Deep eyez 0 Posted March 16, 2006 suna hai log usse ankh bhar ke dekhte hain so us ke shehar mein kuch din theher ke dekhte hain suna hai rabt hai us ko kharab halaton se so apne ap ko barbad kar ke dekhte hain suna hai dard ki gahik hai chashm-e-naz uski so hum bhi uski gali se guzar k dekhte hain suna hai usko bhi hai shair-o-shairi se shaghf so hum bhi muajzae apne hunar k dekhte hain suna hai bole to batoun se phool jharte hain yeh bat hai to chalo bat kar k dekhte hain suna hai rat use chand takta rehta hai sitare baam-e-falaq se utar k dekhte hain suna hai din ko usse titliyan satati hain suna hai rat ko usse jugnoo theher k dekhte hain suna hai hashr hain uski ghazal si ankhen suna hai usko hiran dasht bhar k dekhte hain suna hai uski sayah chashmgi qayamat hai so uski sara-e-farosh aah bhar k dekhte hain suna hai uske labon se gulab jalte hain so hum bahar pe ilzam dhar k dekhte hain suna hai uski badan ki tarash aisi hai k phool apni qabaein kutar k dekhte hain bas ik nigah se lut ta hai qafla dil ka so rehrawan tamanna bhi dar k dekhte hain ruke to gardishen us ka tawaf karti hain chale to usko zamane theher k dekhte hain kahaniyan hi sahi , mughalbe hi sahi agar woh khuwab hai to taabeer kar k dekhte hain ab uske sheher mein therain ya kooch kar jayen faraz aao sitara-e-safar kar k dekhte hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
iftikhar 0 Posted March 17, 2006 wah wah very nice :flower: suna hai log usse ankh bhar ke dekhte hain so us ke shehar mein kuch din theher ke dekhte hain suna hai rabt hai us ko kharab halaton se so apne ap ko barbad kar ke dekhte hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted March 17, 2006 Buhut Khob Deep kamal kerti ho aap tu tum ko kese pata chala k main aaj yeh ghazal share kerne wala tha mujh se pehle hi share ker di khair buhut khob Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Miss_Jee 0 Posted March 17, 2006 Buhat Buhat Nice Deep Eyezz.......... :flower: :flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kalash 0 Posted March 17, 2006 deep wah by had by had by had nice by had nice manzil na day chirag na day hoslaa tu day tinkay ka hi sahi too maghar aasra tu day beyshak meray naseeb pe rakh apna ikhtayar lakin meray naseeb main kiya hai bata tu day Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted March 17, 2006 Sahir........bus mujhay pata chal gaya tha kay aap yeh poetry post karnay waly hain.....main nay socha main aap say bhe pehlay kar doon.... :P teacher jeeeee :D kalassssh manzil na day chirag na day hoslaa tu day tinkay ka hi sahi too maghar aasra tu day beyshak meray naseeb pe rakh apna ikhtayar lakin meray naseeb main kiya hai bata tu day nice wordz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sahir 0 Posted March 18, 2006 Deep Koi Baat Nahin Itna Tu Pata Chala K Meri Bhi Aadat Ya Choice Kesi Se Millti He Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deep eyez 0 Posted March 18, 2006 (edited) ................achaaaaaaaaaa???? Edited March 18, 2006 by Deep eyez Share this post Link to post Share on other sites