arsii 0 Posted November 8, 2003 AADIMIII BHI AJEEB CHEEZ HAI! JO NAHIN HAI USE DOONDTA HAI MAGAR JIS KO PAATA HAI IS KO WHO JAB TAK KAHIN KHO NA DE KITNA BECHAIN REHTA HAI! HAZIR KO GAAIB MAIN GAAAIB KO HAAZIR MEIN YON KHOJTA HAI KE JAISE WHO KHUD KHO GAYA HAI! i hope u will like it looking for ur replies Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 8, 2003 arsii ncie poetry yarrrrr zabaardast yar :D keep dat up arsii :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 8, 2003 thnx i will try ma level best for keeping that up Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 10, 2003 arsii meri taraf se kuch arz hia ;) Jisay socha na tha "jisay socha na tha uss pay dil a gia jisay kabi dhoonda na tha woh mil sa gia iss dilaynadan ko samaj hi na saka satha tha umar bhar ka ik hi pal luta gia itni garmi pyar ki mahsoos hoe na kabi ik shola hi poora sahil jala gia hamain bar ghumand garoor tha khood pay jhonka ik hi hawa ka sara badil urra gia hamain to naseeb na tha ik chota sa ghar janay kab iss darya main mahal bana gia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 10, 2003 achaa umair meri taraf se chand pe kuch kaha jayay hai na yeh meraa chand jis ka muqabila koi nahin kersktaa the moon is a luminous owl's eye that glows in the dark from one end of the sky to another to keep the night shining blinking and turning with her beautiful brightness of shine. hope u like that looking for response Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 10, 2003 HEY NICE ARSHI.. AND UMAIR APP TU ALWAYS RIGHT!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 10, 2003 v, nice arsi:) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 11, 2003 thanks ma dear friends i m thankful to u all for such a nice response Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 11, 2003 arsii jigar waqayee bohut achie thee poetry shabash merey cheetey shabash :D ..... aur thanx saher :) n sanober tum kahan kho gayee ho itni kam positng kartee rehtee ho :P..... ''MaiRe AnKhooN Ko SooJta He NahE'' "Maire Ankhon Ko Soojta He Nahe.... Ya Muqadar Main Rasta He Nahe... Woh Bharay Shaher Main Kise Say Bhe.. Mairay Baray Main Pouchta He Nahe.... Phir Wohe Shamm Hay Wohe Hum Hain.. Haan Mager Dil Main Hosla He Nahe... Hum Chalain Uss Ke Bazam Say Uth Kar.. Aur Woh Hay K Humay Rokta He Nahe.. Dil Jo Ek Dost Tha Mager Woh Bhe.... Chup Ka Pather Hay Bolta He Nahe... Main Tu Uss Ke Talash Main Gum Hoon... Woh Kabhe Mujh Ko Dhondta He Nahe... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 11, 2003 thanks all of u guys ab yeh suniye Time is slow and untamed Or it gets you framed. Without a moment to think As your spirit sinks. You whirl into an illusion of time As you try to work or rhyme The way I'm doing now While I ask the question "How?" Time passes as you roll a die Or tell a lie. Sometimes, time is good When your birthday turns out as it should. But, sometimes time is bad When your father dies when you were a lad It's very sad. But without time You wouldn't be here. so all of u guyz take care of time i mean to say that give ur most time to coolyar shairoshairy comunity samjhay frnds i hope u would like that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 12, 2003 hey very Nice Umair..!! app tu guftugu may nahee atay app ko minayk ay liya yahan ana perta hay!!... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 15, 2003 nadan jie kesi hain aap. nadan jie app to badi nadan nikliin uamir ne sahi kaha thaa k yahan shetaan bhi maujood hai hahahhaa juss joking, ur poetries r gr8 and listen that too aainaa dekh, apna sa moonh le ke reh gayay saahib ko dil na dene pe kitna guroor thaa kaasid ko apne haath se gardan na maryay us ki khata nahin , yeh meraa kusoor thaa i hope u all wpuld like that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 16, 2003 mm ARshii Allha ka shuker hay!! m fine.. or shtan kasay ho sakta hay yahan wo tu totaly out hay ajj kal.. so that proves i m not shitan :D.. gila tu Umair say kerna hay kay ager hum un say milnay sher-oshaire may a jatay hain tu wo hum say b milnay kabhi guftagu may a jaya kerain.. hey arsi plz do join us on guftagu as well nice place for hanging out.. esp being CY member buhat say interviews app ka wait ker rahey hain wahan!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 17, 2003 thanks shetan jie k app ne humein invite kiyaa guftugu mein anay k liye mager baat yeh hai k ajj kal i m enjoying very much in shairoshairi aur time bhi kam milta hai bas aur umair to hai hi dheet aur us ko mujh se ziyada kaun janta hai coz he is ma best friend but inshallah c u soon in guftugu Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 17, 2003 mm chalin arsii hope to see you soon there!! or Umair plz kuch Khuf-e- Dostee he ker lain!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 17, 2003 umair bhi ajayay ga wohan, fiqar not zikar not hahaa acha nadan jie hum kuch arz kertay hain Happiness is bright yellow It tastes like chips and vinegar And smells like the sweet scent of flowers Happiness looks like a new born baby And sounds like a beautiful bird singing Happiness is my mum cuddling me Happiness by Chloe Dacosta (aged 8) Happiness is bright silver It tastes like you have just eaten a Mars Bar And smells like a bunch of flowers Happiness looks like a golden sunset And sounds like birds singing in the air Happiness is swimming in a pool Which makes me happy. so always be happuy juss like that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 17, 2003 thanks for appreciation Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 10, 2004 (edited) nice contribution Edited February 10, 2004 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 10, 2004 Bethay bithaye teray khayalon mein kho jaana mujhay achaa lagtaa hai... Teri baaton ko yaad kar ke khud hi sharma jaana mujhay acha lagtaa hai... Tumhari ankhon mein jo nashaa jo khumaar hai tum kia jaano meri jaan! Iss pyaar ke samandar mein doob jaana mujhay acha lagta hai... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 10, 2004 hello so nice of u alll i like poetry to much erey one this from to all sochta hoon use neend ati ho gi yah fakat meri tarah ansoo bahtee ho gi meri shakal mera nam bholnay wali apni tasveer say kia ankh milati ho gi sham hotay hi chokhat pay jala kay shamaeen apni palkon pay kai khoaab salatee ho gi iss nay silva lia ho siha rang abb mahram ki tarah eid manateee ho gi hoti ho gi meray bosay ki talab main pagal jab bhi zalfoon main phool sijatee ho gi meray tareek zamnoo say niklnay vali roshni tuj ko meri yad dalti ho gi dil ki masoom rageen khod hi solagti hon gi jonhi tasveer ka kona jaltee ho gi rop dee kar mujee iss sher main shezadee ka apnay bachoon ko kahnee sunatee ho gi <>:<>:<>:<>:<>:<vasee shah <>:<>:<>:<>:<>:<>:<: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 11, 2004 hey napster very nice yar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
