NaDaN 0 Posted September 3, 2003 Bugs i m very late.. but You are really good in poetry.. ager yeah app kay bus ka roog nahee tu ... may tu yahee kahon gee you have been modest.. anyways.. i have written lots of stuff but in english.. ek poem likhee thee urdu ke jo kay ab kho gai hay.. :( han ek shir likha tha... so hansna mat plz.. "Us Ke Cahoatoo Kay Zahoor Per Yeah Zawal Kasa A Gaya May Idher Udher Biker Gai Yeah Mukam Kasa A Gaya Meray Ahsasat Ke Tasheeer Yeah Ajj Kassay Ho Gai Meray Firada Kay Fikker Ko Yeah Shaksh Kon A Gaya!!" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 3, 2003 salam bugs bhaie......yar main itney dinon se yahan community main hoon aur app ka to kuch pata hie nahieni chala kher app ke shairee bohut achie laghee aur app kie larayee bhie;)...... ab meeri taraf se kuch nazrana app sab ke liye......... DIL MAIN REHTA HAY KHUDA "dil main rehta hay khuda,or khuda hay naam-e-ishq aa na jaiy ishq per, koi naya ilzam-e-ishq door baitha hoon saboot-e-khoon chupaiy hasher main aa na jaiy unkay damen per kaheen ilzam-e-ishq khoon-e-dil kum hay to zalim, kaatlay meri zubaan bay zubani main tujhay,kia daingay hum ilzam-e-ishq ishq, suda to naheen,jo qaias nay ser ker lia ishq jazbah hay,dia laila nay yeh piagham-e-ishq rastay main dekhnay ki zid na kertay, toor per julnay walon ko bhi mil jata, qabool-e-aam-e-ishq kia muhbbat aasmanon per bhi piyasi hay khuda ? bhej hi dala,zameen per tonay bhi paigham-e-ishq wajah-e-taameer-e-mahal,kuch bhi sahi , kaisi sahi pathroon nay hi dia hay ,ishq ko anjaam-e-ishq raah-e-ulfet main koi dakhay, farishton ki ada ishq to bus ishq hay , kia ishq main anjam-e-ishq kuch thay dewanay,jo mujh per hans diay, meri tareh or kuch aisay hansay, keh burh gia ibham-e-ishq jhuk kay dekha jo zara,pai-e-nazuk kay nishan woh meray sujday alug thay,yeh bara-e-naam-e-ishq jul gia tujhko jo dekha,"umair"nay roshan zameer aadmi hoon kam ka ,bus masawa-e-kam-e-ishq ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 9, 2003 salam guyzzz..... thanx nadan jie:).....for compliments.... "Makhloq ki mohabbat may dewana war hay. Khaliq ki mohabbat say kion anjan hay. Makhloq say mohabbat may kuch milta nahin. Khaliq ki mohabbat say sub teray pass hay. ok bye guyzz tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted September 10, 2003 wow nice umair n bugs... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 11, 2003 thanx kiran :)...... hai tairai sath maire wafa "hai tairai sath maire wafa mai nahi to kya zinda rahaiga pyaar maira mai nah to kya senai mai dard dil mai tamana jalayaija yai raat jagnai ke hai shamai jalayai ja tu jashan zindagi ka mana mainahi to kya kuch dhadkano ka zikarho kuch dil ke baat ho mumkin hai is kai baad na din ho na raat ho mairai liyai na aashq baha mai nahi to kya hai tairai sath maire wafa mai nahi to kya ok bye tc all ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 14, 2003 aray us say pocho kay tum nahee tu kiya.. nice one Umair! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 14, 2003 nadan us ne kaha k tum nahien to main bhie nahieni:crying: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 17, 2003 well Allha keray thing get better for You guys!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 17, 2003 thanx nadan for ur kind words:)wel a a poetry for u guyzz... pahli mohabbat yaad ati ha .. "" afsoos ka ab woh zamanee na rahe tum hamaree na rahee hum tumharee na rahee woh lamhee na rahee woh baharee na raheen woh darya na rahee woh kinaty na rahee jin nazroon mai dobay hoya tha hum jiss hoson mai khohee hoye tha hum woh nazaree na rahee woh sarary na rahee tum door bohoot door cala gai hum se ab woh rasty na rahee woh manzal na rahee yeh fasla jo doo qadam ka thi jise tum kabhi na meta sakhee woh fasle na rahee woh kafle na rahee ek dastan jise lakha kartee thi farah ab woh kahane na rahee woh fasane na rahee afsoos ka ab woh zamane na rahee tum hamaree na rahee hum tumharee na rahee ok bye tc all ALAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
