sanober qazi 0 Posted August 26, 2003 ek pal mai ek sadi ka maza hum se poochhye... ek pal mai ek sadi ka maza hum se poochhye do din ki zindagi ka maza hum se poochhye bholay hai rafta rafta unhai mudato mai hum qisto mai khud kushi ka maza hum se poochhye agaz-e-ashiqui ka maza aap janiye anjam-e-ashiqui ka maza hum se poochhye hansne ka shauq hum ko bhi tha aap ki tarha hansiye magar hansi ka maza hum se poochhye woh jaan he gaye k hume un se pyar hai ankho ki mukhbari ka maza hum se poochhye na doost banao SALMAN, na qareeb lao kisi ko doosto ki bewafai ka maza hum se poochhye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted August 26, 2003 app ki poem hum ko lagee achi !! is ki tareef hum sai poocheye :P rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted August 26, 2003 TU AAP BHI APNY INTYKHAB MAI SY KUCH SHEAR KI JY RUKH GEE najany koon duaaoun mai yaad rukhta hia mai doubti houn samundur uchal deeta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted August 26, 2003 Yeh Izteraab Musalsal Aazab Hai Amjad Mera Nahi Tou Kisi Aur Ka He Ho Jaye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 26, 2003 salam sanober ji , app ke intekhab men ham apna intekhab post kar dety hai ;)aik dost ke nam :) Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Ke Koi Dosra Dekhay Tumhari Sharbati Aankhen Lab-o-Rukhsaar Aur Pakein Siyah Lambi Ghanee Zulfein Seharay Dosra Koi Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Kare Jab Tazkara Koi Kare Jab Tabsara Koi Tumhari Zaat Ko Khoojay Tumhari Baat Ko Soochay Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Tumhari Muskurahat Per Hazaroon Loag Martay Hoon Tumhari Aik Aahat Par Hazaroon Dil Dharaktay Hoon Kise Ka Tum Pe Yuun Marna Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Hawa Guzray Tumhain Choo Kar Na Hoga Zabt Yeh Mujhse Karey Gustakhi Tumse Tumhari Zulfein Bikhar Jayen Tumharay Lams Pe Jayen Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Suno Acha Nahin Lagta Ke Tum Ko Phool Bhi Dekhain Tumhare Paas Se Mehkein Ya Chanda Ki Guzarish Hoo Ke Apni Roshni Bakhshoon Rukh-e-Jana Koi Dekhay Mujhay Acha Nahin Lagta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted August 29, 2003 BOUHAT KHUB ADIL WAFA Yehi Wafaa ka silaah hai, to koi baat nahi Yeh dard tum ne diya hai, to koi baat nahi Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko Woh ghar tumne chor diya hai to koi baat nahi Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi Kise majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 29, 2003 SALAM AL OF U GUYZ.......... WELL PLZZ DON MIND GUYSS.....DEZ POETRIES I HAVE HEARD BEFORE N U ADIL KUCH SHARAM KAR LE:P......"YEH SUNO ACHA NAHIEN LAGHTA"WALI POETRY WAHAN ASIM NE POST KIE THEE AUR MAINE US KIE BOHUT TAREEF BHIE KIE THEE AUR TOO ISEY YAHAN ALAGH SE POST KAR KE ENJOY KAR RAHA HIA:)...........ACHA YAR DON MIND OK......AGHEY TERI MARZIE HIA.........BAS YEHIE KEHINA THA K SUNO ACHA NAHIEN LAGTA K KISEE KI CHEET KAR K POETRY LIKHO:.........AB MIAN ARZ KARTA HOON:)......FOR U ALL GUYZZZ.............. "*****FOR MY SPECIAL TEACHER***** "hum ne tu aik zamana a" "kahna tumhara mana" "aab bhi adab karain gay" "itna mager kahain gay" "hum ne jo bhool ki thi" "kia iss qadar bare thi" "jitne k intaqaman" "hum ko saza milli thi" "akhir janab kaisa" "paper hamay deya tha" "hum uss ko dekhtay thay" "aur dang rah gay thay" "chahra dhooan dhooan tha" "wallah kia sama tha" "zillat ka kuch dinoo main" "tika hamay lagay ga' "yoon fail ho k jeena" "acha kisay lagay ga" "dobain gay chuloo bher main" "umed aab yahi hai" "yah nazam un ko pohnchay" "taqeed aab yahi hai" "subh khudkashi ka meri" "ilzam unn ko dena" "aik baar phir milain gay" "paigham unn ko dena" "iss dhandli ka uss din" "hum bhi jawab dain gay" "aay ge jab qayamat" "unn se hisab lain gay" ok byee alll of guyss... tc alll ALAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted August 29, 2003 SALAM AL OF U GUYZ..........WELL PLZZ DON MIND GUYSS.....DEZ POETRIES I HAVE HEARD BEFORE N U ADIL KUCH SHARAM KAR LE:P......"YEH SUNO ACHA NAHIEN LAGHTA"WALI POETRY WAHAN ASIM NE POST KIE THEE AUR MAINE US KIE BOHUT TAREEF BHIE KIE THEE AUR TOO ISEY YAHAN ALAGH SE POST KAR KE ENJOY KAR RAHA HIA:)...........ACHA YAR DON MIND OK......AGHEY TERI MARZIE HIA.........BAS YEHIE KEHINA THA K SUNO ACHA NAHIEN LAGTA K KISEE KI CHEET KAR K POETRY LIKHO salammm all :hi: thankssssss sanober ji aur umair ji app ko galat fehmi ho rahi hai , app zara adilkhan Posted: Jul 23 2003, 06:40 AM , page No 27 , salam all hahhahah rs wellcme ji , app yahha bhi wahhhhhhhhhh buhot khub keya shayri hai wahhhh , maza aaya aur ye keya sirf shabo ko salam , aur hamein kuch nahi ab suno ji zara gawar say ,,,,,adil ki dil ki awaz " ab keya khayal hai app ka kuch yaad aaya , aur ye asim nay meri shayri copy ki thei ok , tabhi tu kehta hoo ke kabhi kabhi dactor ka pass bhi jana chaye ;) ok bye adil Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted August 30, 2003 salam all of u guyzzz... ok bhaie adil galatee ho gayee:(......nice poetry u all guyzzz....ab main arz karta hoon....... *** HAM KO LIKHNA*** """TUMARAY DIL MAIN KABHI MOHBBAT KA DARD JAGAY ,TO HAM KO LIKHNA"" """TUMARAI AANKHOO_N SE KALI RATOO_N KI NEEND BHAGAY,TO HAM KO LIKHNA"" """ ABHI TO TUM NAY ANA KE DHAGOO_N SE BAANDH RAKHA HAI APNAY DIL KO""" HAMARI CHAHAT SE TOOT JAYIEN KABHI YE DHAGAY ,TO HAM KO LIKHNA"""" ok bye ALL OF U GUYZZZ.... ALAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted August 31, 2003 assalam-u-alikum, aray umair kya hua agur esa huta bhi tu ,achi cheeze parhny par ap pabundi tu anhi laga sukty na, buhat cahy adil ,keep it up, and u too MR. UMAIR Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted August 31, 2003 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- WOH EK YAAD KY HAR LAMHA ZEHAN MAI JAGI WO EK ZIKAR KY LYHJA BHI HUM BADUL NA SAKY WOH EK NAAM KY JISS NAAM KO NA BHOOLY KABHI WOH EK DARD KY JISS SY KABHI SANBHAL NA SAKY WOH EK SHAKS KY HAR RAH MAI JISY DHOUNDA JU SAATH SAATH KABHI DU QADUM BHI CHUL NA SAKY YE SOUCHTA HOO KY NAZAR USKI KYA KAROO AADIL KY JAAN BHI DOUN TU MERA HOUSLA NIKAL NA SAKY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted August 31, 2003 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- WOH EK YAAD KY HAR LAMHA ZEHAN MAI JAGI WO EK ZIKAR KY LYHJA BHI HUM BADUL NA SAKY WOH EK NAAM KY JISS NAAM KO NA BHOOLY KABHI WOH EK DARD KY JISS SY KABHI SANBHAL NA SAKY WOH EK SHAKS KY HAR RAH MAI JISY DHOUNDA JU SAATH SAATH KABHI DU QADUM BHI CHUL NA SAKY YE SOUCHTA HOO KY NAZAR USKI KYA KAROO AADIL KY JAAN BHI DOUN TU MERA HOUSLA NIKAL NA SAKY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 1, 2003 THANX MANSOOR IT'S WORKING Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 4, 2003 kel woh lamha bohat khoobsoraat tha jeb tum ne meree Mohabaat ka ayeteraf kya tha aaj wahee lamha mere seeney mein kanta ban ker chubh rahaa hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted September 4, 2003 Dil tu karta hai ,har aik ankh ka ansoon pie lo aur meri tarha say kesi ka koi khuwab na bhekray ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 4, 2003 salam all of u guyzzz..... nice shiaree sanober jie n adil....... ab main arz karta hoon;) JANAY KIYUN Door Badiloon k gharajnay ki awaz Barish k cham cham girnay ki awaz aur Asman pay bigli karaknay ki awaz Chiryun k chun chun karnay ki awaz Koil k koon koon bolnay ki awaz Aur Geetoon k surron main dhalnay ki awaz Door khuch toot kar bikharnay ki awaz Hathoon main chori kay khanaknay ki awaz Aur Kissi dosheza k khilkhilanay ki awaz Mujay Meray janam din say lay kar Sansain ukharnay ki serhi tak Udas kar detein hain Janay "KIYUN" ok bye tc alll ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 4, 2003 umair aap ny tu bouhat khuob ara kya hia aur adil wah bhe HARATON K SILSALEY SOZEY NAHAN TAK AA GAEY HUM NAZAR TAK CHAHTAY THAY, TUM TU JAN TAK AA GAEY Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 6, 2003 rait pe likh ker naam mera mitaya na kero rait pe likh ker naam mera mitaya na kero ankhain sach bolti hein pyar chupaya na kero loog her baat ka afsana bana lete hein sab ko halaat ki rawadad sunaya na kero yeh zaroori nahin her shakas maseeha he ho pyar k zakham amant hein dekhaya na kero shaher-a-ehsaas mein patheraoo buhat hai Sanam dil k sheshay ko jharokoon mein sajjaya na kero Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
adilkhan 0 Posted September 6, 2003 "Sar jhuka ke to pathar bhi devta ho jaye ga Usse mat itna chaho woh befa ho jaye ga Rooth jana to mohabbat ki allamat hai magar Humein kiya khabar thi ke woh humse itna khafa ho jaye ga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 7, 2003 wah wah adil that's nice JANAY KAISAY SNBHAL KAR RAKHY ____________________________ janay kaisay sanbhal kar rakhy sub iraday sanbhal kar rakhy mousame ishq teri barish mai khat ju beegay sunbhal kar rakhy jin ki khushboo udas karti thi woh bhi gujray sunbhal kar rakhy Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 8, 2003 Kitni aziat se us ne mujh ko bhulaya hoga... Kitni aziat se us ne mujh ko bhulaya hoga mere yado ne usay khoob rulaya hoga baat bay baat ankh us ki jo chhalakti hogi us ne chehre ko bazo-on mai chhupaya hoga socha hoga us ne din may qaye baar mujhe naam haathele pe bhi likh likh k mitaya hoga jaha us ne mera zikr suna hoga kisi se us ki ankho mai koi anso tou aya hoga raat k bhegne tak neend na aye hogi tujhe tu ne takeye ko bhi senay se laagya hoga ho k nidhal mere yado se tu ne jana mere tasveer pe sar apna tikaya hoga poocha hoga jo kisi ne tere halat ka sabab tu ne bato mai khub us se chhupaya hoga jab kabhi chand ko dekha akele tu ne tujhe Meira saath bara yaad aya hoga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 9, 2003 mm..buhat yaad aya ho ga..... yeah koi kasay bati.. Nice Snober! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 10, 2003 thanx nadan , plz shear ur verses SUNO LADKI ___________ ABHI KUCH DER BAQI HAI DUAAIOO KI RASAI MAI ABHI TU RUNG NAHI AAYA HATHYLI KI HINAI MAI ABHI TASEER SY KHALI TYRI CHUDI KHANAK HAI TUJHAY KUNDAN BANADY SHABY HIJRA JUDAY MAI TU PHIR HAI SOUCHNA EK DIN TUMHARY PAS AAOUNGA YE BHI HAI SOUCHNA DUR WAPSI KA BUND KA BUND KRNA HAI Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
