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Assalam O Alikum,

Poetry Competition End hogaya ab bari hai Result ki.... Aur us k liya main ap ko bata don k is baar result thora different hoga kyn k ab hum nay apni 2 Judges ko hire kia hai k woh yahan aayan aur 2no Teams ki Received Entries ko 10 main sy points dain..... so hum Chinky Aur Aamay ko Welcum kehtay hain :flower4u:

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Legion Of Powers Entries

~~ Imi.munib ~~

Katoon si chubhti hai Tanhai

Angaroon si sulagti hai Tanhai

Koi aa kar hum dono ko hansa de

Main rota hoon rone lagti hai Tanhai

Jab bhi tere Hisar se nikalna chaha

Yaadoon k beej bone lagti hai Tanhai

Raat k kisi hise main yeh bhi Bewafa ho jati hai

Main nahi sota sone lagti hai Tanhai

Tum se judaa ho kar is se hi Dil laga lia hai

Mar sa jata hoon jab khone lagti hai Tanhai..

SimpleRayyan

""Main Or Mari Tanhai""

Rehtey Hain Saath Saath Mai Aur Meri Tanhai

Kartey Hain Raaz Ki Baat Mai Aur Meri Tanhai

Din To Guzar Hi Jata Hai Logon Ki Bheer Mai

Kartey Hain Basar Raat Main Meri Tanhai

Saanson Ka Kya Bharosa Kab Chor Jain Saath

Laikin Rahain Gay Saath Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Aaye Na Tumhe Yaad Kabhi Bhul Kar Bhi Hum

Kartey Hain Tumhe Yaad Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Aa Ke Paas Kyon Door Ho Gaye Hum Se

Kartey Hain Teri Talash Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Tum Ko Rakhain Gay Saath Zeenat Bana Kay Ghar Ki

Reh Jain Phir Na Tanha Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Shahabi

Tanhayi Ki Yeh Kuch Aisi Ajab Raat Hai

Tujhse Judi Hui Har Yaad Mere Saath Hai

Kis Kadar Ki Thi Mohabbat Humne Tumse

Soch Kar Hui Aaj Ashqon Se Mulaqaat Hai

Kaisa Junoon Tha Us Ishq Mein Dil Ro Aya

Machal Utha Phir Se Har Woh Jazbaat Hai

Tu Mujhko Bewafa Keh Gaya Najane Kyo

Gar Chahna Bewafayi Hai , To Bewafayi Ki Raat Hai

Tadap Raha Hai Tanha Chand Bina Chandni K

Is Andheri Raat Mein Aaj Kuch Aur Hi Baat Hai

Yu Aye Zindagi Mujhe Akela Chordh Diya Tune

Ke Kafan Odh Rahi Mujh Par Aaj Yeh Raat Hai

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Knight Riders Entries

Wise_Guy

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Ramz

zakham-e-tanhaaimein.gif?t=1274341261

Sobe

agartunikalaaey.gif?t=1273915536

Edited by Zaini

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WoW Nice decision ZAINI. :clap::clap:

main Knight Riders ki taraf say both Judges Ko WELCOME karta hoon. :flower4u::flower4u:

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Legion of Power ....Amaya n chinky ka is summmer camp main dil se istiqbaal kerti hai.wc in summer camppp....

ZAini ap ne wise n ramz ki aik jaisii hi poetry ko ker diya hai post.....edit karain is ko

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ahan nice

welcome chinkey and amaya for select judges

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its really vry tough to decide...anyhow...keep fingers crossed and all the best to both teams ...

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19th june hai amaya tumharay paas so koi jeldi nahi araam se baith ker sochna biggrin.gif

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hmmm...here i m gonna announce the result from ma side...here we go

9 for Legion of Power

8 for Knight Riders

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Thanx Amayaflower4u.gif

lekin mera khyaal hay k aap ko Her selection k liaey marks denay hain.i m not sure abt it.

i'll confirm it.

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ahan...thx amaya..n i thnik wise sahi keh arah hai..her poetry mai out of 10 dainay hain marks ap ko....so ap zaini se confirm ker lain aik baar ok flower4u.gif

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This is really a nice poetry

mujhe-tanhai-dasti-hai-urdu-ghazal-.jpg?t=1276431559

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THANX BIG BRO :flower4u::flower4u:

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hmmm...here i m gonna announce the result from ma side...here we go

9 for Legion of Power

8 for Knight Riders

Amaya Har Entry ko 10 main say points dainay hain yani Knight Riders ko ap Wise_Guy, Ramz Aur Sobe 3no ko alag alag points dain geen aur Legion of Powers ko bhi Shahabi, Rayyan aur Munib ko alag alag points dain geen is tarhn har team ko ap ki traf sy alag aur Chinky ki traf sy alag points milain gain, Hope ab ap ko clear ho gaya hoga :flower4u:

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Legion Of Powers

~~ Imi.munib ~~

Katoon si chubhti hai Tanhai

Angaroon si sulagti hai Tanhai

Koi aa kar hum dono ko hansa de

Main rota hoon rone lagti hai Tanhai

Jab bhi tere Hisar se nikalna chaha

Yaadoon k beej bone lagti hai Tanhai

Raat k kisi hise main yeh bhi Bewafa ho jati hai

Main nahi sota sone lagti hai Tanhai

Tum se judaa ho kar is se hi Dil laga lia hai

Mar sa jata hoon jab khone lagti hai Tanhai..

  • 8/10

SimpleRayyan

""Main Or Mari Tanhai""

Rehtey Hain Saath Saath Mai Aur Meri Tanhai

Kartey Hain Raaz Ki Baat Mai Aur Meri Tanhai

Din To Guzar Hi Jata Hai Logon Ki Bheer Mai

Kartey Hain Basar Raat Main Meri Tanhai

Saanson Ka Kya Bharosa Kab Chor Jain Saath

Laikin Rahain Gay Saath Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Aaye Na Tumhe Yaad Kabhi Bhul Kar Bhi Hum

Kartey Hain Tumhe Yaad Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Aa Ke Paas Kyon Door Ho Gaye Hum Se

Kartey Hain Teri Talash Main Aur Meri Tanhai

Tum Ko Rakhain Gay Saath Zeenat Bana Kay Ghar Ki

Reh Jain Phir Na Tanha Main Aur Meri Tanhai

  • 10/10

Shahabi

Tanhayi Ki Yeh Kuch Aisi Ajab Raat Hai

Tujhse Judi Hui Har Yaad Mere Saath Hai

Kis Kadar Ki Thi Mohabbat Humne Tumse

Soch Kar Hui Aaj Ashqon Se Mulaqaat Hai

Kaisa Junoon Tha Us Ishq Mein Dil Ro Aya

Machal Utha Phir Se Har Woh Jazbaat Hai

Tu Mujhko Bewafa Keh Gaya Najane Kyo

Gar Chahna Bewafayi Hai , To Bewafayi Ki Raat Hai

Tadap Raha Hai Tanha Chand Bina Chandni K

Is Andheri Raat Mein Aaj Kuch Aur Hi Baat Hai

Yu Aye Zindagi Mujhe Akela Chordh Diya Tune

Ke Kafan Odh Rahi Mujh Par Aaj Yeh Raat Hai

  • 8/10

Legion Of Powers gets 26 ...marks out of 30 :victory::yes:

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Knight Riders

Wise_Guy

mujhe-tanhai-dasti-hai-urdu-ghazal-.jpg?t=1276431559

  • 10/10

Ramz

zakham-e-tanhaaimein.gif?t=1274341261

  • 9/10

Sobe

agartunikalaaey.gif?t=1273915536

  • 9/10

Knight Riders gets 28 marks out of 30 :victory::yes:

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Yahoooooooooo :yahoo: :yahoo:

Thanx Chinky  :flower4u: :flower4u:

U proved dat u've really rich taste abt poetry :tease:

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:star:CONGRATS BOTH.... TEAMS:star:

:share:

its really hard decision to judge everyone:banghead:..i hope all of you ll be satisfied wid marks :upside:

zaini :alien: ......dont doo agn.. i ll kill you :kill::smoker:

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Yahoooooooooo :yahoo: :yahoo:

Thanx Chinky :flower4u: :flower4u:

U proved dat u've really rich taste abt poetry :tease:

you welcome....1 thing i ll mention here... really gud team work wise :yes: .. u helped ur team member...:wink:

Edited by chinky

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Congartz Kight Riderz :flower4u:

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Congartz Kight Riderz :flower4u:

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