rosh 0 Posted June 12, 2004 acche nazam thi umair khass kar yeh sher ab chalain ao k ji bhar kay dekh lon tumhay ab num ankhon main her shay dhundlanay lagi hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 13, 2004 thank u rosh :) ... Humse door jayoge kaise, Dil se hume bhulayoge kaise, Hum to vo khusboo hain jo aapki saanso mein baste hain, Khud ki saanso ko rok payoge kaise Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted June 14, 2004 wow rosh n umair u guys have fantastic collection Socha naheen accha bura Dekha suna kuch bhee naheen Manga khuda say hur waqt... Teray siwa..... Kuch bhee naheen! Dekha tujhey chaha tujhey Socha tujhey pooja tujhey Meri wafa meri khata.... Teri khata kuch bhee naheen! Jis par hamari aankh nay Moti bichayey raat bhar Bhaija wahee kaghaz usay Ham nay likha...... Kuch bhee naheen Aur aik shaam kee dehleez per Baithay rahay woh dair tak Aankhon say kee batain bohat Munh say kaha.....kuch bhee naheen! Do chaar din kee baat hay Dil khak mein mil jaeyey ga Aag per jab kaghaz rakha Baqee bacha ..... Kuch bhee naheen Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 14, 2004 kiran yeh poetry maine kahien recently post ki hia :) ... mujhey forward mail main mili thee :P ... anywaz thanx for apriciation :hi: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted June 14, 2004 umair mujhe bhi fwd mail mili thi :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 14, 2004 ayienda soch samajh k post kya karo :P tum ne barye COPY PASTE kariney waley already bethey hoye hian Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rosh 0 Posted June 15, 2004 kuch naho hota umair aisa to hota hai lekin hai bohat piayare nazam socha nahi accha bura dekha suna kuch bhi nahi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 15, 2004 ZARA SI BAAT ZARA THEROO! TUM SE EK ZAROORI BAAT KERNI HAI IDHER AAOO ! KE RASTE MAIN KHARA HONA HUMEN AACHA NAHIN LAGTA YAHAN BEHTHOO! KE BATEEN TO HUM HAMESHA TASALLI HI SE KERTE HAIN HUMEN IS TARHAN MAT DEKHO! NAHIN TO HUM TUMHARE SAMNE KUCH KEH NA PAYEN GE TO HAAN BAS BAAT ITNI HAI! CHALO CHORO KABHI MOQA MILA TO PHIR BATAYEN GE. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 15, 2004 kiran >> main to bas mazak kar raha tha .. come on cheer up now :) rosh >>> yeh lines bari poetry ki few lines post ki hai ap ne :P porie posting main kar chuka hon ruby >> kya baat hia :hi: very nice posting Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 15, 2004 Hum Safar Gham Jo Mohabaat Mein Diya Hai Tumne Yeh Bhi Mujhpar Bada Ehesaan Kiya Hai Tumne Ek Muddat Se Isi Din Ki Thi Hasarat Dil Mein Aaj Mein Khush Hun Ke Deewana Kaha Hai Tumne Jab Bhi Takarai Mere Jism Se Yeh Sh_okh Hava Mujhko Mehasoos Hua Ke Chuaa Hai Tumne Kya Mere Dil Ke Dhadakane Ki Hi Awaaz Hai Yeh Ya Ke Phir Kaan Mein Kuch AaKe Kaha Hai Tumne Hitchkiyan Bhi Kabhi Kambhakt Nahin Aati Hai Jo Yeh Sochon Ke Mujhe Yaad Kiya Hai Tumne Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted June 18, 2004 nice collection both of u :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 20, 2004 thanks kkkiran :D Haseeno ne haseen banke gunaaah kiya, auro ko to theek humko bhi tabaah kiya, pesh kiya jab ghazaloN mein unki bewafaii ko, auro ne to theek unhone bhi waah waah kiya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
*welfare* 0 Posted June 20, 2004 mein khial hoon kisi or ka mugay sochta koi or hay sirEaina mara aks hay pasEaina koi or hay mein kisi kay dastEtalab mein hoon tum kisi kay harfEdoua mein mein naseeb hoon kisi or ka mughay mangta koi or hay agab aitbar or bayaitbar kay darmian hay zindaghi mein kareeb hoon kisi or kay mughay ganta koi or hay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kiran 2 Posted June 21, 2004 nice ghazal welfare :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 22, 2004 very good AMIR :hi: YeH SaCh HaI Yeh sach hai un se nigahain kabhi mila na sakay hum un ki yaad ko lekin kabhi bhula na sakay Woh khush naseeb sahi,tujh se jo qareeb hain hum budnaseeb hain jo ghum se dur jaa na sakay Chah ker chandni bhi us husn ko pohanch na sakee nikhar ke phool bhi us ka shabaab laa na sakay Qaid-e-ghum main bhi yeh aansu khushi ke qasid hain jo un ke deedar ke doraan hum chuppa na sakay Hazar Gardish-e-doraan ke saath khail chukkay magar tumharee nazar ka mizaaj paa na sakay jhijik jhijik ker nazar un ke dil tak aa pohanchii yeh woh safar hai ke manzil jise bhula na sakay Masroof tha mulaqaat main magar yeh maslihat thi ke hum donoon muskura na sakay Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 22, 2004 Tamam umar zindagi se door rahe, Teri khushi ke liye tuj hi se door rahe... Ab is se badkar wafa ki saza kya hogi K tere hokar bhi tujse door rahe. Ankhen apki ho, par ansu mere... Zindagi apki ho, par sanse meri... Dil apka ho, par dhadkan meri... Zindagi ke akhri mod par dua hogi yahi... Kafan apka ho, aur maut meri... Aansu ko ankhon ki Dehliz pe laya na karo, Apne dil ki halat Kisiko bataya na karo... Log mutthi bhar namak liye Ghoom rahe hain, Apne zakhm kisiko Dikhaya na karo... Kaash dil ki awaz ka itna asar ho jaaye, Hum unhe yaad karen Aur unhe khabar ho jaaye... Jab bhi apse milne ki takdeer nazar ayi Mujhe paoun main bandhi zanjeer nazar ayi Teri yaad main nikal pade mere ansoo Har ansoo main teri tasweer nazar ayi. Talaash karo koi tumhe mil jayega Magar humari tarah tumhe kaun chahega Zaroor koyi chahat ki nazar se tumhe dekhega Magar aankhain hamari kahan se layega. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 24, 2004 VERY NICE mhn :hi: old one :P Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 26, 2004 THANX U BOTH :) uMAIR OLD IS GOLD Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted June 27, 2004 koie baat nahien mhn :P Ab Afsos Nahin Nakaam Hoker "Sukun mil gaya aaj mujhe badnaam ho kar tere har ek ilzaam pay yuN bezabaan ho kar kya hua gar bulaya muje beizzat karne ke liye khush hun main teri mehfil mein mehman ho kar log parh hi lengen mohabbat teri aankhoon mein chahe karle lakh inkar tu anjaan ho kar ilzaam mujh par lagakar khud roye ja raha hai kya payega meray hamdard shar-e-aam ho kar mil to gaya suboot mujhe teri mohabbat ka ab afsos nahi tere ishq mein nakam ho kar Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 30, 2004 kisi ko yad karnay ka koi mosam nahi hota kisi lamhay kisi pal main kabhi lab par kabhi dil main kisi nagmy ka ik misra kabhi halchal machta hai tokoi yad aata hai suhani subhon ko tehni pay ghuncha muskarata hai to koi yad ata hai wo chahy sard ratain ho ya chahy garm dopehry khiza ki sard shamy ho ya khusbon ki bahary ho kisi ki yad ki parchiyana lehrany lagti hain ye sawan jab barasta hai to koi yad aata hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 1, 2004 so nice mhn :hi: Pyaar "Pyaar ko, ishq ko samajhnay main Kai umrain daraaz beet gain Kai aaqil adam sudhaar gaay Nukta cheenon ki saat beet gain Ishq wehshat hai, yeh kaha kuch nay Ishq zehmat hai, yeh kaha kuch nay Zindagi kay sulagtay sehra main shajr-e-rehmat hai, yeh kaha kuch nay kissah kam yeh, k ishq ki batain jo hamaisha say hoti aai hain aaj bhi saahil-e-samandar par sangraizon main gungunai hain aadmi raaz-e-ishq kya samjhay ishq khud ghaat main dikha, baitha main jo is ko samajhnay nikla tha aap apnay hawas kho baitha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted July 2, 2004 thanz kiran and umair :) wayse aik baat hai wo yeh ka mhn hai hi nice and zaber10 ;) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
