cooLboY 1 Posted January 21, 2006 (edited) Ek zinda laash jo jeena chahe Lakin jeene ki chahat nahi Ek toota dil jo jurhna chahe Lakin jurhne wala aankhoon ke samne nahi Kia hoon mein, mujhko bataye koi? Ek aisi laher jo thak gayee Magar koi kinara saath nahi Ek aisa phool jo khil to gaya Magar bikhar ker patjadh ne bhi sath dia nahi Kia hoon mein, mukhko bataye koi? Ek aisi mahobbat, jisko mein kia kahoon Yeh jaan, yeh dil, ab kia kisi ka nahi Ek aisa dewanapan, jisko pagalpan kahoon Pehchaan hai kia meri, ab mahloom nahi Kia hoon mein, mujhko bataye koi? ~~~~ This post is edited as mentioned in reply below. Edited January 22, 2006 by cooLboY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 21, 2006 hmmm..........nice per kuch spelling mistake hogaeen hain so plz check it again :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 21, 2006 hmmmmmmmmmm nish 11111111111 great Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 22, 2006 hmmm..........nice per kuch spelling mistake hogaeen hain so plz check it again :) 168571[/snapback] ok and thanks for pointing mistakes. you may read above poetry easily after corrections. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 22, 2006 hmmmmmmmmmm nish 11111111111 great 168655[/snapback] Thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 22, 2006 Kisi ko mohabbat ki sachai maar dalay gee Kisi ko mohabbat ki gahrai maar dalay gee Kar kay mohabbat kaon bacha hai Jo bach gaya hai ussay tanhai maar dalay gee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 22, 2006 welcome welcome janab Loog jab sang uthanay lagtay hain yaad mujh ko woo anay lagtay hain ik shikasta see arzoo lay kay zkham dil koo jalanay lagtay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 23, 2006 welcome welcome janab Loog jab sang uthanay lagtay hain yaad mujh ko woo anay lagtay hain ik shikasta see arzoo lay kay zkham dil koo jalanay lagtay hain 168852[/snapback] Very nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 23, 2006 Kisi ko mohabbat ki sachai maar dalay gee Kisi ko mohabbat ki gahrai maar dalay gee Kar kay mohabbat kaon bacha hai Jo bach gaya hai ussay tanhai maar dalay gee kamal hogya.......bohat achay bae bohat achay n i read ur edited post too :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 23, 2006 thx cool boy Saray Magan Hain Apnay Haal Mein Ik Hum Phansay Hain Tairay Khayal Mein Andhairi Raaton Mein Hum Tairi Yadon Ke Hum Dil Mein Charagh Liyay Phirtay Hain Qurbat Ke Lamhon Mein Bhi Hum Hijar Ke Dagh Liyay Phirtay Hain Agarcheh Chandni Sath Nabha Rahi Hay Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 23, 2006 hmm nice 1 Anoushy :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 23, 2006 nice wordz anu........... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 24, 2006 Kisi ko mohabbat ki sachai maar dalay gee Kisi ko mohabbat ki gahrai maar dalay gee Kar kay mohabbat kaon bacha hai Jo bach gaya hai ussay tanhai maar dalay gee kamal hogya.......bohat achay bae bohat achay n i read ur edited post too :) 169009[/snapback] Thanx for liking Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 24, 2006 thx cool boySaray Magan Hain Apnay Haal Mein Ik Hum Phansay Hain Tairay Khayal Mein Andhairi Raaton Mein Hum Tairi Yadon Ke Hum Dil Mein Charagh Liyay Phirtay Hain Qurbat Ke Lamhon Mein Bhi Hum Hijar Ke Dagh Liyay Phirtay Hain Agarcheh Chandni Sath Nabha Rahi Hay Hamein Tairi Yaad Aa Rahi Hay 169091[/snapback] aik do lines kuch theek nahi hain lakin overall dekha jaye to bohat achi shairy hai. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 24, 2006 Gavaahi: Taroon ko bujhakar Samandar ki gahrai mein Chand jhoom jhoom kay girgaya jaisay ke teri parchaai mein Ziyada kuch kah nahi paya Zunbaan se yeh ek shiqaayet hai Zamanay ki yeh ek haqiqat hai Musibat kahkar na mittalena Iss piyar ki gawaahi mein Ab kia kahna kisi say Jab jis say joh kehna tha chorh gaya Kuch kab hua aur kaisay Sach ko soch ka sheesha torh gaya Sooraj na chamkega Samandar ki gehraai mein Nazroon se choom ke jalagaya Saawan ke is raahi ne Kahaani mein rang bhar ke Shyaam aur kasma, man mein ek saath Kismat hui door ki baat Kiyamat jaisay, chamke nit raat Iss piyar ki gawaahi mein Ab kia kahna kisi say Jab jis say joh kahna tha chorh gaya Kuch kab hua aur kaisay Sach ko soch ka sheesha torh gaya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 24, 2006 Nazroon mein kia, apni umeed ko chupa ke Iqraar kar loon, tumhaari batein mein bhulaae Naksaan kar dia, apni umeed ne dabake Piar kar loon, tumhaari muskaan mein bhulake Kantoon ki kashti mein, apni umeed ko sulake Zindagi jee loon, tumhari aankhoon mein bhulake Yaad ban jaye dhuwaan, apni umeed ko jalake Bhool kar loon, tujh mein khud ko bhulake Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 25, 2006 ISHQ hai aik aisa afsana Jise samjhe sirf koi dewana ISHQ zindagi ko bana deta hai virana Ho jata hai ASHIQ duniya se begana Her waqt lub pe hota hai aik hi tarana Keh mujhe mil jaye us ka thikana Mera ISHQ per yeh falsafa hai purana Ke ISHQ karne wale ko budnaam karta hai zamana Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted January 25, 2006 fantastic bohat khoob Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 29, 2006 Yeh shishay yeh sapnay yeh rishtay yeh dhaage Kisay kiya khabar thi kahaan toot jayeinge Mohabbat ke dariya mein tinakay wafa kay Na jaane yeh kis morh par Doob jayeinge Ajab dil ki basti, ajab dil ki waadi hoti hai her morh per mausam raha Khuwahoon ka Lagaye they hum nay bhi sapanoon kay paoday Magar kiya bharosa yahaan barishoon ka Zara door ja kar jab aakhain kholi to Kari dhoop mein hum akelay they Jinhain dil say chaha jinhein dil say pooja Nazar aa rahay thay wahi ajnabhi say Muradoon ki manzil kay sapanoon mein khoye they Mohabbat ki rahoon pay hum chal parhey they wafa ki, bewafai ki baat hum kartnay chalay they Kiya khabar thi hum khud bhi bewafa ho jayeinge Rawayat hai shayad yeh sadiyoon purani Shikayat zamanay say hum bhala kiya kareinge Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 29, 2006 KIA HE BAT HAI :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 30, 2006 KIA HE BAT HAI :flower: 170093[/snapback] Thanx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 30, 2006 Yaadoon ko laga ker seenay sey taqdeer jagaya kerta hoon Mein tere khiyaloon say teri tasweer banaya karta hoon Jab yaad sunahi hoti hai, Jab yaad purani aati hai Main chand sitaroon ko dukh ki tafseel sunaya karta hoon Jab sara aalam sota hai, ik dard sa dil mein hota hai Dukh bharay iss aalam mein, mein nayen bahaya karta hoon Kese kahoon duniya waloon! haae dard bhari rawadad meri Tanhai mein ro ro kar ghum ki tahreer mitaya karta hoon Yoon rah-e-mohabbat mein tanha chaor kay janay walay Kiya tere khiyaloon mein bhi kabhi aaya jaya karta hoon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 31, 2006 Kia pata kab zindagi say haath dho jaon ga Maut ki aa gosh mein chup chaap so jaon ga Aaj mein betaab hoon, bechain hoon, bekhuwab hoon Kal tumhein tanhai ka dukh day kay kho jaon ga Jab tak zinda hon rangoon kay jahaan say khail loon Phir to in ranginiyoon say door ho jaon ga Tum bhoolana bhi agar chaho to yeh mumkin na hoga Apni yaadein tumhari pulkoon per pro jaon ga Kia bharoosa zindagi ka ek nazar to dekh lo Chund lamhoon baad to bas khak ho jaon ga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 31, 2006 verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrry nice coooooooolboy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
