...``..`.`.gehri Neend Kitaab Aur Main.`.`..``...

[Amaya 3]

khirki chand kitaab or mein

mudat sey ik baab or main

shab bhar khalein apas main

do aankhen ik khwab or mein

moj or kashti sahil per

dariya mein gardaab or mein

shaam udasi khamoshi

kuch kankar talaab or mein

har shab pakrey jatey hen

gehri neend tery khwab or mein !

Edited February 16, 2010 by Amaya

[Hmm 1]

Nice One Amaya

Correct One is ....

Her shab pakray janaty hain

Gehri neend, tere Khwaab or Main

Edited February 16, 2010 by Hmm

[Amaya 3]

thanku ma dear....for correction n appreciation..wcb sis nice 2 see u..mahi main ny correct kr diya ....

Edited February 16, 2010 by Amaya

[Talaash 0]

Very Nice

[Hmm 1]

thanku ma dear....for correction n appreciation..wcb sis nice 2 see u..mahi main ny correct kr diya ....

ThankSs jee !!!

actually i was hesitating k sahyd aap mind na kr lOo...

but atlast mene post kr hi diya...

Hmmm...Bohat acha kiya ap nay Joo Correct kr diya

So Nice OV U...