Uncleg

No specific reason except that we are here to exchange views. Especially you and Amaan bring out meaningful subjects. Amaan is very near to daily life and yours are old sotories, but still carry message. I like your poetry collection and high standard of great choice in poetry. When it comes to our belief (Emaan), there should not be any compromise on that. You have accepted the correction so please don't name it "criticize". I hope you understand. Daadi ammaa'n ki story per aap ko abba jee tou nahi keh sakta. I hope it ends yours flare. I will carry on with friendly over views, previews, comments unless you mind. If at all you mind, just tell it here or through P.M and you will not find a single word from me.

Koi baat nahi Kamal ki jeet bhi meri jeet hai.

Aik member nay positive criticism per mind kia.

Breakfast

Cloudy

2. Mera style hai zara hut kay

Woh jaisa bhi hai, dostoun ka dost hai aur bohat achha dost.

Mood theek kar lo S.K.S

Iqbal

Very true

How can one feel happy when friends are sad.

Missing my cup of tea

Cell

Mein talkhiay hayaat sey ghabra k pee gia

All grandmaas tell the stories for good purpose and so did you as well, but please be careful in using the words for Allah. Allah never forgets. Forgetfulness is a disability and Allha Almighty forgives not forgets. You may please educate me if I am wrong. Will wait for the next grandmaa story.

Muhabbat mein teray sar ki qasam ....

Next time I shake hand, I am going to scratch my finger. Poochh lainey mein kia harj hai????

Sorry tou mujhay kehna chahiay, laikin doosray missray mein Muhabbat ki jagah Pyaar likhnay sey correction ho jaati hai. " JO MUJH KO DAIKHAY USAY TUJH SEY PYAAR HO JAAEY" Your choice has been always very fine so I had to write those unpleasant words. I hope you don't mind.

By the way, what is your demand.

Thank u. Nokia 5800 pasand aya hai. Loo'n ya ???

Good choice Kamal

Bay wazan shai'r ki correction kartey hein na k daad deitay hein.

Abhi tak tou khush hoo'n

Ghalati sey apna hi daikh lia Allha khair karey

Mera N73 Kaha'n hai, sale out tou nahi kia na???