US NAY MERE KAHI HER BAAT KO YUN YAAD RAKHA HAY WOH JAISAY AIK MAHIFA HON WOH MUJH SAY YEH NAHIN KEHTA K US KI KHUAHISH USKO BUHAT BAYCHAIN RAKHTI HAY YA SHAYAD IN DINON WOH KHUD SAY BHEE CHUPATA HAY MAGAR USKI NIGAHAIN AKSAR USAY NAKAM KERTEE HAIN K SARAY JAAM ULFAT K WOH BHAR BHAR KER LUTATI HAIN WOH DERTA HAY KAHIN KHO NA DAY MUJH KO K KOI BAAT US KI MUJH KO US SAY DUUR NA KER DAY WOH MUJH KO SOCHTA HAY JAGTA HAY RAAT BHAR WOH BHEE MAGAR SHAYAD ABHEE US KO MUHABBAT MAIN KHAMOSHI SAY HE JALNA HAY K WOH JAB TAK PERH NAHIN LAYTA YEH AANKHAIN JIS MAIN K US KA NAAM LIKHA HAY K MERE LAHO KI GERDISHON MAIN RAQS KARTI CHAHATAIN US KI WOH JAB TAK PAA NAHIN LAYTA SAMAJH LAYTA NAHIN JAB TAK K MAIN BHEE GAMZAN HOON KHAMOSHI SAY US K RAASTAY PER MAIN BHEE JAGTEE HOON , SOCHTI HOON RAAT BHUR MAIN BHEE JAGTEE HOON , SOCHTI HOON RAAT BHAR US KO MAGAR US SAY NAHIN KEHTI "MUJHAY US SAY MUHABBAT HAY' [/b] oh my GOD its too much brillient poem .. umair really awesum collection ..mujhay bohat bohat bohat pasand ayee ... waisay to is poem ka ik ik word bohat acha but jo mainy qoute keye hain woh waqyee main bohat khoobsoort hain ... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted March 27, 2004 umar :) its wonerfull can you plz tell me yeh kis kee nazam hay its sucha a feeling its really touch my heart Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Abeera 0 Posted March 28, 2004 U MIGHT B 1 PERSON 4 DA WHOLE WORLD BUT 4 1 PERSON U MIGHT B DA WORLD kaha uss nay phool khil patay nahi rang bay rang hojatay hai khusbo khud say katrati hai chandni apni agoosh mai chup jati hai garz har cheez apna hawala khona chahti hai JAB BHI TUM MUSKURATI HO........................! abeera Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 28, 2004 (edited) kash! kuch lamhey mil jain agar wo tashnagi,wo shikastagi wo hikayatain,wo shikayatin jo ik pal na qarar tha teri berukhi mera pyar tha wo sab kuch main beyan karon jo barson se merey dilmain tha or isi ik pal ki dua k liye main apne rab k hozoor main yun girgira kar roi thi k chand lamhey rifaqaton k mayasser aain hamain is tarah main tum main yun sama sakon juda na koi kabhi kar sakey wo dua bhi hoi qobool thi wo lamha bhi ham ko mila magar na hikayatain,na shikayatain na fasana-e-dil main suna saki nahi man ki pyas bujha saki wo ik lamha kuch istarah gaya k khali hath thi main phela raha tha daman bhi nazar main ik sawal tha bas ik adhora khiyal tha sab kuch usi tarah se tha haan!ik qatra e khoon tha jo baha tha merey dil se yoon shikastagi ka malal tha thori bekasi,thori bebasi kuch mila jula sa hal tha bas itna yad tha mujhey merey hath yun girey k phir kabhi DUA main na ooth sakey Edited March 28, 2004 by mein_hoon_na Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted March 28, 2004 Hawa Jab Teez Chalti Hai Tumhari Yaad Aati Hai Jab Pattey Sar-Saratey Hain Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Kabhi Bholey Sey Shab Ko Meray Dil Main A Ker Dekho Hai Aik Mahfil Sajji Hoti Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Tumhin Kesay Bataoon Kitni Chahat Main Nay Ki Hai Tum Sey Kay Jab Bhi Aansoo Chhalaktey Hain Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Kabhi Chanda Ko Main Dekhon Kabhi Tarey Main Gintta Hoon Kabhi Chandni Muskurati Hai Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Zamana Hai Bohat Zalim Kahin Yeh Chhen Na Lay Tum Ko Isi Liyey Main Buss Khamosh Hota Hoon Aur Ziker Tumhara Hota Hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted March 29, 2004 umair > such main mujhay app kay reply per itne hansee arhee hay main bata nahi saktee .. i know app nay poetry to kisii ki bhi perhee nahi coz app nay pakistani ko kaha hay NICE SHAIR ..jub kay pakistani nay to koi SHAIR likha hee nahi hai .... pakray gayee na app ohh sorry ghalatee mistake ho gayee :D oh my GOD its too much brillient poem .. umair really awesum collection ..mujhay bohat bohat bohat pasand ayee ... waisay to is poem ka ik ik word bohat acha but jo mainy qoute keye hain woh waqyee main bohat khoobsoort hain ... thank u thank u very much for ur kind words on colection :) ...main to hamesha se achie posting karita hon lakin laghta hia ap ne parhi pehli bar hia .. anywaz thanx alot :) umar its wonerfull can you plz tell me yeh kis kee nazam hay its sucha a feeling its really touch my heart paki bhaie thanx alot but i don know kis ki iha yeh ... actually mujhye forward mail main mili thee BOHUT PASAND ayee mujhye is liye ap sab ke liye pesh kar di n dan maine woh mail delete bhie kar di :( very ncie colection all :hi: ab naam nahie le raha warina rkh phir pakar lein ghee app anywaz guyss itrs ma last day here in cy community ...apna bohut bohut khayal rakhiyee gha ALLAH HAFIZ :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted March 29, 2004 Kabhi kabhi tou chhalak parti hain yoonhi be-sabab aankhein Udaas honey ka koi sabab nahin hota Mein Waledain ko yeh baat kaisey samjhaaoon Mohabbaton mein " Hasab Nasab " nahin hota Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted March 30, 2004 umair> last day kia hota hay examz kay bad wapus ana hay na ..to just say miltay hain break kay bad :D nice poetry pakistnai ..bohat zyada hee zikker ho gya :P main hoon na> bohat khoob Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
