umair.zm 0 Posted June 17, 2004 anayat >>> nice posting yar :y: W0 Tera Naam Tha My 0wn Poetry "b0hat kuch likha teri yaad mai,b0hat kuch bho0l gaye, j0 sirf yaad tha w0 tera naam tha. din raat jalta raha,tadapta raha per kisay na h0i khaber, dil se sada aati rahi,lab0n per aik hi naam tha w0 tera naam tha. milein nahin mUjhe w0 sari khusiyan j0 magni thi, jurna tha jis k saath apna naam w0 tera naam tha. u hi katti hai ab meri zindagi tanha tanha, mai pukarta h0n jis k0 tanhai mai w0 tera naam tha. b0hat se banay ashiq meray,her kisi ne poucha naam mera, bataya j0 unhe naam w0 tera naam tha. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anayat 0 Posted June 18, 2004 Yehi Wafaa ka sila hai, to koi baat nahi Yeh dard tum na diya hai, to koi baat nahi Yehi bohot hai ke tum dekhte ho sahil se Safeena doob raha hai, to koi baat nahi Rakha tha aashiyana-e-dil main choopa ke tumko Woh ghar tumna chor diya hai to koi baat nahi Tum hi ne aayena-e-dil mera banaya tha Tum hi ne tor diya hai to koi baat nahi Kise ki majaal kahe koi mujh ko deewana Agar yeh tumne kaha hai to koi baat nahi. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 19, 2004 Mayray khowab mayray khayal main ~mayri dastanien hayaat main ~mayray dard mayray azaab main ~ mayri rooh kay khiltay gulab main ~mayray din say ab mayri raat tak ~mayri khamoshi mayri baat tak ~mayri zaat say tayri zaat tak ~Teri her khushi hay khushi mayri.” shaid yeh bhi purani hai per mujhe bohot pasand hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 20, 2004 very nice ruby , anayat n mhn :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 20, 2004 Phool khilte rahein zindgi ki raah mein hassi chamakti rahe aapki nigaah mein kadam kadam par mile khushi ki bhaar aapko dil deta hai yehi dua baar-baar aapko Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*welfare* 0 Posted June 20, 2004 Aslam O alikum all i am fully fine bt allahs grace i hope u also aik do sheer humari thfar say bhi shear(city)kay loog tumihan yad rakhian ya na rakhian hum to go but bhi trashian gayn wo tug sa ho ga second muhabat kay lieay kuch khas dil makhsoos hotay hayn yeah wo naghma hay gi her saz pay gayia nehi gata third hum ahh bhi bhartay hayn to badnam ho gatay hayn wo katal (killer)bhi kartay hayn to charcha nehi hota Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*welfare* 0 Posted June 22, 2004 Aslam O Alikum all laiown wo tinkay kahin say ashinay kay lieay biglian bay tab hoon gin ko galinay kay lieay wiay na kami falak nay tak kar tora issay mein nay gis dali ko tara aishiunay kau lieay dil mein koi iss thrah ki arzo paida karoon toot giay Asman mughay mitnay kay lieay allah hafioz all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 22, 2004 oh wow zabardast posting AMIR N ANAYAT :hi: Jab Tere Dhun Main Jia Karty Thay "Jab Tere Dhun Main Jia Karty Thay Ham Bhi Chup Chap Phira Kartay Thay Ankhoon Men Peyas Hoa Karti Thi Dil Men Toofan Utha Kartay Thay Loog Aaty Thay Ghazal Suneney Ko Ham Teri Baat Kia Kartay Thay Sach Samjthay Thay Tere Wadoon Ko Raat Din Ghar Main Raha Kartay Thay Kisi werany Main Tujh Sey Mil Kar Dil Men Kia Phool Khila Kartay Thay Ghar Ke Dewar Sajany Ke Khatira Ham Tera Nam Likha Kartay Thay Wo Bhi Kia Din Thay, Tujhe Bhula Kar Ham Tujhe Yaad Kia Kartay Thay Kal Tujhe Dekh Kar Yaad Aaya Ham Bhi Kabhi Muhabbat Kia Kartay Thay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*welfare* 0 Posted June 22, 2004 Aslam O Alikum all meri rooh ki haqeeqat meray ainsoon say pouch mera maglasi tabsam mera targaman nehi hay inahi pathroon pay chay k ghar a sako to aiow meray ghar k rastay mein koikahkishan nehi hay Allah Hafiz all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted June 23, 2004 W0 Tera Naam Tha My 0wn Poetry "b0hat kuch likha teri yaad mai,b0hat kuch bho0l gaye, j0 sirf yaad tha w0 tera naam tha. din raat jalta raha,tadapta raha per kisay na h0i khaber, dil se sada aati rahi,lab0n per aik hi naam tha w0 tera naam tha. milein nahin mUjhe w0 sari khusiyan j0 magni thi, jurna tha jis k saath apna naam w0 tera naam tha. u hi katti hai ab meri zindagi tanha tanha, mai pukarta h0n jis k0 tanhai mai w0 tera naam tha. b0hat se banay ashiq meray,her kisi ne poucha naam mera, bataya j0 unhe naam w0 tera naam tha. waah waah umair ji kya baat hai, kafi achay shayer hain aap .its really lovely . agay bhi likhtay rahiyega .really looking forward to read some more poetries of urs. dekhay azaab sooz-e-mhobbat mein es kader dil se hamaray khauff-e-jhanum nikal gaya phir khwaab mein bhi woh nazer na aiya ay "zafar" aankhon ke samnay se jo alaam nikal gaya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 24, 2004 bindoo jie .. its all copy pase work :) ... is liye app ne jo tareef ki us ka haqdar nahien hon main :( ... well app bohut kam aney laghee hian post kariney ;) kyon :( jaan > nie shiar :hi: anayat >>> gr8 work LOT AAO "KARUN NA YAAD MAGHAR KIS TARHAN BULAUN USAY.... GHAZAL BAHANA KARUN OUR GUNGUNAUN USAY.... WO KHAR KHAR HAI SHAKH-E-GULAB KI MANIND... MAIN ZAKHAM ZAKHAM HUN PHIR BHI GALAY LAGAUN USAY... YEH LOG TAZKARAY KARTY HAIN APNAY LOGUN K .... MAIN KASAY BAAT KARUN AAB KAHAN SE LAUN USAY .... MAGHAR WO ZOD-E- FARAMOSH ZPD-E-ZANG BHI HAI... K ROTH JAYA AGHAR YAAD KUCH DILAUN USAY.. JO HUM SAFAR SAR-E-MANZIL BOCHAR RAHA HAI FARAZ... AAJAB NAHI HAI AGHAR YAAD BHI NA AAUN USAY..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
jaan 0 Posted July 7, 2004 well paste aur copy hi sahi per yeh kaam bhi asaan nahi :) aaj bhi hain meray kadmon ke nishan awara teri galiyon mein bhataktay thay jahan awara tujh se kya bichaday toh yeh ho gayi apni halat jasay ho jaye hawaon mein dhuan awara meray shairon ki thi pehchaan us hi ke dum se us ko kho kar huye benaam -o- nishan awara jis ko bhi chaha us se toot kar chaha "jaan " kum milyengay tumhe hum jasay yahan awara Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 8, 2004 bindu >>> chalain jie thanx :) ... wesey itney time k baad app ki posting kyon anzar ati hia y r u no more regular :( Ab Mien Aksar Kuch soochta rehta hon "Ab mien Aksar kuch soochta rehta hon chalte chalte achaanak theher jata hon inhi soochon mien meri zindagi guzar gaye ab mien har waqt maazi ko kosta rehta hon na jane woh kia lamha tha mien ne zindagi ko kho dia ab mien moot ki Ahton ko sunta rehta hon apne kiye pe ab mien buhat pashemaan hon apne kiye pe ab mien soochta rehta hon zindagi ke woh nayab lamhey be maqsad guzare Ab inhi lamhon ko har waqt soochta rehta hon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 8, 2004 salam, uff nice jee bohot aacha hai sab ka collection :star: mera intykhab hai sawam ,mosam aur barish kyoon ke karachi main badal to nazar aagaye hain per barish naraz hogaye hai shaid :( khooshboo ki poshaq pehan ker kon galee main aaya hai kesa yeh pegham rassa'n hai kia kia khabren laya hai khirke khool ke baher dekho mosam mere dil ki bateein tum se kehne aaya hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 8, 2004 thanx ruby :hi: wesey ab to khi main rain horahee hia :hi: dekhein app se mousam bhie kitna khush hia aur app kham o kha keh rahee hian k naraz hia :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 9, 2004 salam, aareye haan yahan bhi barish hui hai per us waqt jan enjoy na ker sake raat ko chiriya puri bheeg chuki hai aur darakht bhi patta patta tapak raha hai ghoonsla kab ka bhiker chuka hai chiriya phir bhi chehak rahi hai is mosam main bhegte rehna aacha lagta hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 9, 2004 w salam :hi: barish khi walon k liye koun si new baat hia :) phr ho jaye ghee janab :hi: very nice posting khatam kar di "chah tu chahat ki haad taak khatam kar di dekhah tu dekhney ki haad khatam kardi pooja tu ebadate ki haad khatam kar di mahsoos use kia sansoo ki haad khahtam kar di sath use haan yaar ka daman say liptey hoey un ki ankho may dekha tu dobney ki haad khahtam kar di Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 11, 2004 salam, hmmm nice nazam yeh mhn ,jaan,anayat,welfare kahan gaye kuch post hi ker den char ghari yaadooon ka mela phir khamoshi pehroon tanha beth ke rona phir khamoshi is se to hum soye hi rehte subha na hoti neend ura ker urr gaye chirya phir khamoshi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 12, 2004 nice one :hi: kismat "" Ab kissi se koi gila hi nahin... Chaha tha jis ko woh mili hi nahin! Ye to sub khel hai naseebon ka... Woh meri kismat main shayad likhi hi nahin! Woh shayad mere pyaar ko samajh jati... Per Usne meri aankhoon main kabhi dekha hi nahin! Woh dil ki darkanoo ko ker gaii hai madham... Ab dharkanoo ka silsila hi nahin! Ab us ke chale jane ke baad..... Jeeney ka koi maqsad hi nahin! Dua kerta hoon mujhe bula le ae KHUDA... Per woh is nacheez ki sunta hi nahin...!!!!" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
