Zaini 22 Posted October 1, 2009 Assalam O Alikum Memberz Main aik baar phr Poetry competition start kar rahi hon, i hope is baar sub members ki participation bht achay rahay ge Last time Competition main hum nay ik Poet rakha tha aur unhe ki poetry share ki thi lakin is baar thora touf competition ho isliya hum ik Word rakh rahy hain, ap ny sirf wohi poetry Share karni hai jis main woh Word use kia gaya ho. Participate krnay say phlay plz in rules ko follow kr ligea RulEs 1) Is month ka Word hai "Aasman" 2) Diye gye word ko ap apni sharing main Highlight karna zaroori hai 3) Aik member sirf aik poetry he share kr skty hain. 4) Agr kisi member nay poetry repate ki to usay cancel kr dia jaye ga . 5) Vote k zariye result announce kia jaye ga aur Winner Member Next Month k comp k liya Word ya Poet name tajviz kry ga. 6) Comp main participate krnay ki last date 15 Oct 2009 ha, Special Announcment Is Competition k Winner ko Admin ki taraf sy "Winner Of Poetry Competition ( Oct ) Ka title dia jaye ga jo us k Profile main add kiye jaye ga Best of luck Allz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted October 1, 2009 very nice thread... Zaini u Rock.. but Admin say b poch lena tha compition start kernay say pehlay lolzz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 1, 2009 Thnx, Admin sy maine bht phlay ka pocha hau hai , unhonay kaha tha k ok ap start kr lo agr member intrest show karain tou , phr main khud ghayab hogye thi , aur ap fikar n karain is baar maine Admin ko bhi ni chorna , agr Title na diye aur apni baat sy mukray na tou bus Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted October 1, 2009 (edited) My Favorite one ____________________________________ Zameen pe chal na saka asman se bhi gaya Kata k par to parinda uraan se bhi gaya Bhula diya to bhulane ki inteha kardi Ab wo shaks mere wahm-o-guman se bhi gaya Kisi k hath se nikla hua wo teer hoon main Jo hadaf ko choo na saka or kaman se bhi gaya Tabah kargai mujhe pakke ghar ki khuwaish Main apne gaon k kachey makan se bhi gaya Paraai aag main kooda to kya mila Usko to bacha na saka or apni jaan se bhi gaya Edited October 4, 2009 by Emaad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 1, 2009 Wow itni jaldi thnx n nice sharing Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted October 2, 2009 Very nice topic Zaini.... i was thinking abt poetry competition.... ap nay start kar dia ... nice.... i will post in competiton very soon. very Nice Emaad Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
tanha 2 Posted October 2, 2009 Aasman mei jab jab badal garajta hoga, mausam bhi aapna rukh badalta hoga... Uthti hogi jab jab aapki nigahein, khuda bhi gir gir kar sambhalta hoga Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted October 2, 2009 Thnx, Admin sy maine bht phlay ka pocha hau hai , unhonay kaha tha k ok ap start kr lo agr member intrest show karain tou , phr main khud ghayab hogye thi , aur ap fikar n karain is baar maine Admin ko bhi ni chorna , agr Title na diye aur apni baat sy mukray na tou bus Thats goood .... Zaini Wow itni jaldi thnx n nice sharing han g app ka topic and poetry title meray matlab ka tha dekhtay hee post kernay ko dil kia Very nice topic Zaini.... i was thinking abt poetry competition.... ap nay start kar dia ... nice.... i will post in competiton very soon. very Nice Emaad Talash just think nahi ... esay kamo main dare nahi kertay.. jesay hee mind main ay sath hee share ker letay hain... and thanks talaash Aasman mei jab jab badal garajta hoga, mausam bhi aapna rukh badalta hoga...Uthti hogi jab jab aapki nigahein, khuda bhi gir gir kar sambhalta hoga Tanha plz edit ur poetry this is not good .. and plz esi poetry say avoid kia kerain jis main khuda lafz involve hoo raha hon.. coz khuda k liyay koi poery nahi just Hamad hai bro Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 3, 2009 Very nice topic Zaini.... i was thinking abt poetry competition.... ap nay start kar dia ... nice.... i will post in competiton very soon. very Nice Emaad Thnx sis , oh mujhe pata hota tou main post nhi karti chalain next time ap post kr liye ga , aur ap ki participation ka intizara rahy ga :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 3, 2009 Aasman mei jab jab badal garajta hoga, mausam bhi aapna rukh badalta hoga...Uthti hogi jab jab aapki nigahein, khuda bhi gir gir kar sambhalta hoga Tanha ap ki poetry ki wording bht he zaida ghalat hai plz isya Edit kr dain aur Word ko Highlight zaroor karain plz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 3, 2009 Thats goood .... Zaini han g app ka topic and poetry title meray matlab ka tha dekhtay hee post kernay ko dil kia Talash just think nahi ... esay kamo main dare nahi kertay.. jesay hee mind main ay sath hee share ker letay hain... and thanks talaash Tanha plz edit ur poetry this is not good .. and plz esi poetry say avoid kia kerain jis main khuda lafz involve hoo raha hon.. coz khuda k liyay koi poery nahi just Hamad hai bro I agree wid u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
papu_yaar 0 Posted October 3, 2009 AeY Allah! Jab bhi tera asmaan daikhta hun Us mein basa ik jahaan daikhta hun Na jaane kitne hi jahaanon ki sair karta hun Khol kar jab tera QURAN daikhta hun Tere ehsaan kitne hain bandon pe Jab bhi SURAH REHMAN daikhta hun Tu tu kehta hai Rag-e-jaan se bhi hun MAIN qareeb Phir pareshan kyun aaj ka insaan daikhta hun Us ki REHMAT se kabhi mayoos na hona logo Tum pe mein uski REHMAT k nishan daikhta hun! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
chinky 31 Posted October 4, 2009 Again Competition started...vNicee...zaini... Good Luck!!!Allz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted October 4, 2009 AeY Allah! Jab bhi tera asmaan daikhta hun Us mein basa ik jahaan daikhta hun Na jaane kitne hi jahaanon ki sair karta hun Khol kar jab tera QURAN daikhta hun Tere ehsaan kitne hain bandon pe Jab bhi SURAH REHMAN daikhta hun Tu tu kehta hai Rag-e-jaan se bhi hun MAIN qareeb Phir pareshan kyun aaj ka insaan daikhta hun Us ki REHMAT se kabhi mayoos na hona logo Tum pe mein uski REHMAT k nishan daikhta hun! papu yar >> Poetry send keray yeh Hamad hai or iss ke tu koi mukabla hee nahi.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 5, 2009 Again Competition started...vNicee...zaini... Good Luck!!!Allz Thnx Dear , participate zaroor krna plz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 5, 2009 papu yar >> Poetry send keray yeh Hamad hai or iss ke tu koi mukabla hee nahi.. Bro i agree wid u , aur no doubth Ye Hammad bht khubsurat hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 6, 2009 Aik chand tanha khara raha meray Aasman say zara paray Mere saath saath safar main tha meri manzlion say zara paray Kabhi dil ki baat kahi na thi jo kahi to wo b dabi dabi Mereay lafz ti thay poray magar, teri sama'toon sya zara paray Tu chala gay amere hum-safar zara deakh mur k to aik nazar Meri kahshtiyan hain jali huen, tere sahiloon say zara paray Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted October 7, 2009 very nice poetry Zaini Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
papu_yaar 0 Posted October 7, 2009 papu yar >> Poetry send keray yeh Hamad hai or iss ke tu koi mukabla hee nahi.. Bro i agree wid u , aur no doubth Ye Hammad bht khubsurat hai Emaad it is a religious poetry. and if you look at the rules of competition there was no restriction either it is a love poetry or religious or any one. otherwise the rules should be changed. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 7, 2009 Imran ye Poetry nhi Hammad kehlaye ge, Emaad bro ab batain kia karna hai ? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted October 12, 2009 Mere Humsafar Mere Humsafar mere saath tum Mera Aasmaan bankar chala karo Kuch to Mausam hai badalte itnay saray Dhoop Bhi tum Shaam bhi tum Meri chaya bankar chala karo Mere Humsafar Kuch Sapne aankho main itnay saray Tum Haquiqat Bankar basa karo Mere Humsafar Kuch Rang hain bikhray itnay saray Tum indra-dhanush bankar khila karo Mere Humsafar Kathan hain zindgi safar dushwar hai kabhi paaon nahi uthtay kabhi dorahay itnay tum rah bankar mila karo Mere humsafar Jab koi ghum ho aur aankhain thori num ho Un barsaato main tum badal bankar mila karo Mere Humsafar Ghire khade ho kabhi banvar main Tum Lahar bankar Sahilon pay mila karo Mere Humsafar Ho jaye kabhi jo koi khata humse Tum humse gila karo, phir shuru silsila ek naya karo Mere Humsafar Kabhi Aas Bankar, Kabhi Ahsaas bankar Kabhi Honsla to Kabhi vishwas bankar Mere saath saath chala karo Mere Humsafar Ghir aaye kabhi jo raat ghaneri Tum Chand bankar dikha karo aur Kabhi Taron main tum hasa karo Mere Humsafar mere saath tum Mera Aasman bankar chala karo. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted October 14, 2009 Very nice poety Talash Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted October 15, 2009 Aj Competition ka last day hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dcent -A- 3 Posted October 15, 2009 (edited) Saber-o-Zabt Ki Janna Dastaan To Main Bhi Hoon , Dastaan To TUM Bhi Ho Apni Apni Azmat Ka Aasman To Main Bhi Hoon , Aasman To TUM Bhi Ho Sahiloon Ki Doori Se Sawanoon K Mosam Main Kayse Doob Sakte Hain Beqarar Mosam Main Badbaan To Main Hoon , Badbaan To TUM Bhi Ho Hum Bichar Chukay Laykin Rasam-o-Raah Ki Khatir Miltay Rahte Hain Werna Kuch Udas Shamoon Ka Raazdan To Main Bhi Hoon , Raazdan To TUM Bhi Ho Aik jaysa Hai Aasman , Aik Jaysi Hai Zamein Aur Aik Jaysa Hai Sumander Aab-e-Gum Ki Lehroon K Dermiyaan To Main Bhi Hoon Dermiyaan To TUM Bhi Ho!! Edited October 15, 2009 by Dcent -A- Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
