samra 0 Posted November 16, 2003 Tumharay naam Main apna aaj apna kal tmharay naam karta hoon Main is jeevan ka har ik pal tumharay naam karta hoon Khizan, sardian,garmi ,baharain,baarishain,jaara Main mausam ka har har pal tumharay naam karta hoon Sitaray ,titlian,jugnoo, gul-o-bulbul,dhanak ,khushboo Ye saari husan ki chal bal tumharay naam karta hoon Mera guzra hooa kal to meray maazi ka qissa hay Main apna aj apna kal tumharay naam karta hoon Tumharay bin ye har ik pal mujhay baychain rakhta hay Main apna dil jo hay baykal tumharay naam karta hoon Barasta bheegta mausam hay kamzori mari lakin Main ye sawan ,ghatta ,baadal,tumharay naam karta hoon Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 17, 2003 Mera guzra hooa kal to meray maazi ka qissa hay Main apna aj apna kal tumharay naam karta hoon hey Samra.. Very Nice!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 17, 2003 very nice samra ab maazi se nikal k present mein aaoo and achay futur ka intrezaar karo wish u all the best for ur future Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 17, 2003 very nice samra ab maazi se nikal k present mein aaoo and achay futur ka intrezaar karo wish u all the best for ur future Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 18, 2003 aarsi ooooooooooooh aisi koi baat nahi aap ko koi ghalat fahmi hooi hay dont worry this is just a poem Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 20, 2003 samra dat was juss wish from arsii to u :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 20, 2003 okz n any wayz thanx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sanober qazi 0 Posted November 20, 2003 nice topic and nice replies samra Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted November 21, 2003 Do Ashk "apni to ab tamam hui kayenaat-e-gham do ashk the so deeda-e-tar se guzar gaye har chand farsh-e-raah thi un ke liye nazar phir bhi khabar nahi kidhar se guzar gaye maut ke baad samne aye the woh magar ruswaayi-e-jamaal ke darr se guzar gaye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 22, 2003 samra jie hum ne toaap k bright fuure k liye wish ki thee Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted November 22, 2003 hey Umiar zaber10!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
samra 0 Posted November 28, 2003 aarsi thanx 4 ur wishes Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted November 30, 2003 hum to hameshaa se apne friends k liye wishes kertay hain inshallah God may bless all ma friend wid unlasted happiness now listen that one Looking Back Looking back behind you You see what you've done You see the good things The bad things too You know you can't escape them Whatever they may be So when you look back years from now Remember what you see They will never leave you They will stay there by your side And if you are embarrassed There will be no place to hide What you do now in life Might stay with you forever So say you might, say you will Look back and remember Hope that you like what you see Because there is no going back But let this poem change you on how you might be how was that Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted December 7, 2003 thanks ma dear friends God bless u allllllllll now listen that one The Child (a cry by a child) I don't understand why no one likes school I will rue the day I leave it My house was never a home Just a roof over four walls My father was never any better Drinking and smoking He'd come back from the pub And use me as someone to take his anger out on When he had lost all his money gambling. I feel his hot smoky breath on my face, As he leans over me, ready to strike A dangerous blow, and another, and another, They rain down on me like all of hell's fire, But I keep silent, I'm used to it, Keep quiet, and don't struggle, And it will all be over soon. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted December 7, 2003 oh well tenced one!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
arsii 0 Posted December 8, 2003 ohh thats well done thanks for appresition now listen that one and pay ur act on this advice Yunhi be sabab na phira karo Koi shaam gher bhi raha karo Who ghazal ki sachi kitaab hai Use chup chup k padha karo Koi haath bhi na milayay ga Jab galay milo gay tabaaq se Yeh nayay mizaaj ka shahar hai Kuch faaslay se mila karo Abhi raah mein kaii mod hain Koi ayay ga koi jayay ga Jisne tumhein dil se bhuladiyaa hai Use bhoolne ki dua karo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
