rukh 25 Posted August 25, 2003 judaiee dainai walai tum sai umeed-e-wafa kaise!! taluq toot jaie jub!! muhabbat rooth jaiee jub!! to phir rasm-e-dua kaisee!! millan ki iltija kaisee!! bhanwer main doltee kashtee pei sahil ki tamana kia!! ukhertai sans hoon to zindgee ki bhi arzoo kia!! jo munzil kho chukee hai is ki phir sai justjoo bhi kion!! razaye dost per acha.....sir tasleem khum kerna! sisiknai sai yehe behter hai na ummed he merna!! muger dil nai tumhain kis wastai sai yad rakha hai!! tumhain kion shaire main ajj tak abad rakha hai!! abhi tak maini kion khud ko bohat berbad rakha hai!! hawa kai dosh per kion nagmai-e- feryad rakha hai!! judaiee dainai wallai ashnaie ki qasam tum ko!! tumharee baywafaiee,kujadaiee ki qasam tum ko! mujh ko itna bata daina!! waffa ki chahatoon ki mishallain kaisai bujhatai hain!! nishan kaisai mittatai hain!! bhulana ho jinhain un ko bhala kasai bhulatai hain!! rukh!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 25, 2003 MOHABBAT KE SAB RANGOON MAIN SAB SE GHERA RANG JUDAI KA HAI....! NICE EFFORTS RUKH Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 25, 2003 thanx kiran .... yah jo app nai qoute likha hai app ka apna hai? lakin rang halka ho ya ghera koi masla nahi SURF EXCEL HAI NA:p yeh to mazaq tha well jis kab hee hai bohat acha hai rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 26, 2003 hi! thanks for the compliment rukh but it's not mine haan albatta main poetry kerti hoon magar yahan post nahi ki abhi tak. have fun bye kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 26, 2003 :o oh kion nahi kia post.....kerain na !! achi cheez to sub sai share kernee chaeye....... or phir to app ko bait bazi main bhee participate kerna chaeye i dont think so kai oroon ki terha app kai ley mushkil ho ga? rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted August 26, 2003 hmm woh hai na rukh ke... KHULTA KISI PE KYON MERE DIL KA MUMLA.... SHIROON KE INTAKHAB NE RUSWA KIYA MUJHE :( WELL I'LL INSHAALLAH POST HERE SOON MY OWN COMPOSED POEMS BYE KIRAN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 27, 2003 ok ji jub tak app post nahi kerti hum ptv ki terha INTIZAR FERMAYE wala kam kertai hain :( wish u best of luck rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 27, 2003 ok ji jub tak app post nahi kerti hum ptv ki terha INTIZAR FERMAYE wala kam kertai hain :( wish u best of luck rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pretty_sara 0 Posted September 1, 2003 judaiee dainai walai tum sai umeed-e-wafa kaise!!taluq toot jaie jub!! muhabbat rooth jaiee jub!! to phir rasm-e-dua kaisee!! millan ki iltija kaisee!! bhanwer main doltee kashtee pei sahil ki tamana kia!! ukhertai sans hoon to zindgee ki bhi arzoo kia!! jo munzil kho chukee hai is ki phir sai justjoo bhi kion!! razaye dost per acha.....sir tasleem khum kerna! sisiknai sai yehe behter hai na ummed he merna!! muger dil nai tumhain kis wastai sai yad rakha hai!! tumhain kion shaire main ajj tak abad rakha hai!! abhi tak maini kion khud ko bohat berbad rakha hai!! hawa kai dosh per kion nagmai-e- feryad rakha hai!! judaiee dainai wallai ashnaie ki qasam tum ko!! tumharee baywafaiee,kujadaiee ki qasam tum ko! mujh ko itna bata daina!! waffa ki chahatoon ki mishallain kaisai bujhatai hain!! nishan kaisai mittatai hain!! bhulana ho jinhain un ko bhala kasai bhulatai hain!! rukh!! zaberdast Rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 1, 2003 sara tum nai to ajj sara ka sara thanx wasool ker laina hai mujh sai itnee saree tareefain ker kai :) thanx alot for ur sweet comments..:flower: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 1, 2003 wah wah bohat khoub rukh kyoon na ek juhti tasali py qanayt krlyn loog kehty hai adam khuwab haseen houty hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 2, 2003 Nice Rukh...! ek poem/gazal/yeah nazam jo bhi hay i like.. bus wana share.. "Usay Apnay Farda Ke Fikar Thee Wo Jo mera wakef-e-hall tha wo jo us ke subh-e-arooj thee wohee mera waqat-e-zawal tha.. kahan jao gay mujhaychoor ker may yeah poch poch thak gai.. wo jawab bhi na dey saka wo tu khud sarap-e-sawal tha wo jo us kay samnay a gaya wohe roshnee may naha gaya ajab us ka habet-ehussan tha ajab us ka rang-o-jamal tha.. dam-e-wapsi yeah kiya howa.. na wo roshni na wo tazgee wo sitara kasay biker gaya... jo apani misal app tha.. wo sadyoon kay bad mila tu bhi meray lab pay gila na tha usay mere choop nay rola diya jisay guftugu may kamal tha... wo mujh say mil ker ro diya fakat itna kha saka.. jisay janta tha wo zindagii wo tu sirf wahm o guman tha..." " Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 3, 2003 oh nadaaaaaaaaaaann it so so so much ma favourit or yeh kabhee mujhee poree nahi mil saKee thannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnxxxxxxxxxxxxxx a lot i love this one quote MEREE CHUP NAI OSSAI RULA DIA JISSAI GUFTGOO MAIN KAMMAL THA.... ZABERDAST !!! greatooooooooooo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 3, 2003 You r always welcome... han mujhay bhi is ka her line pasand hay..!! good that you have it now.. kinu kay mujhay bhi yeah kafee mushkil say mili thee... or malom nahee poet kon hay!! You have any clue!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
