M00N 0 Posted February 5, 2004 :D hi fati wat a sweet poem realy is ....keep posting ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted February 5, 2004 This Gaza reminds me of Jagjets That Gazal! Mujh Say Bichar ker Khush Rehtay ho! Mere Tarhan Tum b Jhotay Ho...! Ek Thenee per Chan tikaa tha! May yeah samjha tum Bethay ho...! Ujlay Ujlay phoool khilay thay Bikul jasay Tum hanstay ho...! Mujh ko sham bata dete hay Tum kasay Kapray Pehnay ho...! Tum tanha dunya say laro gay! Bacho c Batin Kertay Ho..! Love this One! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
M00N 0 Posted February 5, 2004 hmmm gr8 going nadan ........i love 2 this ghazal Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted February 5, 2004 thnaks yes its nice!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 6, 2004 arey guyss ab meri taraf se kuch arz hia ;) is zindagi ka aik naya roop dikha diya teri mohabbat ne... hum thay kya aur ab hain kaun sab bhula diya teri mohabbat ne... jo bass ek hawa ke jhonkay ke saath hi gir jaye wo... tash ke paton ka mahal mujhe bana diya teri mohabbat ne... aanso'on mein bhi hansna sikha diya teri mohabbat ne... bina aag ya kisi sholay ke mujhe jala diya teri mohabbat ne... wo sapnay wo umeedein wo intizar kabhi thay ya na thay... udaas thay to sahi pehle bhi per ab rula diya teri mohabbat ne... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
