rukh 25 Posted August 27, 2003 tumhain jub kabhi millain fursattain merai dil sai bojh utar do main bohat dinoon sai udas hoon mujhai koi sham udhar do! mujhai apnai roop ki dhoop do kai chamak sakain merai khal-o-khud!! mujhai apnai rang main rang do merai sarai zang utar do!! kisi or ko merai hal sai na gherz hai koi na wasta!! main bikher gya hoon smait lo,main biger giya hoon sanwar do!! mere wehshtoon ko berha diya hai judaioon kai azab nai!! merai dil pei hath rakho zara,mere dherknoo ko qarar do!! tumhain subha kaisi lagee kaho,mere khuahishon kai dyaar ki!! jo bhale lage to yaheen raho,isai chahatoon sai nikhar do! wahan gher main kon hai muntizir kai fiker ho dair sawair ki! baree mukhtisir si rat hai isee chandnee main guzar do!! koi bat kerne hai chand sai kissi shaksaar ki ooat main mujhai rastai mainyahen kaheen kisi kunj gull main utar do! rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pretty_sara 0 Posted September 1, 2003 main boht dinoo sai udas hoon mujhay koi shaam udhaar do Wah kia baat hai! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 1, 2003 thanz again sara lakin waisai kia bat hai ? tell me :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted September 1, 2003 bouhat khoub rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 2, 2003 I Like Itabar.. he is good poet nice collection Rukh!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted September 2, 2003 salam rukh ,sanober,n nadan jie........ rukh too ne aik post hie kya hia pichley 7 dinon main aur usee par laghe hoye ho k achie hia:paur app sanober n nadan app bhie to kuch post karo na;).......acha bhala nekie kie shrooat main hie karta hoon;)............ arz karta hoon hopefully u like dat guyzzz........ chale thai saath tumhare to humne kya paya " "jale hain dono kisi aag main to roshan hain isay chirag na samjho,mujeh diya na kaho *********************************** bichar gayi to kya ab bhi mere sath hai woh kabhi na saath chali jo,usay juda na kaho *********************************** us ajanbi ko duain kaho,jo bichri hai us ajanabi ko mere samnay bura na kaho ***********************************bohat shadeed hai ye dukh main seh nahi sakta woh dosri hai magar ,us ko dosri na kaho *********************************** usay bhula k main zindha hoon magar na khush hoon ye bud duaain hai us ki inhay duaa na kaho *********************************** chale thai saath tumhare to humne kya paya bohat buray hi sahi is kadar bura na kaho *********************************** hame batao to phir kya kerogi ______ tum woh samnay ho magar khud se ashna na kaho........ ok bye tc aalll ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 3, 2003 nice !! thanx nadan Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 3, 2003 OK Ariba app khatee hain to may bhi paticipate ker latee hon!! mm i like this poem..so posting it To You guys!! "zindagii ke mele me.n" zindagii ke mele me.n Khvaahisho.n ke rele me.n tum se kyaa kahe.n jaanaa is qadar jhamele me.n vaqt kii ravaanii hai baKht kii giraanii hai saKht bezamiinii hai saKht laamakaanii hai hijr ke samandar me.n taKht aur taKhte kii ek hii kahaanii hai tum ko jo sunaanii hai baat go zaraa sii hai baat umr bhar kii hai umr bhar kii baate.n kab do gha.Dii me.n hotii hai.n dard ke samandar me.n anginat jaziire.n hai.n beshumaar motii hai.n aa.Nkh ke dariiche me.n tum ne jo sajaayaa thaa baat us diye kii hai baat us gile kii hai jo lahuu kii Khilvat me.n chor ban ke aataa hai lafz ke fasiilo.n par TuuT TuuT jaataa hai zindagii se lambii hai baat rat_jage kii hai raaste me.n kaise ho baat taKhaliye kii hai taKhaliye kii baato.n me.n guftaguu izaafii hai pyaar karane vaalo.n ko ik nigaah kaafii hai ho sake to sun jaao ek din akele me.n tum se kyaa kahe.n jaanaa.N is qadar jhamele me.n Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 4, 2003 so nice again its ma favourit another..or is poem ko to mainai rutay ruttay mar m ar ker yad kia hoa hai :P kaheen say bhee sun lo :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 4, 2003 i m not good in ratas!! :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted September 5, 2003 :o phir urdu kai papper kaisai daytee then :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mahrukh 0 Posted September 6, 2003 rukh aap ki choice boht khoobsooret hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted September 6, 2003 Urdu.. Cheating hay na..:D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites