Aik Dewaana Sa Larka Aur Aik Pagal Pagal Larki..!

[Sweetoo 0]

Aik qose qazaah ke rangoon ki sundar se tittle the

Aik dewaana sa larka tha aik pagal pagal larki the

Her shaam shafaq per subha jawan tabeer ki baatien karte the

Dhoop,hawa,baarish,jugnu,tanveer ki baatien karte the

Jaagi aankhon k khawaboon ki tabeer ki baatien karte the

rasmoon aur rawajoon ki zanjeer ki baatien karte the

woh roshan roshan aankhoon ki aur sidq-o-wafa ki baatien thien

ujle ujle haathoon per woh rang-e-hina ki baatien the

khushboo chand sitaroon ki,aur hawa ki baatien thien

saahil se milte lahroon ki aur hawa ki baatien thien

Aik qose qazaah ke rangoon ki sundar se tittle the

Aik dewaana sa larka tha aik pagal pagal larki the

mausam badle,waqt gaya,phool murghaane lage

shaam dhale tou saare panchee apne gher ko jaane lage

naddi nahate seep se bacche loot k gher aane lage

Gaoon k saare pagal jugnu geet judaii k gaane lage

aik dooor nagar ka shahzada woh tittle lene aaya tha

aur apne saath sitaroon k anmol nageene laya tha

phir rasm-o-rawaj ki zenjeeroon ne bal aik aisa khaaya tha

tittle aur shahzade ne khawabon ka mahal sajaaya tha

Ab qose qazaah ke rangoon ki woh hai sundar tittle

per jo dewaana sa larka tha ab pagal pagal larka hai...!

[drgoof 0]

nice

[CrystalHeart 0]

very niec

[Sweetoo 0]

Thanx crystalHeart and drgoof

I think u should participate to exceed the topic.

what do u think both?

Sweetoo

[RUBY_4U 0]

SALAM,

very nice sweetoo

[umair.zm 0]

very nice sweeto :hi: si topic related kuch stuff nahien hia warina post karita :) ...

[Sweetoo 0]

thanx a lot ruby and umair.zm

umair>lolzzz

Sweetoo

[the gr8 0]

Ak Khush Baash Ladki

Kabhi Choor Aankhoon Say Dekh Lia

Kabhi Bay Dhehani Ka Zaher Dia.

Kabhi Hontoon Say Sargoshi Ke

Kabhi Chaal Chale Khamoshi Ke.

Jab Janay Lagay To Rouk Lia

Jab Bhatnay Lagay To Took Dia.

OR Jab Bhi Koee Sawal Kia

Us Nay Hans Kay Taal Dia.

[umair.zm 0]

nice one gr8 :hi:

Dosti hamari aisi ki dil chahe tu har safar har dagar me mile,

mar bhi jayen to pyar rahe Qayamat tak our tu sath bali kabar me mile//

[RUBY_4U 0]

salam,

very nice gr8 and umair

mat pooch ke hum zabt ki kis rah se guzre

yeh dekh ke tujh per koi ilzam na aaya <_<

[umair.zm 0]

w salam :hi:

ruby>>. thanx n nice sher

"Kabhi to tumko bhi hamhari,

yun yaad aati hoge.

kabhi to tumhara dil bhi,

milne ka karta hoga.

Tor ke dil hamahara,

kabhi tumhara bhi to dil rota hoga.

Beeteh hue baatein soch kar,

tumhare aankeh bhi to bher aati hoge.

Itne dur jakar,

vapis aane ko dil tumhara bhi to karta hoga.

Tor ke dil dil hamara,

kabhi pachtava tumko bhi to hota hoga!!!

[RUBY_4U 0]

salam,

hmm umair tumhari shairi bohot aachi hoti hai zabardast

rasaye

raat aur samander main

baat aur samander main

zaat aur samnder main

farq kitna thora hai

[umair.zm 0]

ruby >>. w salam :hi: karam nawazish jie ....

nice sher :hi:

[RUBY_4U 0]

SALAM,

THANX

PALAT SAKOON HI,NA AAGEYE BER SAKOON JIS PER ,

MUJHE YEH KON SE RASTE LAGA GAYA EK SHAKS.

[umair.zm 0]

w salam :hi:

nice sher :hi: woih shaks bara hie dheet hia

us ka tufah

"MERI ZINDAGI SAY NIKAL KAR ACHI NASHANIA DAY GAYA

OMER BHAR ZAKHMO KA AISA ZAKHIRA DAY GAYA

MUNJH SAY BHICHAR KAR AISAY ASHK DAY GAYA

JO NAY TEHRAY THAY KABHI ANKHO MAY AISAY ANSO DAY GAYA

HUM AAG SAY KHILNAY WALAY THAY PAR TUM NAY

JIS SAY NA JALAY THAY KABHI AISI AAG HUM KO DAY GAYA

JIN WAFA DARO KO DEKH KAR PARAY PIYAR SAY MILTAY THAY HUM

BE-WAFAO KI PHECHAN HOI HUM KO AIK AISA AYNA DAY GAYA

DIL LAGI BE-WAFAI PAS-E-MOBAHABBAT KAYA HAY

JO NA PHARI THI KABHI HUM KO AIK AISI KITAB DAY GAYA

[Sweetoo 0]

very nice all of u.

Sun ker hamare dukh jo royaa tha ik shakhs

zinda rahe tou yaad rakhien ge umer bhar

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kuch log mohabbat ka sila iss tarah dete hain

dil torte hain wafa ko badnaam karte hain

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Sweetoo

Edited July 11, 2004 by Sweetoo

[RUBY_4U 0]

salam,

thanx and nice shair

umair ab woh dheet hai ya nahin yeh to shair kehne wale shayeer ko pata hoga na

[mein_hoon_na 0]

USI ISHQ SEY USI CHAH SEY USI PYAR SEY USI MAAN SEY

MERY HATH MAI EK GULAAB DOO MAIN BOHAT DINO SEY UDAAS HOON

[mein_hoon_na 0]

koi bhi sapna na dhaikho

kay sapnay toot jaatay hain

kay khushiyoun kay sabhi rangeen mausam rooth jaatay hain

kay sheeshoun ki tarha naazuk

yeh dil bhi toot jaatay hain

diloun ki khuwahishain jaana

kabhi poori nahin hoteen

kay dil ki khuwahishain itni

zaroori bhi nahin hoteen

kisi ko chahtay rehnay say

chahat mil nahin jaati

mohabbat baant dainay say

mohabbat mil nahin jaati

kay dil ki dunya lut jai

kay sub kuch khatam ho jai

kisi ko itna na chaho

kisi ko itna na socho

koi bhi sapna na daikha

kay sapnay toot jaatay hain

[RUBY_4U 0]

salam,

wow zabardast nazam hai mhn nice

waqi sapnay toot jate hain per kuch pure bhi to hogate hain ;)

kabhi kabhi koi yaad

koi bohot purani yaad

dil ke darwaze per

aaese dastak deti hai

sham ko jese tara nikle

subha ko jese phool

jese dhere dhere zameen per

roshniyoon ka nozol

jese rooh ki piyas bujhane

utre koi rasool

jese rote rote achanak

haas de koi malool

kabhi kabhi koi yaad,koi boht purani yaad

dil ke darwaze per aaese dastak deti hai

[umair.zm 0]

sweeto >>> so ncie shers :hi:

mhn >>> very nice colection buddy

ruby >>>soooo nice :hi: ... acha jie shair ki marzi bas :)

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

"Jub jub bhi uss ki yaad aa rahi hai

Dil ko ek tees c terpa rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

Kuch na kehne per dil bhi pereshan hai bauhut

Aur sansoon ki ghutun bhi berhti jaa rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

Zubaan k dareeche pe tu quful(lock) daal diye hum ne

Per dil se tu mosulsul sada aa rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

Main wo begunah mujrim hon k jiss ki

qaid-e-tenhai berhti jaa rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

Aub tu raaton ko bhi yaad uss ki humain

Ansoo khoon k rola rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

Jiss Shehr mein dhondhne niklay thay hum wafa k mooti

Wahan tu bewafai ki andhi zurd pattay ura rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

Mujhay dar hai k main na paa sakon ga faraz(height)

Nasheeb(below) se tu yehi sada aa rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

Na wo hai, na uss ki sada koi

woh bhie buss meri yaad se dil behla rahi hai

RaaiT HathooN Se Phisli Jaa Rahi Hai

[RUBY_4U 0]

salam,

hmm zabardast umair bohot hi achi thi

woh apne ishq main kesa kamal rakhta hai

ke berukhi main bhi mera khayal rakhta hai

jo aj mera nahin woh kal mera hoga

ke her zamana urooj o zawal rakhta hai

ajab nahin woh jahan bhar ko bewafa samjhe

nazar main meri wafa ki misal rakhta hai

tera khayal hi kuch mehrban hai werna

jahan main kon kisi ka khayal rakhta hai

[umair.zm 0]

w salam n thanx ruby :hi:

it was so nice posting :)

Abhi is taraf na nigah kar

"Abhi is taraf na nigah kar main ghazal ki palkain sanwaar loon,, Mera lafz lafz ho aaena tujhay aaene main utaar loon

main tamaam din ka thaka huwa tu tamaam shab ka jagaa huwa,, Zara thehar ja is moor per tere saath shaam guzaar loon

Agar aasman ki numaishoon main mujhay bhi izan e qayaam ho,, To main mootiyun ki dukaan se teri baaliyan tere haar loon

Kayi ajnabi teri raah ke meray paas se yun guzar gaye,, Jinhain deekh ke ye tarap hui tera naam le ke pukaar loon

[mein_hoon_na 0]

Aaj udhas hoon tow zamana mujhey phochney aya ..

Magar Jis pe tha sadiyon ka bharam woh nahi aya..

Woh tow ek khuwaab tha toot gaya bikhar gaya hai..

ajj udhas lamhon main phir kyon mujhey woh yaad aya..

Zindagi ki musrufiyat ke woh chund din jo guzar chuke hain..

na hi un pe urooj aya,aur na hi un pe zawaal aya...

Bhool na chahti hoon har lamha ,har waqt jo guzar gaya hai..

jitna bhi rokka woh waqt utna woh mere sath chala aya...

Guzra hua kal na tha mera, na hai mera aur na ho ga kabhi...

yeh mein janti hoon magar phir bhi na dil ko karaar aya..

woh waade teri woh kasmein woh sab yaad hain mujhe...

magar phir bhi kabhi tum ko mera dil na bhoola paya..

ana parast the tum tow khudaar thi main bhi

yeh rishta hi humare dermiyaan na raas aya..

us ki muskurahat tere liye ek fareb thi kiran ..

tu thi nadan, dil tera usse na samajh paya

[Sweetoo 0]

very nice mhn,umair and ruby

mhn>> very nice

usse kabhi na kabhi tou bichrr he jaana tha

yeh hadsa bhi merey zindage mien aana tha

woh aik shakhs mujhe saare umer tarse ga

nasseb us k k us ne mujhe gunwana tha

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Dil mien chuppa liyaa hai terey gham ko iss tarah

yeh bhi bichrr na jayee merey piyaar ki tarah

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