Syra 0 Posted August 10, 2004 Tum Raaz Agar Hotey....... Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti Muskaati hui Aankhein, aelaan na bun jaaein Jab naam tera aata, Palkon ko jhuka leti Tum meri taraf chal kar, jiss raah se bhi aatey Hur simt meri Aankehin, qadmaon ke taley paatey Aik meethi hansi , hans kar , sow phool khilaa jaatey Yeh Phool Utha leti, Rangon mein naha leti Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti Tum meri umeedon ki kashti ke liyey Saahil manzil ke liyey Rusta, Aankhon ke liyey Kajal Tum Dhoop mein jab aatey, bun jaati waheen Badal Aawaaz agar hotey, Geeton mein saja leti Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti love u all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute rania 0 Posted August 10, 2004 Excellent , zabardast .. really very nice... Yaadein hi reh gayeen hain fakat hasil-e-hiyat kabzay main meray dil k koyee dolat nahin rahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted August 10, 2004 thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx Rania :)ur poetry is zaberdastttttttttttttttttttttttttttt tooooooooooooooooooooooooo :yes: love u all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrystalHeart 0 Posted August 10, 2004 Tum Raaz Agar Hotey....... Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti Muskaati hui Aankhein, aelaan na bun jaaein Jab naam tera aata, Palkon ko jhuka leti Tum meri taraf chal kar, jiss raah se bhi aatey Hur simt meri Aankehin, qadmaon ke taley paatey Aik meethi hansi , hans kar , sow phool khilaa jaatey Yeh Phool Utha leti, Rangon mein naha leti Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti Tum meri umeedon ki kashti ke liyey Saahil manzil ke liyey Rusta, Aankhon ke liyey Kajal Tum Dhoop mein jab aatey, bun jaati waheen Badal Aawaaz agar hotey, Geeton mein saja leti Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti its simply excellent :flower: welldone Syra Tum chaho tu mary in haton ki Talaashi lay lo Mray hathon mein lakeeron kay sive kuch bi nahie Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted August 11, 2004 thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx Crystal :f: superbbbbbbbb shairrrrrrr Tujh say karta hon mulaqaat simetnay kay liye Tujh say milta hon to kuch aur bikhar jata hon love u all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 11, 2004 AOA all superb ghazal syra Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted August 11, 2004 Tum Raaz Agar Hotey.......Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti Muskaati hui Aankhein, aelaan na bun jaaein Jab naam tera aata, Palkon ko jhuka leti Tum meri taraf chal kar, jiss raah se bhi aatey Hur simt meri Aankehin, qadmaon ke taley paatey Aik meethi hansi , hans kar , sow phool khilaa jaatey Yeh Phool Utha leti, Rangon mein naha leti Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti Tum meri umeedon ki kashti ke liyey Saahil manzil ke liyey Rusta, Aankhon ke liyey Kajal Tum Dhoop mein jab aatey, bun jaati waheen Badal Aawaaz agar hotey, Geeton mein saja leti Tum Raaz agar hotey, Mein Dil mein chhupa leti super syra Her aik muskarhat muskan nahi hoti Mohabbat ho yah nafrat asaan nahi hoti Anso khushi kay aur gham kay hotay hain aik jaisay In ansoon ki koi pehchan nahi hoti Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
innocent4nu 0 Posted August 11, 2004 thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx Crystal :f:superbbbbbbbb shairrrrrrr Tujh say karta hon mulaqaat simetnay kay liye Tujh say milta hon to kuch aur bikhar jata hon love u all waho nice shair..... i nay per kabi kitab main hain ! us ke ankian ajab azab main hain us ke adat hai ruthna mohsin log bila wja iztrab main hain. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted August 12, 2004 palkoon main kuch khwaab saja kay unjaani rahoon pay ja kay kiya hai khya kiya hai paya aakash pay ik ghar bana kay ik halla khushyon ka bana kay man chahay kuch deep jalakay guzzar gaya jo aaj na aya kiya paoo gay ik AAJ bana kay aansoo ko shabnam main bhigoo kay aas ko dharkan main sajjo kay ik tamasha aap sajaya dard ko aankhon say dhoo kay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted August 12, 2004 :hi: thnxxxxxxxxxxxxx to all here is one more Log poochtey hain muj sey kuyun surkh hein aankhein aankhein mal key kehta hoon raat so na saka lakh chahoon bhee to ye keh na paon ga kabhi raat roney ke khawahish thi aur ro na saka love u all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted August 14, 2004 tujh ko samajh k tujh mein kkhona chahti hoon tujh mein simat kar teri hona chahti hoo na ho koi duja tera saath chahti hoon inn haathon mein tera he haath chahti hoon mein baadilon se barsaat chahti hoon woh barastay rahain her raat chahti hoon yeh duniya tere saath ghoomna chahti hoon mein dharti gagan choomna chahti hoon tujh sung saagar se nikalna seep chahti hoon jalta rahay apnay piyar ka deep chahti hoon jheel kinaaray ik makan chahti hoon na ho apnay koi darmian chahti hoon mein banna teri dulhan chahti hoon naa karna koi bhi jatan chahti hoon yeh sapnay sub pooray karna chahti hoon mein tujh ko haan bus tujhay chahti hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 14, 2004 Gr8 contribution MHN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Syra 0 Posted August 16, 2004 Hey mein hoo na keep doing its zaber10!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love u all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
saamia 0 Posted August 21, 2004 Asalam o Alaikum . very very good mai hoo na , u r 2 good keep it up boy . Janay walao us basti may pegam mera latay jana Ya khana tum to kahtay thay Kay tum bin jee na pay gay Tor kay sari rasmo ko Bus apna tumhay banay gay Janay walao us basti may pegam mera latay jana Ya dekna kay wo kasay han Jo meray bin ab rehtay han Kia ab be un kee anko may Wo payar kay sager bahtay ha Janay walao us basti may pegam mera latay jana Ya khana achi bat nahi Jo tum bin guzray rat nahi Ya khana ishak ha barso ka Koi do pall ke mulakat nahi Janay walao us basti may pegam mera latay jana Ya sochna un say khana tum Jab yad humari ay too Ek bar pulat ker a jana Gur ishak tumhay turpay to Janay walao us basti may pegam mera latay jana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
