rukh 25 Posted June 19, 2004 ~*~*~* KHuab kay azab *~*~*` mer janay waloon per bohat say ansoo baha ker sabber to aa hee jata hay dil akhir ther hee jata hay ! zkhaum ger koi lag jaye dawa yahan kam ajayee merhum kissi kay rakhnay say zakhum bher to jata hay ! kery koi bay wafayee ho muhabbat ki ruswayee kissi ki wafa say phir yaqeen aa to jata hay ! sookhay hoyee paair per bahar kay ajanya say bairsh kay barsanay say phool khil hee jata hai ! lakin yeh Rukh nay jana hai khuab kay azab main ger koi phass jayee koi qabber nahi miltee jis main in ko dafnain or phir roo ker bhool jain nahi aisa nahi hota khuab kabhi nahi mertay saans kay niklany tak azad yeh nahi kertay jitna in ko dabaoo gay utna phayltay jain gay jitna in ko chupaoo gay utna yeh or sattain gay khuaab ki nager main ger chala jayee koi aik bar wapus kabhi nahi ata rasta woh nahi pata yeh azab der azab hay is main na tum kabhi ana na is main dil therta hay na koi zkahum bherta hay na yaqeen ko der milta hay na koi phool khilta hay khuab chaltay jatay hain derd berhtay jatay hain in ko kabhi bhi koi asra nahi milta ! ~*~*~*~*~Rukh~*~*~*~* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 20, 2004 SALAM, VERY VERY NICE RUKH BOHOT AACHI BALKE ZABARDAST!!! APKI APNI NAZAM HAI KIA AGAR HAAN TO GREAT RUKH! KEEP IT UP! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 20, 2004 lolzz thanx ruby ..haan itne Bay wazn shairee main hee kertee hoon .. ya shiree ka hath paoon tornay ka kam ajj kal sanbhala hoa hay :) Keep it up to na kahin werna too main gayee kam say :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fati 0 Posted June 20, 2004 bohat khoob rukh mashallah Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
NaDaN 0 Posted June 20, 2004 lakin yeh Rukh nay jana hai khuab kay azab main ger koi phass jayee koi qabber nahi miltee jis main in ko dafnain or phir roo ker bhool jain nahi aisa nahi hota khuab kabhi nahi mertay saans kay niklany tak azad yeh nahi kertay jitna in ko dabaoo gay utna phayltay jain gay jitna in ko chupaoo gay utna yeh or sattain gay khuaab ki nager main ger chala jayee koi aik bar wapus kabhi nahi ata rasta woh nahi pata yeh azab der azab hay is main na tum kabhi ana na is main dil therta hay na koi zkahum bherta hay na yaqeen ko der milta hay na koi phool khilta hay khuab chaltay jatay hain derd berhtay jatay hain in ko kabhi bhi koi asra nahi milta ! Rukh really great!! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 20, 2004 nahin rukh bohot aachi shairi hai sach bilkul bewazan nahin hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 20, 2004 thnax Fati . NAdan , :flower: Ruby > mm may be ..lakin mainy kabhi ghor nahi kia wazan per ,ya kissi or shaire kay asool per , i think zehan main mojood bay rubt lafzoon ko rubt day do to shairee ban jatee hay .. shaid :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 20, 2004 (edited) One MOre Here her sooch ab sooch rahay gee her khuab ab khuab he rahay ga jazbay sub bay izhar rahain gay battain sub an kahee rahain gee ansoo dil per bahain gay or lub ab chup rahain gay zindgee mukamal ho ker bhi adhoree dastan rahay gee or yeh dastan ab hamesha bay unwan hee rahay gee main zinda ho ker ab apni lash leye phiroon gee na mujh ko Tum millo gay na main tum ko bhool paon gee ab sub yoon hee chalay ga ab sub yoon hee rahay ga ! Edited June 22, 2004 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 23, 2004 salam, wow zabar10 rukh excellent bohot hi khoobsurst bay rubt lafzon ko rubt bhi bohot hi hasas dil wale hi de sakte hain kthte hain na shayir bohot hasas hote hain welldone rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Anayat 0 Posted June 23, 2004 Really Nice Collection Rukg :flower: i really like it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 24, 2004 (edited) ruby & anayat thanx for appreciation :) Lo khuda hafiz kehny ki tumhain saat agyee dil ko tha jis bat ka dherka woh nobat agyee toot ker ghata barsee tujh say juda hotay hee asman ronay laga badlon ko ghayrat agyee itfaqan jub koi teyray hawalay say milla samnay nazroon kay yukdam tere soorat agyee gher kay bam-o-der simat ker missl-e-zandan hogaye sham kia aye jaysay mujh main wehshat agyee is le bheja nahi itnay dinoo say khat mujhay raas shaid us ko gheroon ki rafaqat agyee ! aytbar sajid! Edited June 24, 2004 by rukh Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted June 25, 2004 salam, rukh app to bohot bohot aachi shairi kerti hain aur appka collection bhi bohot aacha hai nice Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rukh 25 Posted June 25, 2004 or ruby app taref bohat kertee hain :D ...lolzz thanx friend ..app ki nazr-e-karam werna bandee nacheez ki qabil lolzzzz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted June 25, 2004 kabi jo tumhain mari yaad aye........... "Kabhi Jo Tumhain Mairi Yaad Aye Tu Kuch Shaar Mairi Yaad Main Likh Daina Par Kabhi Na Kisi Say Kuch Kehna Agar Kabhi Koi Tum Say Maira Poochay Tu Haans Kar Us Ko Taal Daina Agar Ho Sakay Tu Mairay Khat Jala Daina Mairay Un Phoolon Ko Jheelon Main Baha Daina Kabhi Jo Tumhain Mairi Yaad Aye Tu Takiye Main Chup Kar Aansoo Baha Laina Phir Mujhay Yaad Kar K Muskura Daina Mairi Khoobsoorat Tasveeron Ko Dil K Nakshoon Say Mitta Daina Aur Unhain Phaar Kar Kaheen Jala Daina Per Kabhi Na Kisi Say Maira Zikaar Karna Kabhi Jo Tumhain Mairi Yaad Aye Tu Aik Khuwaab Samajh Kar Bhula Daina Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 4, 2004 acha lagne laga hai "dobna dobte rehana muje acha lagne laga hai, gut gut ki jeene ke adat se hone lage ye sub kuck acha lagne laga hai, gurbat,berozgari or mufad parasti ke siwa kia hai yahaion, ab in sub main geene ki adat si hone lagi hai, maita nahi koi sacha pyar karne wala, kise ko mari dolat chahion kisi ko mari sohrat, kisi ko mari zat se koi dichaspi nahi ab tanha rena ,chand se bateion kana acha lagne laga hai, make up ne chupa raha hai her cherah in husan walion ko make up kar ke boys ko dokha dena or dete rehna acha lagta hai zindagi ke masail main is kadar kho gia huin, khud ko dhondna or dhondte reha muje acha lagta hai, janta hoin jo lekh raha huin main, sub fazool hai, andion ki dunya main chashma bech raha huin, bhance ke age been baza raha huin. lekan adat se majboor huin, lekhna or lekhte rehna muje acha lagta hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 4, 2004 salam, uffff yeh apki kudh ki nazam... yani ke .... matlab ke... ohh aacha never mind aachi hai main bhi kia karoon her nazam ko jo yahan post hoti hai aacha kehte rehna mujhe aacha lagta hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 4, 2004 wase ek baat aur yeh nazam thi aacha lagne laga hai end main hogaye aacha lagta hai yeh kia hua ,kese hua ,kab hua ,kyoon hua Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 4, 2004 ruby jo bhie hia yehie hia :P ziyada socho mat :P warina bal safed ho jayein ghe Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 5, 2004 salam, haan yeh to hai zada soochna sehat ke liye muzir hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 5, 2004 WIZARAT E SEHIT HUKUMAT E COOLYAR Bus Rehnay Do "Aansu jo beh rahey hein inhein behney do Yeh keh rahey hein dil ki baat kehney do Buhat bawafa ho tum yeh ham ko hai maloom Tum apni wafa ki baat apney tak hi rehney do Mila to kia mila tumhein chahney kay baad Bas dukh hi seh rahein hein hamein sehney do Tum ney to keh dala sab haaledil apna Ab mujh ko apni daastaan bhi kehney do Mar hi gaye auroon kay liye hum Tum apni khatir hum ko Zinda rehney do Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted July 5, 2004 Mil Jata Humy Qaraar To Kya Hota Ger Hojata Dedaar To Kya Hota Guzar De Yun HI Zindagi Khamoosh Ger Hojata Iqraar To Kya hotaa Nachahty Hoyan Bhi Ijazat Chahi Ger Ho jata Inkaar To hota Dhuk Ko Senay Say Lagayn Mar Gayan Ger Hota Ghum E Khwar To Kya Hota Hoyan BadnaamSuna Dali Dastan Apni Nasir Ho jata Izhaar To Kya Hota Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 6, 2004 salam, hmmm very very nice umair and mhn ek dil hi tha ashna apna kis kis se ja ker mashwara kerte hum hasi tha kia wafayoon se bewafayoon se kia wafa kerte Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted July 6, 2004 hmm ruby to woh bewafa nikley very nice :hi: sadmaa to hai mujhe bhi ki tujhse judaa huun main " sadmaa to hai mujhe bhi ki tujhse judaa huun main lekin ye sochtaa huun ki ab teraa kyaa huun main bikharaa padaa hai tere hi ghar mein teraa vajuud bekaar mahafilon mein tujhe DhuuNDhataa huuN main main Khudakashi ke jurm kaa karataa huun aitaraaf apne badan ki qabr mein kabase gaDaa huuN main kis-kisakaa naam lauuN zabaaN par ki tere saath har roz ek shaKhs nayaa dekhataa huuN main naa jaane kis adaa se liyaa tuune mera naam duniyaa samajh rahi hai ke sab kuchh teraa huuN main le mere tajurbon se sabak ae mere raqeeb do chaar saal umr mein tujhase baDaa huuN main jaagaa huaa zameer vo aaiinaa hai "Qateel" sone se pahale roz jise dekhataa huuN main Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RUBY_4U 0 Posted July 7, 2004 salam, nice umair to app juda hain un se nahin umair shaid un ke hisab se main bewafa hoon ek lamha zindagi main saad aata hai zaroor, jab choopana bhi nahin kuch aur keh na bhi nahin Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
