Moonlight 0 Posted September 25, 2005 tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do is dil se kya kahun ise kaise samjaun iske tootne ki awaz to na ayegi tumhe par uske tukdon ko le kar mai kahan jaoon tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do un yaadon ka mai kya karun tumhare likhe khaton ko mai kahan jalaun kahan dafnau kisey baar baar sataoon kisey manaoon tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do meri siskiyon mein bhi tumhara hi naam hai in ashkon ko mai kahan chhupaun tum shumaar ho abhi tak pardanasheeno mein log sabab puchenge to bolo mai kya bataun tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do tujhe bhulaane ke kaunse tareeke apnaoon meri dhadkan, har saans ki rawangi ho tum tujhe bhoolane ki koshish mein kahin mar na jaoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Choudhry 0 Posted September 25, 2005 kisey baar baar sataoon kisey manaoon Thats fantastic..................... Tum ja to rahay ho par tina to batado Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maryamgillani 0 Posted September 26, 2005 tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do is dil se kya kahun ise kaise samjaun iske tootne ki awaz to na ayegi tumhe par uske tukdon ko le kar mai kahan jaoon tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do un yaadon ka mai kya karun tumhare likhe khaton ko mai kahan jalaun kahan dafnau kisey baar baar sataoon kisey manaoon tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do meri siskiyon mein bhi tumhara hi naam hai in ashkon ko mai kahan chhupaun tum shumaar ho abhi tak pardanasheeno mein log sabab puchenge to bolo mai kya bataun tum jaa to rahe ho par itna to bata do tujhe bhulaane ke kaunse tareeke apnaoon meri dhadkan, har saans ki rawangi ho tum tujhe bhoolane ki koshish mein kahin mar na jaoo 155380[/snapback] good v good main ny khch aersy sy poetry chor di hy but i can understand all wt u say Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maryamgillani 0 Posted September 26, 2005 its my own poetry main yumhain yaad nhi kerti hon wo kuch lmhy hain wo kuch yadain hain jnhain main yaad kerti hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon wo smender main dobta suraj or is per sham ka udas ho jana hy jo mugy yaad ata hy main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon wo zmany ki chida hikaytain or chand ka pani main trupna hy jisy main yaad kerti hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon main teri wfaon ky mukbry per teri hikayton ki kubron per tera intezar kerti hon or bhool rukh ker lot ati hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon main tery wadon ky jnazy main jati hon whan ro ro ky khti hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moonlight 0 Posted September 26, 2005 its my own poetrymain yumhain yaad nhi kerti hon wo kuch lmhy hain wo kuch yadain hain jnhain main yaad kerti hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon wo smender main dobta suraj or is per sham ka udas ho jana hy jo mugy yaad ata hy main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon wo zmany ki chida hikaytain or chand ka pani main trupna hy jisy main yaad kerti hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon main teri wfaon ky mukbry per teri hikayton ki kubron per tera intezar kerti hon or bhool rukh ker lot ati hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon main tery wadon ky jnazy main jati hon whan ro ro ky khti hon main tumhain yaad nhi kerti hon 155397[/snapback] oh wow...tht was just soo awesome...MashAllah...thnx for sharing Maryam... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moonlight 0 Posted September 26, 2005 kisey baar baar sataoon kisey manaoon Thats fantastic..................... Tum ja to rahay ho par tina to batado 155389[/snapback] :) yup it is nice eh.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Moonlight 0 Posted September 26, 2005 bohat khoob annu 155446[/snapback] thnx Kiran :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maryamgillani 0 Posted September 27, 2005 its my poetry ager main shayer hoti ya pher mosever hoti main sochti hon kbhi nzer sy ly ky pyam main rung bherti hoti ya teri baton sy main sher khti hoti gazal ky rungon main main tuj sy milti hoti main tuj main rungi hoti ager main shayer hoti ya pher mosever hoti to mry rungon sy tu khylta kitna kbhi tu pherta muj ko kbhi main khali hoti ager main shayer hoti ya pher mosever hoti tu ly ka apny sung kbhi chlata mug ko kbhi girata muj ko kbhi bnata mulka kbhi main bybus hoti han! ager tu lufz hota ager main rung hoti....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
maryamgillani 0 Posted October 4, 2005 its my poetryager main shayer hoti ya pher mosever hoti main sochti hon kbhi nzer sy ly ky pyam main rung bherti hoti ya teri baton sy main sher khti hoti gazal ky rungon main main tuj sy milti hoti main tuj main rungi hoti ager main shayer hoti ya pher mosever hoti to mry rungon sy tu khylta kitna kbhi tu pherta muj ko kbhi main khali hoti ager main shayer hoti ya pher mosever hoti tu ly ka apny sung kbhi chlata mug ko kbhi girata muj ko kbhi bnata mulka kbhi main bybus hoti han! ager tu lufz hota ager main rung hoti....... 155505[/snapback] good maryagillani good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites