Talaash 0 Posted December 9, 2004 Asalam_O_Alikum to all i really like her poetry...hope app sab ko bi passand aay gi... i know it is a long poem :D ...but its really nice ..... agar app understand karain tu tab.... zard (yellow) phoolon ki barish magar khawab........ khawab tou khawab hotay hain maray shaour ki aankhon nay jab dekhna sekha tou khawab nahie dekhay khawab dekhnay ki khawaish aur us kay azaab dekhay Mohabbat iss ka tasawar roshan lagta hai magar andahray bhar data hai roh mein viraan kar data hai dil ki basti ko muj say bi phala jurm yahe howa mein nay jab likhna sekha tu phala lafz Mohabbat likha bohot likha kie tarha say likha iss ki khushboo ko aur iss kay tamam rangon ko khud mien abaad kia mein mohabbat ki iss jang mein khobsurti say bikharna aur marna chahti thi Mein nay woh umer apni iss zingdi mein bohot Talaash ki jo titiliyon aur jugnaon ko muthiyon mein kaad kar kay khush honay ki hoti hai guriyon say khilanay aur sahilon per sepiya chun-nay say phelay rait kay gharonday bananay ki hoti hai magar mari zindgi kay sumandar per na sahil hain na sahilon ki hawa bas rait he rait hai............rait he rait aur hawa ka rait say samjota.....! mujhay tu aankhain bachana thein mari aankhon nay dahron dahr aansoo dekhay magar yah ansoo mein nay ra-egaan nahie janay diyain girtay rahay maray dil kay wasee sahra mein bahtay rahay dhanday aur methay dharon ki tarha mujay zindgi karna chahyain thi magar kiya yah koi asi shaa hai jo khud ki ja sakti hai zindgi muj say nahie ho saki aur phir mien aik had par aa kar ruk gie mien iss zindgi kay sath iss ki sharton per iss say ziada agay nahie ja sakti thi mien nay shari ki aur apni shart par ki jasi bi ki mujay us say apnay tamam he rishton per gharoor hai kay yah sab kuch mara hai mara apna us ka nahie jo raston, aur nahr kinaray aastada darakhton per saray shaam do namon ko joor kar aik naam banata hai aur bhool jata hai bhool jana sach say munharf ho jana hai kirdaar say khali ho jana........! mari sari ki sari tanhae yaad rakhnay aur sach bolnay ki saza hai mujhay kuch nahie bhola zard phoolon ki barish say lay kar laho laho karti rasmon aur kasmon tak riwajon aur simajon tak sach jo mara yakeen hai mara emaan hai ab kie tarha ki bataon aur barsaton nay ghaar rakha hai mujhay maray charon taraf bay shumar aankhain hain aur in mein mari aankhain mari apni aankhain sulugti Talaash karti aankhain Talaash karti, zakham khati aankhain aur mien nay tu kabhi in aankhon ko jhapk kar bi nahie dekha janay kiyon aik dharka aik khadsha jahan mien aankh jhapkon gi wohe per hadasa ho ga tulo-ay aftaab ka manzar acha lagta ho ga magar yah tu shab guzarnay par hai na aur mujhay tu shab guzarnay tak aankhon ko charigh rakhna hai mujhay nahie maloom maray sath kisay jagna hai mujhay tu bas yah khabar hai kay Mein jaag rahe hon. :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
"WIDMARK" 0 Posted December 10, 2004 NICE N HEART TOUCHING POETRY I LIKE IT VERY MUCH :) HOPE U WILL KEEP IT UP Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charmer 0 Posted December 11, 2004 wow v v good talaash I also like Noshi Gillani's poetry so much umm & now I have a cool poem of her Hunar ka Aakhri Lamha hamein hamraah chalney ka hunar to aata hei lakin mohabbat mein bohat dushwaar hota hei badan saanson ki hiddat say pighaltey hon magar dil bagumaani k ghubaar-aalood raaston per nikal jaein jahaan khawahishein bhi haath malti hon nidaamat say inhi bay samat lamhon mein dil per yei bhi khul jaye muhabbat or samjhotey mein kitna farak hota hei wohein hamraah chalney ka hunar dam tore deta hei Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 11, 2004 Thanks widmark...yah sure i will continu if members take intrest ..... hope app ki taraf say bi koi poetry sunnay ko zaror milay gi :) Charmer sis thanks a lot.....really cool poem..zaber10 abalay pochtay hain paoon say kia milay ga tumhain wafaon say in mundaron pay kuch charigh bi thay kon pochay ga ab hawaon say bastiyain zay-raay aab aati gein hont jaltay rahay duaon say titliya kiyon safar mein rahti hain batiyain pochti hian maoon(mothers) say abr pawanday khaak lagta hai rait girnay lagi khalaon say bhook ki dhoop hum ko kha jati bach gay mahnaton ki chaoon say dil nay hijrat kabool kar li thi hosalay ho sakay na paoon say :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 14, 2004 galli koochon mien bargay khushk ki surat bikharna tha hawa say dosti ka koi tu anjaam hona tha janoon kay shahar mein likin humari haar lazim thi idher ik shaira thi, us taraf sara zamana tha yah sara umer kis aashuftagi mein raegaan kar di usi ko yaad rakha hai, jisay dil say bholana tha ajab wahshat ka alam hai samj mien kuch nahie atta safar ki shab musafir ko kahan khaama lagana tha diya-ay jo baam per rakhay thay mien nay bhuj gay saray issi tareek shab mein usay ko maray gaoon aana tha woh jab ohjal howa tu hum bi apnay app say chunkay "Usay awaz dani thi, usay wapis bulana tha" :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrystalHeart 0 Posted December 15, 2004 koi mosam ho visal o hijr ka hum yaad rakhtay hain tari bataon say iss dil ko bohot abaad rakhtay hain kabhi dil kay sahefay per tujay tasveer kartay hain kabhi palkon ki chaoon mein tujhay zanjeer kartay hain kabhi khawabeeda shamon mein kabhi barish ki raton mien koi mosam ho visal o hijr ka hum yaad rakhtay hain tari bataon say iss dil ko bohot abaad rakhtay hain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 16, 2004 abhi mumkin nahie hai ghazal kahna kisi sachi mohabbat ki judae per dukhon kay darmiya rah kar wafa ki nazm likh lana abhi mumkin nahie hai abhi mumkin nahie hai hijr kay mosam ki aankhon say kisi kay visal ki bataon kay hathon per dua kay harf pher lana abhi mumkin nahie hai abhi mumkin nahie hai khawaishon kay chand chahron per kisi khushboo kay rangon ka bikhar jana mahak uthna abhi mumkin nahie hai abhi mumkin nahie hai shaharay dushmana ki wahshatay na maharbaan mein phir mohabbat ka biyan karna abhi mumkin nahie hai :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Charmer 0 Posted December 18, 2004 kisi harf mein kisi baab mein nahin aaye ga tera zikar meri kitaab mein nahin aaye ga nahin jaye gi kisi aankh say kahein roshni koi khawaab ab k azaab mein nahin aaye ga koi khud ko sehraa nahin karey ga meri tarha koi khawaahishon kay saraab mein nahin aaye ga dil-a-badgumaan terey mosmon ko naveed ho koi khaar dast-a-gulaab mein nahin aaye ga osay laakh dil say pukaar lo osay dekh lo koi ek harf jawaab mein nahin aaye ga teri raah taktey rahey, agarcha yei khabar bhi thee kay yeh din bhi terey hisaab mein nahin aaye ga. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 18, 2004 jo dard kay sahra mein akayla bi bhot hai us kay liya dewaar ka sayya bi bohot hai dekha nahie tanhae mien tum nay kabhi us ko bichray howay logon ko woh roya bi bohot hai kuch tum ko mohabbat pay yakeen tha na wafa per kuch dukh mari takdeer mein likha bi bhot hai binae aandahron say bhala kasay bachata ik shaks taray hijr mien jaga bi bhot hai woh aur hain jo cho kay tujay dekhna chahain muj ko tu maray khawab ki duniya bi bhot hai kirdaar say mahroom tha yah shahar so iss nay hum ko dar-o-dewaar pay likha bi bohot hai :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 23, 2004 log darya talaash kartay hain hum kinara talaash kartay hain shaam hotay he janay kiyon khud ko bay erada talaash kartay hain aa zameen taray rizk mein hum bi apan hissa talaash kartay hain jo taray rastay say mil jay asa rasta talaash kartay hain yah sabhe log kis liya muj mein is ka chahra talaash kartay hain apni binae ki hadon say perray hum yah kia kia talaash kartay hain hum safar mien qiyaam karnay ko koi khaama talaash kartay hain :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted December 25, 2004 wwwwwwowww good work all Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 26, 2004 Thanks MHN....nice poem kahe asa na ho kay ankahe ka bhaad khul jay isi khadshay mien tum muj say mari takhlik kay johar juda kartay rahay ho aur mari takmeel say dartay rahay ho tumhari muslahat goshi ki saf-faki mujay tu kia zameen o asmaan ko bhanj kar dalay tumhari fitrat-a-baymahar say wakif bi hon tasleem karti hon magar yah kia azeat hai ajab andazay wahshat hai Mujay tum say mohabbat hai... :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted December 26, 2004 no thanx i like noshi Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 28, 2004 kia mila mohabbat say? khawab ki musafat say visal ki tamazat say roz-o-shab riyazat say kia mila mohabbat say aik hijr ka sahra aik shaam yaadon ki ik thaka howa aansoo :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted December 28, 2004 nice work talash Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted December 30, 2004 Thanks MHN very nice ghazal teri khushboo nahie milti, tara lahja nahie milta humay tu shahar mein koi taray jasa nahie milta yah kasi dhund(fog) mien hum tum safray aaghaaz kar bethay tumhain aankhain nahie miltein, humay chahra nahie milta her ik tadbeer apni aregaan thari mohabbat mein kisi bi khawab ko tabeer ka rasta nahie milta bhala us kay dukhon ki raat ka koi maddawa hai woh maa jis ko kabhi khoya howa bacha nahie milta zamanay ko karenay say woh apnay sath rakhta hai magar maray liya us ko koi lamha nahie milta musafat mein dua-ay abr un ka sath dati hai jinhain sahra kay daman mein koi darya nahie milta jahan zulmat ragon mein apnay panjay ghaar dati hai usi tareek rastay per diya jalta nahie milta :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted January 8, 2005 Tamam Dukh hai humain khabar hai tamam dukh hai yah zindigi ko jo aasmanon ki wasaton say hazar siddiyon say mil raha hai piyaam dukh hai jo kar-zaray zawalay histi ko dhoop chaoon ki aahaton say chala raha hai nezaam dukh hai saher tu ik mukhtasar sa ghum hai taveel din ki hawayliyon kay jo rasaton mien ther gie hai woh shaam dukh hai yah shaam dukh hai kay iss ki shaa per kie dinon say musafaranay abd ka asay firaak asaar rasaton per safar tu khair aik almiya hai kiyaam dukh hai humain khaber hai, tamam dukh hai yah aas dukh hai, niraas dukh hai udasiyon ka libaas dukh hai yah tashnagi jo azaab ban kar thar gie hai badan kay boseeda sahilon per tu iss ka aahday dawaam dukh hai yah shoor karti hawa ka sara kharaam dukh hai humain khaber hai tamam dukh hai yah tum mohabbat nebahtay ho tu us mohabbat ka naam dukh hai yah visal mosam jo ik musalsal mughalta hai tu is rafakat ka naam dukh hai aur asi wahshat numma fizza mein khamosh rahna bi ik saza hai magar kisi say kalaam dukh hai humain khaber hai tamam dukh hai :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted February 7, 2005 yah kaadi sans lata hai in awazon kay jungle mein maray par bhand kar urnay ka kahtay ho riha kartay nahie likin rihae kay liya benae ko ik jurm kahtay ho mari palkon ko si kar mosomon ko jananay pahchananay ki shart rakhtay ho maray paon ki zanjeeron ki bay chahra sadaon say darratay ho mari azadi-e-parwaz ki khawaish ko jungle kay liya azaar kahtay ho maray jazbon ki khishti ko jalatay ho maray afkaar kay darya ko sharaon ka kaadi banatay ho magar sun lo koi mosam ho habs-o-jabr ka , sahra ka , jungle ka yah kaadi sans lata hai :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
mein_hoon_na 0 Posted February 13, 2005 yah kaadi sans lata haiin awazon kay jungle mein maray par bhand kar urnay ka kahtay ho riha kartay nahie likin rihae kay liya benae ko ik jurm kahtay ho mari palkon ko si kar mosomon ko jananay pahchananay ki shart rakhtay ho maray paon ki zanjeeron ki bay chahra sadaon say darratay ho mari azadi-e-parwaz ki khawaish ko jungle kay liya azaar kahtay ho maray jazbon ki khishti ko jalatay ho maray afkaar kay darya ko sharaon ka kaadi banatay ho magar sun lo koi mosam ho habs-o-jabr ka , sahra ka , jungle ka yah kaadi sans lata hai VERY NICE TALAASH MUJHAY KAFI ARSAY SE TALAASH THI IS POEM KI THANX TO SHARE ME Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted February 27, 2005 thanks MHN and u welcome usi ki yaad kay jugnon safar ki shaam mein hain kay jis kay naam kay sab harf maray naam mein hain jab yah tah kar he liya hai kay safar karna hai phir kisi dil mien bhala kis liya ghar karna hai kisi charigh kay jalnay ki arzoo karna humain aziz raha tari justujo karna rasaton mien rahay, yah ghar mein rahay umer bhar halatay safar mein rahay mohabbat mein khasara kar liya hai taray dukh ko gawara kar liya hai :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
cute_sweeti 0 Posted February 27, 2005 salam......awesome. ..Talaash....keep it up..... :) Have a nice time... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted February 28, 2005 thanks cute sweeti khawab sath rahnay kay nit naay dekhta hai yah jo asal mosam hai yah guzarta jata hai khud ko sabz he rakha aansoon ki barish mein warna hijr ka mosam kis ko raas aata hai tu hawaoon ka mosam tuj ko kiya khabar jana! karday badgumani say dil bi toot jata hai aik tum he thay warna adami mohabbat mein lakh aain dewarain rasatay banata hai hum tu khair nadan thay, muntazir rahay warna kon apni benaee iss tarha ganwata hai kitnay khawab aankhon mein zakham bananay lagtay hain jab hawa kay honton per tara naam atta hai sankaroon dukanaain hain visal kay charaghoon ki kon hijr mein apna ab lahoo jalata hai[/color] :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted March 6, 2005 lahoo per karz banti ja rahe hai mohabbat farz banti ja rahe hai aik naein harani dhondnay niklay hain sahraoon mein pani dhondnay niklay hain ishq dua hai radday baala hai azabay tishnagi say dar gie hai kahani mein mohabbat mar gie hai kabhi us ka patta day sumandar! rasata day wafa kay darbadar honay ki tuhmat mari dewangi kay sar gie hai yah nahie kay ahday tarb nahie maray dil ko tari talab nahie :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Talaash 0 Posted March 10, 2005 Udas shaam ki aik nazm visaal rut ki yah pheli dastak he sar-zinish hai kay hijr mosam nay rastay rastay safar ka aghaaz kar diya hai tumharay hathon ka lamsjab bi mari wafa ki hathaliyon per hina banay ga tu soch lon gi rafakaton ka sunahra soraj gharoob kay imtahaan mein hai humaray baghoon say gar kabhi titaliyon ki khushboo guzar na bay tu yah na kahna kay titaliyon nay gulaab rastay badal liyain hain agar koi shaam yon bi aa-ay kay jiss mien hum tum lagay parraay tu jaan lana kay shaam bay bas thi shab ki tareekiyon kay hathon tumhari khawish ki mutihiyaan bay dehaaneyon mien kabhi khulain tu yakeen karna kay mari chahat kay jagnaoon nay tumharay hathon kay lams-e-taza ki khawishon mein baday ghan-naray aandahray katay magar yah khadshay, yah waswasay tu takalfan hain jo bay erada safar pay niklain tu yah tu hota hai yah tu ho ga hum apnay jazbon ko munjamind ra-ayganiyon kay supurd kar kay yah soch lain gay kay hijr mosam tu visal ki pheli shaam say he safar ka aghaaz kar chuka tha :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
