Zaini 22 Posted May 13, 2010 Assalam O Alikum Dear Members, ap sub Poetry Competition main Participate krnay say phlay plz in rules ko follow kr ligea RulEs 1) Is month k poet hain Mohsin Naqvi 2) Members srf Mohsin Naqvi ki poetry he share kar saktay hain, 3) Aik member sirf aik Poetry he share kr skty hain. 4) Agr kisi member nay Poetry repate ki to usay cancel kr dia jaye ga . 5) Vote k zariye result announce kia jaye ga aur Winner Member Next Month k comp k liya Word ya Poet name tajviz kry ga. 6) Comp main participate krnay ki last date 22nd May 2010 hai, Special Announcment Is competition k Winner ko Admin ki taraf sy Winner Of Poetry competition (May) Ka title dia jaye ga jo us k Profile main add kiye jaye ga( Agar title Admin nay dia tou theak warna koi member mujh sy shikayat na karray ) Best of luck Allz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kamal 82 Posted May 13, 2010 jab se us ne shahar ko chora har rasta sunsan hua apna kya hai sare shahar ka ik jaisa nuksan hua mere hal pe hairat kaisi dard k tanha mausam main pathar bhi ro parte hain insan to phir insan hua us k zakhm chupa kar rakhiye khud us shakhs ki nazron se us se kaisa shikawa kije wo to abhi nadan hua yun bhi kam amez tha "Mohsin" wo is shahar k logon main lekin mere samne akar aur hi kuch anjam hua Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted May 13, 2010 hmmm wcb ...waaooo kia baat hai zaini sis.....gud topic u start.......... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted May 13, 2010 Special AnnouncmentIs competition k Winner ko Admin ki taraf sy Winner Of Poetry competition (May) Ka title dia jaye ga jo us k Profile main add kiye jaye ga( Agar title Admin nay dia tou theak warna koi member mujh sy shikayat na karray ) Zaini app k topic ke sub say achi bat yehi hai...! lolzzzz ok i will post after search any nice poetry of Mohsin Naqvi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
shahabi 23 Posted May 13, 2010 I WILL POST INSHALLAH Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted May 19, 2010 Zaini app k topic ke sub say achi bat yehi hai...! lolzzzz ok i will post after search any nice poetry of Mohsin Naqvi Hahah, bas ab admin ko pakrain k agr ab ki bar humain awards nhi milay na tou hum sub strike pay chalay ajyen gain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted May 19, 2010 Mahi, Emaad bro, Rayyan, Shabai , 3 days reh gyen hain jaldi jaldi sharing karain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted May 19, 2010 Mahi, Emaad bro, Rayyan, Shabai , 3 days reh gyen hain jaldi jaldi sharing karain abhi 3 days hai na....... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted May 21, 2010 *--*-Ajeeb Pahelii-*--* Woh lerki bhi aik ajeeb paheli thi.. Peyassy Hont thy, Aankh Samundar jaisii thi Sooraj usko daikh ker peela perta tha.. Woh Surma ki dhoop mai dhul ker nikalti thi Usko apnay sayee se der lagta tha.. Sooch k sehra mai woh tenha Hirnii thi.. Atay jaatay MOsam Usko dasttay thy.. Hansrat Hanstay Palkoo se Roo perti thi.. Aadhi raat ganwaa daiti thi chup reh ker Aadhi Raat k Chand se Baatain keri thi... Door se ujjray Mandir jaisa gher uska.. Wo apnay gher mai ikloto daivii thi.. Moom se Nazuk Jisam Sehra dukhta tha.. Diyee Jallaa k Sheb bher Aap pighalti thi.. Taiz Hawa ko rook k apnay Anchel per.. Sookhay Phool ikathay kerti phirti thi.. Sab per zahir ker daiti thi Bhaaid apna.. Sab se ik Tassveer chuppaye rekhti thi... Kel sheb chikna choor hua tha Dil uska.. Ya phr pehli baar woh Khul ker Rooi thi!!! MOHSIN!!! kiya jaanay kio dhoop se beperwah.. Woh apnay gher ki dehleez per baithi thi... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Emaad 56 Posted May 21, 2010 وہ بدل گيا اچانک ميري زندگي بدل کر کبھي مجھ کو ساتھ لے کر کبھي ميرے ساتھ چل کر وہ بدل گيا اچانک ميري زندگي بدل کر ہوئے جس پے مہربان تم کوئي خوش نصيب ہو گا ميري حسرتيں تو نکليں ميرے آنسوؤں ميں ڈھل کر کوئي پھول بن گيا ہے کوئي چاند کوئي تارا جو چراغ بجھ گئے ہيں تيري انجمن ميں جل کر ميرے دوستو خدارا ! ميرے ساتھ تم بھي ڈھونڈو وہ يہيں کہيں چھپے ہيں ميرے غم کا رخ بدل کر تيري بے جھجک ہنسي سے نا کسي کا دل ہو ميلا يہ نگر ہے آئينوں کا يہاں سانس لے سنبھل کر کبھي مجھ کو ساتھ لے کر کبھي ميرے ساتھ چل کر وہ بدل گيا اچانک ميري زندگي بدل کر Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Amaya 3 Posted May 21, 2010 اُجڑے ہُوے لوگوں سے گریزاں نہ ہُوا کر حالات کی قبروں کے یہ کتبے بھی پڑھا کر ہر وقت کا ہنسنا تجھے برباد نہ کردے تنہائی کے لمحوں میں کبھی رو بھی لیا کر اے دل تجھے دشمن کی بھی پہچان کہاں ہے تو حلقہء یاراں میں بھی محتاط رہا کر کیا جانئے کیوں تیز ہوا سوچ میں گم ہے خوابیدہ پرندوں کو درختوں سے اڑا کر اس شخص کے تم سے بھی مراسم ہیں تو ہونگے وہ جھوٹ نہ بولے گا مرے سامنے آکر پہلا سا کہاں اب مری رفتار کا عالم اے گردش دوراں ذرا تھم تھم کے چلا کر اک روح کی فریاد نے چونکا دیا مجھکو تو اب تو مجھے جسم کے زنداں سے رہا کر اب ٹھوکریں کھائے گا کہاں اے غم احباب میں نے تو کہا تھا کہ مرے دل میں رہا کر اس شب کے مقدر میں سحر ہی نہیں محسن دیکھا ہے کئی بار چراغوں کو بُجھا کر Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted May 21, 2010 Zaini bajii........hmy din yaad kerwa ker khud gayeb hoo...22 date kuj dair tk honay waali hai or u ne abhi tk participate nahi kiya Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted May 21, 2010 Zaini have Some Prob thats y cudnt pOst yet !! But i hope She will posT SoOn !! SOo stay Tunned !! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hmm 1 Posted May 21, 2010 ChalOo CHOoROo !!! MoHabbat JhOot hai Ehd -e-wafa Ik Shagal hai Baykaar LogOn ka "TaLab" SOoKhay Huay PattOn ka bay rOnaq jazEeRa Hai "Khalish" Deemak Zada Owraaq per BoseEda satRoOn ka Zakheera hai " Khumaar-e-waSal " tapti DhOop k seEnay pa urtay baDlOon ki raaigaan bakhshisH !!!!!! "Ghubaar -e- Hijr " Sehra main SarabOon Say Attay MoSam ka KhumyaaZaa !! ChalOo CHOoROo !!! k Ab tak main andherOn ki Dhamak main saans ki zarBoOn pay chahat ki Bina rakH ker safar kerta rahUn ga Mujhay ehsSaaS hi kab tha K tum b MOsamOn k saath apnay pairhan k rang badlOo gi !! ChalOo CHOoROo !!! WOo Saaray Khwaab kacchii Bhurbhuri matti k bay-Qeemat gharOonday thay WOo Saaray ZaaiQay meri Zubaan per zakhm ban ker Jum gaye Hon gay Tumhari UngliyoUn ki narm Poorain pathrOn per naam Likhti thein Mera Lakin..... Tumhari uNgliyaan to AdatUn ye Jurm kerti thein _______ !!! ChalOo CHOoROo !!! safr main AjnabIi LoGOn say aisay haadsay sarzaD hua kerty hain ----- saDiyoUn say..... ChalOo CHOoROo !!! Mera Hona na Hona Ik braber hai Tum apnay Khaal O khad Ko aainay main phir sanwernay Doo Tum apni Aankh ki basti main phir say ik naya MoSam Uternay Doo --- !!! "Mere khwaabOn Ko mernay Doo" nai tasweer dekhOo Phir naya maktOob LikhOo Phir naye Mosam naye lafz say apna silsila Joro' mere maazi ki chahat Ko RaaiGaan samjhOo Meri yaaDOon say kacchay raabtay ToROo ChalOo CHOoROo !!! MoHabbat JhOot hai Ehd -e-wafa Ik Shagal hai Baykaar LogOn ka *!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!*!* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ramz 8 Posted May 21, 2010 (edited) wah wah :D Edited May 21, 2010 by ramz Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ramz 8 Posted May 21, 2010 talab Ko ajr na Doon Fikr-e-raah guzar na karOn safar main ab K hawa KOo B HamSafar na KarUn Obhertay Doobtay Sooraj say tor Loon rishta Main shaam OrH k Soo jaUn or seHar na karun Ab is say Berh k bhala kiya Ho ehtiyaat-e-wafa mei tere sheher say guzrOn tujhay khaber na kruN ye mere derd ki Dolat merei mataa-e-hayaat In AnsOon ki wazaahat main umer Bher na karun Ujaar shab ki khalisH ban k Bun main Khoo jaun main chandni ki terha Khud Ko der-ba-der na karun WOo aik pal Ko dikhaai to day kahin MOhsin main jaa'n gunwa k b Uss pal Ko mukhtasir na krun Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted May 21, 2010 Zaini bajii........hmy din yaad kerwa ker khud gayeb hoo...22 date kuj dair tk honay waali hai or u ne abhi tk participate nahi kiya Mr Rayyan 4 ur kind information abhi pora aik din baki hai so ap meri fikar chorain main tou last main b kar lon ge Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted May 21, 2010 Mr Rayyan 4 ur kind information abhi pora aik din baki hai so ap meri fikar chorain main tou last main b kar lon ge ok miss zaini.....mai ne kaha bai yaad kerwa doon kahi miss bhool hi na gai hoo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted May 21, 2010 ok miss zaini.....mai ne kaha bai yaad kerwa doon kahi miss bhool hi na gai hoo main bholnay walon main sy nhi hon , bas thoraaaaa, balkay zaida he busy hon kal sy sliya late hogye .... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zaini 22 Posted May 21, 2010 talab Ko ajr na Doon Fikr-e-raah guzar na karOn safar main ab K hawa KOo B HamSafar na KarUn Obhertay Doobtay Sooraj say tor Loon rishta Main shaam OrH k Soo jaUn or seHar na karun Ab is say Berh k bhala kiya Ho ehtiyaat-e-wafa mei tere sheher say guzrOn tujhay khaber na kruN ye mere derd ki Dolat merei mataa-e-hayaat In AnsOon ki wazaahat main umer Bher na karun Ujaar shab ki khalisH ban k Bun main Khoo jaun main chandni ki terha Khud Ko der-ba-der na karun WOo aik pal Ko dikhaai to day kahin MOhsin main jaa'n gunwa k b Uss pal Ko mukhtasir na krun , Rmz ye maine sochi thi post karnay ka, i knw tm ny kahan sy copy mari hia Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted May 21, 2010 main bholnay walon main sy nhi hon , bas thoraaaaa, balkay zaida he busy hon kal sy sliya late hogye .... ok koi baat nahi...ab jeldi se ker doo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SimpleRayyan 4 Posted May 21, 2010 , Rmz ye maine sochi thi post karnay ka, i knw tm ny kahan sy copy mari hia mai isi liye keh raah tha k jeldi se kr doo churaa li na ramz ne u ki poetry...ab is ko jermana ker doo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ramz 8 Posted May 21, 2010 @ xaini maine copy nhi ki .. mai tou kaam he register pe karta hn =D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
