ADD 0 Posted February 10, 2004 salam 2 all Socha nahi acha bura dekha suna kuch bhi nahi manga khuda se raat din teray siwa kuch bhi nahi Socha tujhay ,dekha tujhay,chaha tujhay, pooja tujhay meri khata, meri wafa ,teri khata kuch bhi nahi Jis per humari aankh ne moti bichaiay raat bhar bheja wohi kaghaz usay hum ne likha kuch bhi nahi Aik shaam k saaiay talay bethay rahay woh der tak aankhon se ki batain bahut muun se kaha kuch bhi nahi Ahsas ki khusboo kahan awaaz k jugnoo kahan khamosh yaadon k siwa ghar main raha kuch bhi nahi Do char din ki baat hai dil khak main mil jaiay ga jab aag per kaghaz rakha baqi bacha kuch bhi nahi Regards its me AD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 10, 2004 woooooooooooooooow bohat khoob ADD yaqeenan aap ki nahi :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ADD 0 Posted February 10, 2004 salam 2 all Thanx kiran its true not mine so ab sukoon milgaya hoga aao ko Regards its me AD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NInA 2 Posted February 10, 2004 Ive red it b4, GOOD ONE!! Thanks for sharing jee :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted February 12, 2004 its so beautiful ADD .. Ahsas ki khusboo kahan awaaz k jugnoo kahan khamosh yaadon k siwa ghar main raha kuch bhi nahi Do char din ki baat hai dil khak main mil jaiay ga jab aag per kaghaz rakha baqi bacha kuch bhi nahi very nice ! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
ADD 0 Posted February 12, 2004 salam 2 all THANX 2 PLG Umair.zm n RUKh yes u r right these stanzas r meaningful 2 Regards its me AD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 13, 2004 thanx add... Afsana "Ahle-Dil Yoonhi Nibha Lete Hai Dard Seene MeiN Chupa Lete Hai Apni AankhO Ko Banakar Yeh ZubaaN Kitne Afsaane Suna Lete Hai Jalte MausaM MeiN Bhi Yeh Deewane Kuch HasiN PhOOl Khila Lete Hai Jin Ko Jeena Hai Mohabbat Ke Liye Apni Hasti Ko Mita Dete Hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 18, 2004 (edited) salam 2 allSocha nahi acha bura dekha suna kuch bhi nahi manga khuda se raat din teray siwa kuch bhi nahi Socha tujhay ,dekha tujhay,chaha tujhay, pooja tujhay meri khata, meri wafa ,teri khata kuch bhi nahi Jis per humari aankh ne moti bichaiay raat bhar bheja wohi kaghaz usay hum ne likha kuch bhi nahi Aik shaam k saaiay talay bethay rahay woh der tak aankhon se ki batain bahut muun se kaha kuch bhi nahi Ahsas ki khusboo kahan awaaz k jugnoo kahan khamosh yaadon k siwa ghar main raha kuch bhi nahi Do char din ki baat hai dil khak main mil jaiay ga jab aag per kaghaz rakha baqi bacha kuch bhi nahi Regards its me AD Superb fantastice ADD Edited February 18, 2004 by Kiran Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 18, 2004 "Tumse toh tumhari yaadein achi hain Jab bhi yeh dil tanha hota hain Hamare pass chali aati hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted February 19, 2004 salam 2 allThanx kiran its true not mine so ab sukoon milgaya hoga aao ko Regards its me AD :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 19, 2004 hello \ so nice u all har ek kali nay aoreh lia maimi labas har phool par mailam hi our chand rat chalaka sa pada raha hi vasi vahshtoon ka rang har cheez pay hi zaval hi our chand rat B) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 21, 2004 very nice kiran :) napster gr8 yar Wo Kehte The Rone Se Nahin Badalte Naseeb Un Ki Is Baat Ne Umar Bhar Rone Na Diya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
napster 0 Posted February 21, 2004 nice yar tahts is nice poetry jab bhii aatii hai terii yaad kabhii shaam ke baad aur ba.D jaatii hai afsurdaadilii shaam ke baad ab iraado.n pe bharosaa hai na taubaa pe yaqii.n mujh ko le jaaye kahaa.N tashnaalabii shaam ke baad yuu.N to har lamhaa terii yaad kaa bojhal guzaraa dil ko mahasuus hu_ii terii kamii shaam ke baad yuu.N to kuchh shaam se pahale bhii udaasii thii 'Adeeb' ab to kuchh aur ba.Dii dil kii lagii shaam ke baad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 22, 2004 zabardst napster "Khud apney liye beth ke sochein ge kisi din yun hai ke tujhey bhool ke dekhein ge kisi din Bhatkey hoye phirtey hain kayi lafz jo dil main Duniya ne diya waqt tu likhein ge kisi din Hil jayein ge ek bar tu arshoon k darobaam Ye khak nashen log jo bolein ge kisi din Aapas ki kisi baat ka milta hi nahi waqt Har bar ye kehtey hain ke " bethein ge kisi din " Aye jaan teri yaad ke benaam parindey Shakhoon pe merey dard ke utrein ge kisi din Jati hai kisi jheel ki gehraai kahan tak Aankhoon main teri doob ke dekhein ge kisi din Khushboo se bhari shaam main jugno ke qalam se Ik nazm tere naam likhein ge kisi din Khushboo ki tarah , misle saba ,khuwaab numa se Galiyoon se tere shehr ke guzrein ge kisi din Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
