rukh 25 Posted May 3, 2004 ~**~Ideal~**~ Zindagi ki dhoop mein Hamsafar ke roop mein Bane jo mera sayeban Hoon us mein chund yeh khoobiaan Khush shakl zaroor ho Per us pe na ghuroor ho Chaal mein wakaar ho Shookhioon se pyar ho Guftugu mein narm ho Mizaj ka na gurm ho Bala se who ghareeb ho Per shurt hai shareef ho Ho nifasatoon ki baat tow Misaal us ki zaat ho Zarf bakamaal ho Na dil mein koi baal ho Jab bazm ki who jaan ho Khuda ka bhi dhayan ho Deen ki sakht raah mein De is tarha se sath who Jahan bhi dagmagaaoon mein Pakre mera hath who Faraib de na who mujhe Zindagi ke mour per Kahin pare na tourna Us se naata jour ker Haan aisa ho agar kabhi Mein bhool ker alam sabhi Us sulagty raah per Us ka hath thaam ker Zindagi ke rooz-o-shub Hunske bas guzaar doon Kare wafa jo who sada tow Jaan us pe waar doon Mager yeh khwaab hain mere Hakeekatoon se bekhabar Keh………!!! Hakeekatein tow talh hain Aur talkh jaam pee ke ab Koi jhoomta hai kab Ke ab nasha tow zer mein hai Ya mekaday ke der mein hai Aur zindagi ki dhoop mein Hamsafer ke roop mein Koi ban ke mere saibaan Kion piye yeh talkhiyaan Who talkhiyaan jo zindagi ki rooh ko nikhaar dein Azeem ek waqaar dein aur aakhirat sanwaar dein Keh ab nasha tow zer mein hai Ya mekaday ke der mein hai Aur yeh khwaab hain mere Hakeekatoon se bekhabar…. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
modhi 0 Posted May 4, 2004 Rukh jii mey hu naa :P sorry just kidding wasey asaa insaan dhondnaa erygaa or phir dhondney sey tu khuda bhee mil jatye hey tu yaa 5'' 5 ka inssan kyaa cheez hey jii wasey rukh ji kyaa waqee aap ko lagtaa hey k iss door mey bhee asey insaan mil jatye hey <_< mare duaa hey k aap ko aap ka ideal zaroor mil jaye gaa chintaa nakoo regards mahmood shah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrystalHeart 0 Posted May 4, 2004 very nice rukh:yes: Kon Kisi Ki Khater Day Ga Itni Sachi Qurbani Badal Sab Ki Piyas Bujha Kar Khud Piyasa Rah Jata Hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
modhi 0 Posted May 4, 2004 very nice rukh:yes: Kon Kisi Ki Khater Day Ga Itni Sachi Qurbani Badal Sab Ki Piyas Bujha Kar Khud Piyasa Rah Jata Hai crystel jii apney he geratey hey nasheman per bejlyaa regards mahmood shah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pakistani 0 Posted May 4, 2004 Bala se who ghareeb ho Per shurt hai shareef ho Nice poem but i am sure these are not your words ab itni der se apkay post perh rehay hain itna to andaza ho jata hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ariba 0 Posted May 4, 2004 Wa wah!!! Shair bhi bakamaal hoo. :P Idealisim issi ko tou kehte hain. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted May 6, 2004 Rukh jii mey hu naa shah jee mera nick apnay naam se galat baat :PRUKH NICE POST Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanum 0 Posted May 6, 2004 zabardust ideal ;) Rukh ye tumhari poetry hai ya collection B) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
modhi 0 Posted May 6, 2004 sunum jii of course collection hey kioo k rukh jii abhee tuk mare shgirdee mey ju nahe aaye hey naa :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted May 8, 2004 Rukh> Good work yar beautifull Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted May 10, 2004 abe alfazon main samjha na yar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted May 10, 2004 Ideal is Ideal... luck for lucky get it prime one is ideal for one, as able ideal is ideal not a dream is a wish but it possible Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
modhi 0 Posted May 10, 2004 abe alfazon main samjha na yar NAHEE REHNEY DEY YAAR TU MIND KER JAYGAA :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted May 10, 2004 Nice poem but i am sure these are not your words ab itni der se apkay post perh rehay hain itna to andaza ho jata hay pakistani > thanx yup u r rgiht its not mine ..app ka andaza sahee hoa jain ja ker market say gift lay lain lakin apnay kherchay per :P waysay app ko pooooooooore poem main sirf yeh 2 line hee kion kabl-e-ghor lageen :P Wa wah!!!Shair bhi bakamaal hoo. Idealisim issi ko tou kehte hain. ariba > lolzzz.. chalo app kay ley SHAIR ki shert mazeed add ker laytay hain :P theek hay na :D RUKH NICE POST main hoon na > thanx zabardust ideal Rukh ye tumhari poetry hai ya collection sanum ..nahi mere poetry nahi hay ..:D or yeh ideal bhi mera nahi hay :D Rukh> Good work yarbeautifull dil hay pakistani thanx but plzzzz DONT USE WORD <YAR> 4 girls ok ? be care full now ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted May 10, 2004 Rukh jii mey hu naa sorry just kidding wasey asaa insaan dhondnaa erygaa or phir dhondney sey tu khuda bhee mil jatye hey tu yaa 5'' 5 ka inssan kyaa cheez hey jii wasey rukh ji kyaa waqee aap ko lagtaa hey k iss door mey bhee asey insaan mil jatye hey mare duaa hey k aap ko aap ka ideal zaroor mil jaye gaa chintaa nakoo modhi > i know yeh mazak tha lakin phir bhi mujhay aysay mazak pasand nahi is ley kuch post kernay say pehlay ahtyat kia kerain yeh sirf poem hay jo mainy yahan post kerdee .. mainy yeh kub kaha kay its my thoughts ? crystal heart > thanx :) & nice shair Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
modhi 0 Posted May 11, 2004 abe alfazon main samjha na yar SUNAA AAP NYE BHEE DIL HEY PAKISTANI MEY NEY AAP KO ALFAZOO MEY KIO NAHE SUMHYAA RUKH NEY AAP KO ALFAZOO MEY ACHE TREH SUMJHAADYAA OR MUJHEY BHEE :( LAKIN RUKH JII JUB YAA NA TU AAP KI POEM HEY OR NA AAP KA IDEAL TU PHIR GUSSA KERNEY KI TU KOI BAAT NAHE HEY ANYWAYS THANX FOR GUSSA Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anayat 0 Posted May 11, 2004 Dekh ker woh mujhey heraan bhi ho sakta hai Ab ke iss baat ka imkaan bhi ho sakta hay Apni maan mohni soorat pey udaasi na bakher Iss tarah se koi pareshan bhi ho sakta hai Jab woh munh pher ke jatey hain to mein sochti hoon Itna zalim koi insaan bhi ho sakta hai Ghar ki dehleez per mashal liye mojood hoon mein Aney wala koi anjaan bhi ho sakta hai Apni ankhon se nikaltey hoay ansoo roko In ke peechey koi tufaan bhi ho sakta hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrystalHeart 0 Posted May 11, 2004 All r doing very well keep it up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted May 11, 2004 sorry girls i will not use this word again Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted May 11, 2004 nice posting rukh :) :hi: modhi ziyada baat ko ulita seedha mat karo ... juss read poetry appriciate it dats it ... kisi ko kuch bura laghey its better aesa kuch kaha hie na jaye don u think so ? anayat>> nice posting :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted May 11, 2004 WOW rukh it's just Superb such lovely wording :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ADD 0 Posted May 11, 2004 salam 2 all RUKH ;) janaba aap ki poetry bohat achi hai aur is se aap k khayalat ka pata lag gaya waise jo log main hoona kehrahe hain aik dafa phir sochlein rukh k bare main aik daustana mashwara hai ;) Regards its me AD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted May 11, 2004 dil hay pakistani > its ok now ! modhi > to app aisee bat na kerain jis per mujh koo gusa ayee umair > thanx kiran > thanx :D ADD> yeh mere poetry nahi hay ..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ADD 0 Posted May 11, 2004 salam 2 all RUKH mera matlab aap ki posted poetry tha ;) agar pehle pata hota tu kuch aur bhi kehta taake aap sir zor se maartin Regards its me AD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
