deadlyatti 0 Posted January 26, 2004 Woh aik lamhe main hamaray khwaboon ko mitti main mila gaye, Umeed ki aik kiran ko pal bhar main bujha gaye, Zara bhi khayal na kiya hamaray jazbatoon ka, Woh apne alfaaz tiir ki tarhan hamarey dil pa chala gaye, Hamari hasti khailtee zindagi shayad unko raas na aayi, Jo woh hamari zindagi main aik zehar sa mila gaye, Raastey ka pathar samajh kar unhoone ham ko thukradiya, Ham isi ko apni qismat samajh kar zindagi ko maut banagaye............ Hey guys kaisi lagi tell me ......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 26, 2004 Awwwww so nice Atti... Hey but do tell koun tha WOH!! Nice contribution Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 26, 2004 Deadly Very Nice..! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 27, 2004 himmm very changhee poetry deadly :D ... aur han yaad se mujhye bhie bataana woh thee woh :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadlyatti 0 Posted January 27, 2004 thankx 4 appreciating aur haan jahan tak batane ka sawaal hai to sorry woh main nahin bataon ga magar aik baat batata hoon ke ye poem maine khuud likkhi hai............ achi hai na??!!!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted January 27, 2004 wow Your own Writing! yeah its good!..Deadly! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted January 28, 2004 deadlyati yeh tumhari apni shairi thee ... wah yar wahhh wahh ... wesey dil kie batain sab ko batani nahiein chahiyee ;) bilkul mujh pe gaya hia :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ebadut 0 Posted January 29, 2004 who is woh deadly and woh baray barahum niklay. if u can't be with someone u love, be with the one who loves u. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted January 29, 2004 bohat achee poetry hai app ki very nice woh apnai alfaz teer ki terha dhamray dil per chala gayee bohit khoob ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted January 29, 2004 It's your own creation?? Cool Atti, very well done Heyyyy it was only a point of conversation WOH jo bhi hai, jahaan bhi hai, khush rahay ;) poochh na mujh se dil k fasaane ishq ki baatein ishq hee jaane wo din jab hum un se mile the dil k naazuk phool khile masti aankhein choom rahi thi saari duniya jhoom rahi do dil they wo bhi deewaane wo din jab hum door huay the dil k sheeshe choor huay the aaiee Khizaan rangeen chaman mein aag lagii jab dil k ban mein ayaa na koi aag bujhaane Umair> :P Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 1, 2004 shabnam.... hum se chupatee ho nice shairi ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 1, 2004 dis poetry is dedicated to ma .......... i don know :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 1, 2004 i like u utna u like me jitna...... U like me jab tak I like u tab tak.......I like U tab se U like me jab se.........U like me Jitna i like U Uthna........U Like me Jaane Kab Thak But I Like U Marte Damtak :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 2, 2004 thank u saher :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadlyatti 0 Posted February 10, 2004 thankx guys "DIL KI BATOON KO DILBAR JO NA HAMSE KAHO GE, DEKHNA ZINDAGI BHAR TUM TADAPTE RAHO GE, KEHNA CHAHOON MAIN LEKIN KUCH KAHA BHI NA JAYE, ROOG TUM KO LAGA JO US SE RAB HI BACHAYE........... maine to aur bhi poems likkhiin hian woh phir kabhi posty karoonga......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted February 10, 2004 What a briliant shairi yar dil to pagal hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deadlyatti 0 Posted February 10, 2004 Dil ka aalam main kya bataon tujhe aik chehray ne bohat pyaar se dekhaa mujhee..... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 11, 2004 deadlyati bhaie songs to mat ga :D .... Aik sheir "hota tha jis ke aik tabassum pe roz qatal be sakhta jo hanse tu qayamat hi aagayi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
