aarzoo 0 Posted January 24, 2003 salamz to allz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How r u allz????????? Well here is my another poem tht i wanna share with u :) And haan also reply me hows it ? Pagal Si Larki Aik pagal si larki phir yeah dua ker bhethi key kaash usko bhi mujh sey mohabbat ho gaey mohabbat-o-chahat ishq-o-janoon sab khuch ho gaey magar woh yeah na janti thi key agar usko mohabbat ho bhi gaey tu zarari tu nahi key is jahan maen mohabbat mil bhi gaey tu usney soocha key abhi to mohabbat sirf mujh ko hey agar na bhi milli to seh loongi magar uskoo toothtey hoey kasey dekh paoongi oor ziadah terpoongi jetey ji marjaoongi is liey key jis saey mohabbat hoti hey woh kasa bhi ho uska bura soocha nahi jata hey is liey ab is pagal si larki ney dua khuch yoon ki key aey khuda is shaks ko mohabbat zaroor ho mager jis saey ho woo usko hasil bhi ho chahey maen na sahi koey our hi ho yeah dua us pagal ney jitni mushkil sey ki hey bas wohi janti hey our uska khuda aarzoo(uzma) okz gtg see u laterz babyez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 24, 2003 Wah wah janaab kya kehnay.... really good work!! Humari bhi kuch aisi hee AARZOO hai... shaiyri likhnay ki I mean!!! :;): Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted January 25, 2003 salamz shaboooo!!!!!!!!!!!! How r u dear friend ?????? Well thx for ur appreciationz and liking :P Kiya kehna app ki AARZOO ka :;): ok gtg babyez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 25, 2003 W/salam Aarzoo I'm fine thanks and hope u r too.....Your welcome janaab the appreciation was well deserved!! Kya bathaiyn ji ab AARZOO cheez hee aisi hai :;): Take care Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted January 25, 2003 salamz shabooo!!!!! Well ab hum kiya bol sakhtheeen heen abt ur AARZOO :;): ok gtg babyez take carez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 20, 2003 salamz to allz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How r u allz????????? Well here is my another poem tht i wanna share with u :) And haan also reply me hows it ? Pagal Si Larki Aik pagal si larki phir yeah dua ker bhethi key kaash usko bhi mujh sey mohabbat ho gaey mohabbat-o-chahat ishq-o-janoon sab khuch ho gaey magar woh yeah na janti thi key agar usko mohabbat ho bhi gaey tu zarari tu nahi key is jahan maen mohabbat mil bhi gaey tu usney soocha key abhi to mohabbat sirf mujh ko hey agar na bhi milli to seh loongi magar uskoo toothtey hoey kasey dekh paoongi oor ziadah terpoongi jetey ji marjaoongi is liey key jis saey mohabbat hoti hey woh kasa bhi ho uska bura soocha nahi jata hey is liey ab is pagal si larki ney dua khuch yoon ki key aey khuda is shaks ko mohabbat zaroor ho mager jis saey ho woo usko hasil bhi ho chahey maen na sahi koey our hi ho yeah dua us pagal ney jitni mushkil sey ki hey bas wohi janti hey our uska khuda aarzoo(uzma) okz gtg see u laterz babyez ALLAHHAFIZ assalam-o-alaikum, AIK BARI SI KHIRKI aik bari si khirki jan samney khol ker bheithi kay kash uss ki bhi khob shohrat ho jai mashhoor-o-mairof ... sub ki favourite ho jai magar woh yah nah janti thi kay ager uss ki shohrat ho bhi jai tou zaroori tou nahi DIANA sey bhi ziyada ho jai tou uss ney socha kay abb tou shook-e-shohrat sub ko hai ager mujhe nah mili tou REEMA n MEERA ki khabar loon gi magar beautician tak kaisay pohchoon gi bas zara cutting kerwaon gi face polish kerwaon gi ess liye kay jis ki shohrat hoti hai woh assa waisa bhi ho tou log ussey aisey aisay deikhtay hain ess liye abb uss bari si khirki lo pakar ker kaha kay ufff khudaya !!! meri shohrat zaroor hoti magar jab yeh khirki gali ki taraf kholti ho chahay thori si hi sahi per samnay yeh deewar na ho aur phir jis zoor n gussey sey khirki bandh ki hai kay parosi pochnay aa gay "APPA KHARIYAT TOU HAI NA" BY army_qan take care n ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
goraya 0 Posted February 20, 2003 dear aarzoo sahib ya sahiba i dont now , it was not a poem ,its looks just a prose and think it was good jesture and passion towards writing and u have good potential towards writning .and it was a really a ur inner feelings just from ur heart ,loooks like u have been hearted by some one . May God give him good track towards u who have hearted u . and i am really preying for u to get back ur love. i hope u will give me ur coments about ur poem ahmad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
army_qan 0 Posted February 21, 2003 Assalam-o-alaikum, Ji tou arz0o app ko appreciate tou kiya hi nahi well janab app nay khasi achi khoshish ki hai I like it really keep it up aur yeh perh ker tou mujhe tou shair yaad aaraha hai kay ~~~ jisay manga the mei apni har dua mei who kisi ko yuhi binmangay mil gaya ~~~ acha hai na :;): khair ji waisey aik jagah suna tha pata nahi kis haad tak theak hai kay larkiyaan bahut duaoon kerti hain … ehum ehum …. Jab kay unhein pata hota hai kay unn ki dua qabool nahi hogi ……… aur larkay pata hota hai kay dua qabool ho jani hai lakin akhir mei keh deytey hain kay “ALLAH miya meri dua seriously na …………. Ehum ehum .. :;): well ji yeh tou aik mazak tha mei nay nahi kaha ess liye mujhe bhi kuch na kaha jai ok ji meri bhi khoshish batana kaisi lagi theak ji take care n ALLAH HAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted February 21, 2003 Waslamz !!!!!!!!!! well goraya ji laghtha hey app ney poem ki mistake to pakar li but meera name nahi deekha aarzoo key bad brackets maen likha hua hey --------------------and haan aarzoo ki jati hey aarzooo kiya nahi jata then how u wrote sahib or sahiba ----- And haan its an azad nazam so i just write it as poem ------well i think it was ritoo :) AND army_qan good try keep it up and thx for ur appreciation and liking :;): Alwayz Smilez ok gtg take carez babayez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
BALI 0 Posted February 24, 2003 salamz to allz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How r u allz????????? Well here is my another poem tht i wanna share with u :) And haan also reply me hows it ? Pagal Si Larki Aik pagal si larki phir yeah dua ker bhethi key kaash usko bhi mujh sey mohabbat ho gaey mohabbat-o-chahat ishq-o-janoon sab khuch ho gaey magar woh yeah na janti thi key agar usko mohabbat ho bhi gaey tu zarari tu nahi key is jahan maen mohabbat mil bhi gaey tu usney soocha key abhi to mohabbat sirf mujh ko hey agar na bhi milli to seh loongi magar uskoo toothtey hoey kasey dekh paoongi oor ziadah terpoongi jetey ji marjaoongi is liey key jis saey mohabbat hoti hey woh kasa bhi ho uska bura soocha nahi jata hey is liey ab is pagal si larki ney dua khuch yoon ki key aey khuda is shaks ko mohabbat zaroor ho mager jis saey ho woo usko hasil bhi ho chahey maen na sahi koey our hi ho yeah dua us pagal ney jitni mushkil sey ki hey bas wohi janti hey our uska khuda aarzoo(uzma) okz gtg see u laterz babyez ALLAHHAFIZ really good work!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
petarian93 0 Posted February 24, 2003 HELLO AND SALAM " AARZOO JEE HUM NEH IS SHAIR-0-SHAIRI KE MEDAAN MAIN BILKUL NAYE HAIN LEKIN KABIE KABIE HUMAIN KOI ACHA SHAIR YAA ACHI NAZAM SUNATA HAI US KO HUM DAA`AD ZAROOR DAYTE HAIN AUR AAP BHI DAA`AD KI HAQDAAR HAIN ". WELL I AM NOT A PROFESSIONAL POET BUT FOR U AND UR THIS GROUP I HAVE SELECTED SOME LINES FROM THE VERY SMALL COLLECTION OF DEIFFERENT POETS. (MUJHE PATA NAHIN KEH KIS SHAIR KE SHAIR HAIN YE LEKIN YE MUJHE KUCH KUCH PASAND AAYE) ----- main hans kay ji layta hoon judai ki sabhi rasmain kadam chukhat pay rakhta hoon to ankhain bheeg jati hain ----- hawa kay dosh pay rakhay hoay chiraag thay hum jo bhuj gaey to hawa say shikayatain kaisi ----- dil kay chaaloon ko koi shairi kahay to KUCH nahi takleef to tab hoti hay jab koi wah wah kahta hai (FILM DEVDAAS) ----- UJALAY APNEE YADOON KAY HAMARAY SAHT RAHNAY DOO... NA JANAY KIS GALEE MIAN ZINDAGEE KEE SHAM HOJAYE ----- AND IN THE LAST THE FUNNY ONE kismat main hota to kharidta ik khota ,,,,,,, kismat main hota to kharidta ik khota ,,,,,,, KABHI tum sawar hotai khbi maien sawar hota!!!!!!!!!!! ANd thats all folks WISH U ALL BEST OF LUCK CHEERS IMRAN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted February 27, 2003 Wasalamz!!!!!! How r u allllz???? Well thx to bali and petarian93 for liking my poetry and encourage me :) And haan imran ur posted shiar is good keep it up ok gtg babyez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooldewana1 0 Posted February 27, 2003 hay hi balli how r u i am hamza from rwp hay mujhay yeah batao kay tum arzzo ho ya uzma ya billi ??? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cooldewana1 0 Posted February 27, 2003 hi salamz to all lab pay inkaar tha dil main iqrar thaa inki ankoon main meray liyay peyar tha likh likh kay mera nam metatay kyon ho hum say iqrara wafa kar kay chupatay kyon ho yahn kisii ko hasbay arzoo na millaa kisii ko hum na millay or hum ko tooo na milla take care bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
petarian93 0 Posted March 1, 2003 hello everybuddy and aaarzoo jee thanks ki koi baat nahin u deserves appreciation well thanx for appreciating me. IMRAN Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted March 2, 2003 Wasalamz and Hiez!!!!!! Howz u allz ???? Well good shairi u posted cooldewana1 keep it up and keep posting here :) And haan petarian93 u r always welcome but keep posting here OK. ok gtg babyez take carez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
goraya 0 Posted March 7, 2003 hi , first of all how r u? thanks for replying me . ok i think u have mind it of criticism on ur poem ,if u mind it paradon me .i was not present on net due to illness of my mother so i am replying u little bit later .well ihave wrot u sahib or sahiba because mostly on net itis blunder so i wrote it so, i want to know ur name by urself if u dont mind . i am waiting for ur another poem now ok take car bye ahmad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted March 7, 2003 Salamz n Hiez to Everyone!!!!!! Howz u allz???? Well goraya i didnt mind at all!! i was just want to finished ur confusion !!!!! Well feel so sorry for ur mother hmmmz tell me howz ur mother now ? Well my name is uzma:) and aarzoo is my takhalas . ok gtg babyez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
goraya 0 Posted March 25, 2003 helo dear how r u? i hope u will be enjoying . i am waiting for ur another azad nazam whaen it is coming . keep it up please take care bye ahmad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
goraya 0 Posted March 29, 2003 helo dear, where is ur new poem i means new addition iam waiting for it. take care bye ahmad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Bugs 0 Posted March 29, 2003 nice poem keep postin . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aarzoo 0 Posted March 30, 2003 Salamz allz!!!!! Howz u allz ???? well i am fine goraya but quite buzz :) InshaAllah i will be posting more poems later on. And haan thx bugz for liking my poerty :P ok gtg babyez ALLAHHAFIZ Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
munnibhai 0 Posted July 29, 2003 wo larki ik deevani si afsaana tha ya kahani thi hum ik doojay main kho jatay or hoti ik shaam suhani si i will just say this! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted July 29, 2003 hi! aarzoo fantastic bohat acha laga hai tumhari poems perha ker keep it up . bye Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
