cooLboY 1 Posted January 25, 2006 (edited) Jisse yeh dil apna bana gaya Hamhein wo zapt-e-ishq sikha gaya Koi baat na ki uss ne mujh se Magar wo mujhe mera chehra dikha gaya Wohi ke jis ki LOH mein jalte thay hum Koi aa ker wo DIA hi bujha gaya Mujhe jaan se jo aziz tha Mere saray maan mitta gaya Mere dil ke jo karib tha Wo mere dil ko jala gaya Wo ke jo mera naseeb tha Wohi mujhe bhula gaya Nahi hai koi bhi yaar kisi ka yahan Yeh sabaq humhein jate jate sikha gaya Edited January 29, 2006 by cooLboY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 25, 2006 hmmmm..............good nice wordz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 25, 2006 hotboy its very hotttttttttttttt :P nishhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 29, 2006 Thanks to all 4 liking :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 29, 2006 (edited) Beetey dinoon ki baat ab rahnay do Yeh pal do pal ka saath ab rahney do Chalta nahi jahaan mein kisi pay na zoar Saari umer ka saath nibhana ab rahnay do Mat mango mujh say meri chahat dobara Piyar mohabbat ki woh baat ab rahnay do Pahlay meri wafaon ka bharam tum rakh na sahay Phir say meri chahat ki umeed ab rahnay do Juda howay thay pahlay bhi ab bhi hoon ge Humkadam honay ki soch ab rahnay do Piyar mohabbat, rishtay naatay tum kiya jano Yeh mohabbatoon, rishtoon ki baat ab rahnay do Woh waiday, woh qasamein, wo do pal ka saath Yeh chahatoon ki, wafaon ki baat ab rahnay do Edited January 29, 2006 by cooLboY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 29, 2006 NISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 111111111111 :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 30, 2006 NISHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 111111111111 :flower: 170094[/snapback] Thanx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 30, 2006 Jis din se juda wo humse huwe Is "DIL" nay dharkna chaor dia Tha chaand ka mouh bhi utra utra Taroon nay chamakna chaor dia Wo saath humaray rahtay thay Be rut bhi bahaar aa jaati thi Ab laakh baharein aayein to kia Pholoon nay mahakna chaor dia Ab phool bhi khilay zakhmoon ke to kia Aankhon nay barasna chaor dia Jab dua humnay Khuda say maangi Kay taqdir badalday ae Maalik! Aawaz aayee uskay ghar say bhi Is "dil" nay dharakna chaor dia. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted January 31, 2006 Aankhoon kay darya mein Thehra huwa kuch pani hai Dekho to hai kuch bhi nahin Socho to ek kahani hai Waqt ke guzray lamhoon say Ek umer humhain churani hai Suno zikr hai yeh kai saal ka Ek musafir ki yeh kahani hai Jo itifaqan huyee dosti apni Woh barsoon ab nibhani hai Mehsoos na kabhi hum ne kia Nobat yahan tak aani hai Barasta kyun nahin sara pani Ghata kab tak yoon aani jani hai Hum nay bhi kabhi yeh chaha tha Kisi ki muhabbat pani hai Maqsad apna tha bas itna Ek chehre ko muskan lotani hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted January 31, 2006 Aawaz aayee uskay ghar say bhiIs "dil" nay dharakna chaor dia. aray yeh kia garbar kar deeeeeeeeeee???? doobara check karain yeh is tarha nhe ha :P n last one piece of poetry is very good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted January 31, 2006 mujhy pehly hi patta tha tum khuch na khuch zaroor nukhs nekalo gee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted February 1, 2006 Â Â Â aray yeh kia garbar kar deeeeeeeeeee???? doobara check karain yeh is tarha nhe ha :P n last one piece of poetry is very good 170382[/snapback] jee mene issi tarah parha tha. thanks Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted February 1, 2006 mujhy pehly hi patta tha tum khuch na khuch zaroor nukhs nekalo gee 170387[/snapback] might be she is right jab poetry logoon tak pohanchti hai to her koi uss mein changing karna chahta hai means kay wo apne hisaab say likhta hai aur iss tarah jis nay jis nay poetry likhi hai uss mein nuks nikal atta hai. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted February 1, 2006 Sukoon mil gaya aaj mujhe badnaam ho ker Tere her ek ilzaam pay yoon bezabaan ho ker Kia hua gar bulaya mujhe be-izzat karnay kay liye Khush hoon mein teri mehfil mein mehmaan ho ker Log padh hi lengay mohabbat teri aankhoon mein Chahay karlay lakh inkaar tu anjaan ho ker Ilzaam mujhpe lagaker khud roye ja raha hai Kia payega mera humdard sar-e-aam ho ker Mil to gaya suboot mujhe teri mohabbat ka Ab afsos nahi tere ishq mein nakaam ho ker Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anoushy 0 Posted February 1, 2006 might be she is rightjab poetry logoon tak pohanchti hai to her koi uss mein changing karna chahta hai means kay wo apne hisaab say likhta hai aur iss tarah jis nay jis nay poetry likhi hai uss mein nuks nikal atta hai. 170517[/snapback] lakin phir bi poetry tu aik bar lekhi ja chuki hai us main poet kay sewa tu koi nukhs nahi nekal sakta haan ya alag bat hai kay us pay comments ya suggestion dena jessy deeeeeeeeeeeeeps ny de :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted February 3, 2006 lakin phir bi poetry tu aik bar lekhi ja chuki hai us main poet kay sewa tu koi nukhs nahi nekal sakta haan ya alag bat hai kay us pay comments ya suggestion dena jessy deeeeeeeeeeeeeps ny de :D 170566[/snapback] Jee mere kahnay ka matlab yeh nahi tha... mera yeh matlab tha kay peot to poetry likh deta hai lakin bohat saray log apnay hisaab say uss ko change kar latay hain phir uss mein nuks ho jata hai. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooLboY 1 Posted February 3, 2006 Mein lafzoon mein kuch bhi izhaar nahi karta Iska matlab ye nahi ke mein tujhe pyar nahi karta Chahta hoon mein tujhe aaj bhi bohat per Teri soch mein apna waqt beqaar nahi karta Tamaasha na ban jaye kahein mohabbat meri Isi liye apne dard ko naamodaar nahi karta Jo mila hai us hi mein khush hoon mein Tere liye Khuda say taqraar nahi karta Per kuch to baat hai teri fitrat mein warna Tujhe chahnay ki khata baar baar nahi karta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites