rukh 25 Posted August 23, 2003 hi!! main yahan aik sher likhoon gee or jo last word ho ga os sai next sher strat kerna ho ga...plz koi song nahi hona chaeye.....i will be thank full to u if u will participate here!! now ready GHATTAIN KON LATTA HAI MERE ANKHOON KAI MUSAM MAIN PHIR IS KAY BAD BARISH KA NAZARA KON KERTA HAI!!!! last word: I now ur turn Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 23, 2003 GHATTAIN KON LATTA HAI MERE ANKHOON KAI MUSAM MAIN PHIR IS KAY BAD BARISH KA NAZARA KON KERTA HAI!!!! "In baresho say teri dosti achi nahi faraz " "kacha tera makan gai kuch tu khayal kar " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 23, 2003 salam rukh.........its so nice topic which u have star.....but yar its lil diffiult, me personnally will be galde to participate but rite now i didnt find POETRY FROM R i ll post it laters.......bye for now tc ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 24, 2003 Racha hoa hai tera ishq mere pooron main!!! main is khumar sai nikloon to or kuch soochoon !! last word =n Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 25, 2003 Na janay oh log kiu dil men bass jaty hai jen ki qesmat say setaray nahi miltay !!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 25, 2003 yeh khamoshee bhe hamare anna ka perda hai!! sawal kertai raho or jawab rehni do!! saffer ka sath hai,yeh munzilon ka sath nahi!! guzer hee jain gai lamhai hisab rehnai do!! last word= o rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 25, 2003 Oh kar rahi thei apni wafaon ka tazkera deikha mujhy tu bat ka peHlo badal deya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 25, 2003 oh hai ya woh ? yes ji rukh "woh nahi oh"asl men oh he hai "ok Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 26, 2003 Ab to os kai bicher janai ka bhi malal nahi hota!! her gum hamesha paidar nahi hota!! woh bicher gia hai to yeh taqdeer ka faisla tha!! is kai nam per ab koi jazba baidar nahi hota!! last word=A Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 26, 2003 last word=A ( apnay aik pyary dsot ke nam ;) ) Apna adat he nahi har aik ko zaham deikathy phirna Men janta hoo teray pass AmsiHaei hai !!!!!!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted August 26, 2003 yehi nahi ky hamy tor kar gaya hai koi usy bhi khud ko buhat deer jorna houga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 26, 2003 well nice shair sanober but last word is I :( or app nai y sai strat ker dia :S IS SAI PEHLAY ZYADA TO NAHI THEE KHUSHIAN !! TU NAI BHI HISA DAL DIA HAI JUDAI KA!! LAST WORD= A Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 26, 2003 ARZOO HO GEE HAZAROON KO TUMHAREE LAKIN!! CHAHNAI WALA KOI HUM SA DIKHAO TO SAHEE !! LAST WORD=E Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 30, 2003 ok koi bat nahi koi meray sath nahi muqbla ker raha :( main khud apnai sath hee kahel loon gee eik ummer ho gayee kai dil ki kitab main kuch khusk patioon kai siwa kuch nahi raha jazbai tamam kho gaiyee lamhoon ki dhool main ab dil main dherknon kai siwa kuch nahi raha last word=A Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 31, 2003 azal sai bai simmit justjoo ka saffer hai der paish panioon ko kissai khaber kis ko dhoondta hai meree terha raigan samunder !! last word = r Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pretty_sara 0 Posted September 1, 2003 R RAKHTAY HAIN JO AURON K LIYEY PYAR KA JAZBA WOH LOUG KABHI TOOT K BIKHERA NAHI KERTAY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 1, 2003 ab sara kai sath mucqbla ho ga sara ka sara :P yeh tumharee talkh nawaiyan koi seh ker to dikha dey yeh jo hum main tum main nibah hai meray hoslai ka kamal hai !!!! last word =i Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 1, 2003 Is rah ko ham chor ker jaein kisee janib Arzadah na ho.....ham kabhee aesa na karein gey Likhaein gey usee thaath sey nazmaein,kabhee ghazalein Haan aaj sey logon ko dikhaya na karein gey LAST WORD IS Y Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 2, 2003 YEH NA HO KAI SHEHR MAIN TANHAI KAI MUJRIM THERO !! DIL MILLAI NA MILLAI HATH MILATAI REHNA !! LAST WORD =a Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 2, 2003 Aaj Tu Kali Hai, Kal Gulab Hoga Mujh Se Shadi Kar Le, Tujh ko Sawaab Hoga :P next word --> A Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 2, 2003 ~* Aab Apni Mohabbat Wapas Lay Lo *~ Mere Dost Aab Dil Nahi Lagta Tumarahe Iss Jahan Main Tumahri Nawasishaat Ka Main Ahsaan Mund Hoon Mager Suno Aab Apni Mohabbat Wapas Lay Lo K Main Iss Manzil Per Hoon Jahan Say Mujhay Aab Tahi Dust He Janaa Hai Her Tarah Ka Qarza Utaar Ker He Jaana Hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 2, 2003 last word is again I Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 3, 2003 hahahahahah nadan :P ibtaday-e-isq hai rota hai kia !! agay agay dekh hota hai kia ;) last word +a Share this post Link to post Share on other sites