molajut 0 Posted February 12, 2004 Asalam O Alikum to all Freinds :hi: Umair>Adil khan> Nice poetry dudes Shabo> Aur g aap ki poetry ki kya tareef karun seedha dil ko touch karti hai Do jawan dilloon ka gham doriyaan samajhti hain Kon yaad karta hai hijkiyaan samajhti hain Tum to khud he qatil ho tum yeh baat kya jano Kyun huwa mein dewana beriyaan samajhti hain Baang say uterti jab haseen dosheeza Jism ki nazakat ko seeerhiaan(stairs) samajhti hain Yun to ser-e-gulshan kitnay log aatay hain Phol kon torey ga daliyaan samajhti hain Jis nay kar liya dil mein pehli baar ghar daanish Us ko meri aankhoon ki putliyaan samajhti hain :luv: Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 13, 2004 rukh,adil,shabo,fati,molajut>>>> superb shiari guyss awara poet>>> nice poetry ;) but don be awara ok Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 13, 2004 dis shair i would likes to dedicate to all of u :) shair "Bhool Se Agar Koi Bhool Hui, To Bhool Samajke Use Bhool Jana, Arey Bhoolna Sirf Bhool Ko, Bhoolkar Bhi Hume Na Bhool Jana :) Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 13, 2004 Salaam All :hi: Wah ji kya kehnay hain aap k.. beautiful poetry fati, Molajut n Umair aawara pa.. oops I mean aawara poet sahib Salaam n welcome to the shairi section.. ur poetry was well received however this thread is for URDU poetry only and your most welcome to join us with ur contributions!! Fati> Nice avatar.. just in time for V day ;) Umair> Aap bhoolnay wali cheez ho kya jo KOIEE aap ko bhool jaiey ga?? Molajut> Sooooo nice bechain bahaaron mein kyaa-kyaa hai jaan ki Khushboo ati hai jo phool mahakta hai usse toofan ki Khushboo atii hai kal raat dikha k Khwaab-e-tarab so sej ko soona chhor gaya har silavat se phir aaj usi mehmaan ki Khushboo ati hai talkiin-e-ibaadat ki hai mujhe yoon teri muqaddas aankhon ne mandir k darichon se jaise lobaan ki Khushboo ati hai kuchh aur bhi saansein lene par majaboor-saa main ho jataa hoon jab itne barre jangal mein kisi insaan ki Khushboo ati hai kuchh tu he mujhe ab samjha de ai kufr duhaa_ii hai teri kyoon shekh k daaman se mujh ko imaan ki Khushboo ati hai Dartaa hoon kahin is aalam mein jeeney se na munakir ho jaoon ahbaab ki baaton se mujh ko ehsaan ki Khushboo ati hai Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dil Hai Pakistani 0 Posted February 13, 2004 it is not my shairy ibaadat karate hain jo log jannat kii tamannaa main ibaadat to nahee hai ik tarah kii vo tijaarat hai jo Dar ke naar-e-dozaKh se Khudaa kaa naam lete hain ibaadat kiya vo Khaalee buzadilaanaa ek Khidamat hai magar jab shukrane main jabeen jhuktee hai bande ki vo sachchi bandagi hai ik shariifaanaa ita'at hai kuchal de hasaraton ko beniyaaz-e-mudda ho jaa Khudi ko jhaaD de daaman se mard-e-baaKhudaa ho jaa uThaa lati hain lehrain tahanashiin hotaa hai jab koii ubharnaa hai to Garq-e-bahr-e-fanaa ho jaa kiyon k main itny achi shairy naheen kersakta Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aawara poet 0 Posted February 13, 2004 Salaam All :hi:Wah ji kya kehnay hain aap k.. beautiful poetry fati, Molajut n Umair aawara pa.. oops I mean aawara poet sahib Salaam n welcome to the shairi section.. ur poetry was well received however this thread is for URDU poetry only and your most welcome to join us with ur contributions!! Fati> Nice avatar.. just in time for V day ;) Umair> Aap bhoolnay wali cheez ho kya jo KOIEE aap ko bhool jaiey ga?? Molajut> Sooooo nice bechain bahaaron mein kyaa-kyaa hai jaan ki Khushboo ati hai jo phool mahakta hai usse toofan ki Khushboo atii hai kal raat dikha k Khwaab-e-tarab so sej ko soona chhor gaya har silavat se phir aaj usi mehmaan ki Khushboo ati hai talkiin-e-ibaadat ki hai mujhe yoon teri muqaddas aankhon ne mandir k darichon se jaise lobaan ki Khushboo ati hai kuchh aur bhi saansein lene par majaboor-saa main ho jataa hoon jab itne barre jangal mein kisi insaan ki Khushboo ati hai kuchh tu he mujhe ab samjha de ai kufr duhaa_ii hai teri kyoon shekh k daaman se mujh ko imaan ki Khushboo ati hai Dartaa hoon kahin is aalam mein jeeney se na munakir ho jaoon ahbaab ki baaton se mujh ko ehsaan ki Khushboo ati hai Sx thanx shabo. i'll try to restrict my poetry then to urdu as much as possible. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted February 13, 2004 Tum jis zameen par ho mein us ka khuda nahi Pass sar basar aziyat-o-aazar hi raho Bezaar ho gahi ho bahit zaindagi se tum Jab bas mein kuch nahi hai to bezaar hi raho Tu ko yahan k saaya-o-partoo se kya garaz Tum apne haq mein beech ki deewar hi raho Mein ibtada-e-ishq se bemahar hi raha Tum intaha-e-ishq ka mayar hi raho Tum khoon thookti ho yeh sun kar khushi hui Is rung is adaa mein bhi purkaar hi raho Mein ne yeh kab kaha tha Mohabbat mein hai nijaat Mein ne yeh kab kaha tha wafadaar hi raho Apni mata-e-naz lutaa kar mere liye Bazaar-e-iltafaat mein nadad hi raho Jab mei tumay nishaat-e-mohabbat na de saka Gham mein kabhi sukoon-e-rafaqat na de saka Jab mere saare chiraag-e-tamanna hawa k hain Jab mere saare khwaab kisi bewafa k hainn Phir mujhko cahanay ka tumay koi haq nahi Tanha karahanay ka tumay koi haq nahi.. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted February 13, 2004 This one for a Rude person :( Teri rahon may kab say "aakhein bichhaye baithay hain is dil kay tufan may mohabat ki shama jalay baithay hain aai zaalim kiss mord pay laakar chora hai tumnay mujh ko abhi bhi milnay ki hasrat say teri yaad ko dil say lagaye baithay hain dil ko aadat si ho gaye hai chout khanay ki bhigi hui palkon kay saath muskuranay ki kash anjaam-e-wafa pehlay say jaan jaatay tou koshish bhi nahi kartay dil lagaanay ki Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted February 13, 2004 "Kissi da nai aethay yaar sarey Jhoothay nay " naheen lugtaa hai mujh ko kuch achha aaj kul , woh raihtaa hai sawaar mairay hawaasoan pay aaj kul naa ho saamnay , tow , dil machal jaata hai daikhnay ko uss ko , gur ho saamnay , tow , kurtaa hai dil malaamut uss ko ujab haalut hai mairee , jo samujh say baaher hai mairee din bher uss kay saamnay jaanay say kutraata hoon main , raat bher uss ki yaad main aansoon bahaati hoon main woh tow ab bhee mairee ik jhaluk daikhnay ko tarustaa hai , mager jub main saamnay uss kay jaaoon tow kutraataa hai dil main ik nushter ki tarah uss ka yeh rawayyah utertaa hai , main sumujhnay sai qaasir hoon , kay , kiyoon woh aisa kurtaa hai mohabbat kurnay waala tow , hur pal upnay mehboob kay liyai , duaa kurtaa hai , mager , mujhay tow yeh lugta hai ai shajar , kay woh hur waqt buddoaa kurtaa hai Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 14, 2004 shabo>>> app ke karam jie jo app hamain yaad rakh rahey ho ;) molajut>>> rahem kha hum par yar itnie emotional poetries mat post kar pakistani n awara poet>> keep ur good posting up Haar Bar Ki Tarha Is Bar Bhi "Har Bar Ki Tarha Is Bar Bhi har bar ki tarha is bar bhi Tum nay wohi kia na jo kartay ho Mujhay Umed dila kar Mujhay ak Ass Dila KAR Ak Khushi k Ahsas Dila Kar Phir Tum Na Yaheen Chor Dia Ab Tum Phir Aoo Gay Mujhay Yaqen Hay Phir Koi Majbori Batao Gay Mujhay Yaqen Hay Phir Ak Dafa Phir Kahoo Gay Ainda Asa Nahi Hoga Mujhay Yaqen Hay Phir Maira Dil Phiglay Ga Phir Main Sapno Main Khaon gi Mujhay Yaqen Hay Phir Kabhi Agay Jakar Tum Yahi Baat Dohrao Gay Tum Kia Jano Is Taklef k Ahsas KO Jo Zahiri Chot Say Ziada Dard Dayti Hay Aur Tum Kabhi Jano Gay Bhi Nahi Kuk Tumharay Lia Duniya Aur Yahan rahnay Walay Bhi Bohat Ahmiyat Rakhtay Hain Yahan k Kam Tumhari Majboriya..... Lakin Mairay Lia Sirf Tum HO Sirf Tum Kiya Karon Main Is Pagal Dil Ka Jo Tum Say Piar Kar Baith Hay ... Har Bar Ki Tarha Is Bar Bhi Tum Na Wohi Kia Na JoO Kartay HOo.... :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 14, 2004 Salaam All :hi: Thanks AP ur efforts are appreciated :) Molajut> bohot he gehri aur afsurda poetry hai aap ki.. wah wah Umair> Nice poetry... n ur welcome guzare dinon ki yaad barasti ghataa lage guzroon jo us gali se to thandi hava lage mehmaan ban k aaye kisi roz agar vo shaKhs us roz bin sajaaye mera ghar sajaa lage main is liye maantaa nahin vasl ki Khushi mere raqeeb ki na mujhe bad duaa lage vo qahat dosti kaa paraa hai ki in dinon jo muskura k baat kare aashnaa lage tark-e-vafaa k baad ye us ki adaa 'Qateel' mujh ko sataaye koi to us ko buraa lage Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 15, 2004 so kind of u shabo :) nice poetry urs too ;) Kabhi Yo0n Bhe Aa Meri AanKh Men... Keh NaZar Ko Kabhi Khabar Na Ho... MuJhe Aik Raat NaWaZ De... MaGeR UzKe Baad Sahar Na hO... Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 15, 2004 :hi: Hi Umair Wah wah .. bohot nice Heyyy I read this.. n thought of u baaham shab-e-visaal uthaaye hain kya mazey vo bhi ye kah rahe hain 'ilaahii sahar na ho' Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 15, 2004 merey itney achey shair ko comedy main lekar aa gayeeen well it was too good Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 15, 2004 Salaam All :hi: Kahaan gaiey sab loog????... basant ki khushiyon mein bz hain ya light baar baar off honay k chakar mein Come back soon.. u r all being missed Umair> Kuch door humare saath chalo hum dil kee kahaani kah deinge Samajhe na jise tum aankhon se vo baat zubaani keh deinge Phoolon kee tarha jab hoontoo pe ek shokh tabasum bikharegaa Dheeray se tumhaare kaanoo mein ek baat puraani keh deinge! Izhaar-e-vafaa tum kiya jaano iqraar-e-vafaa tum kiya jaano Hum zikr karenge gairon kaa aur apni kahaani keh deinge Mausam tu baraa hee zaalim hai toofan uthaata rehta hai Kuch log magar is hal-chal ko bud-mast javaani keh deinge Sx Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted February 16, 2004 Asalam O Alikum Guys again :hi: sorry i was away due to Basant problems and thanks for missing me i am very greatful to u :D Shabo> G shuker hai aap ko hamari poetry bhi achi lagi aur g waisay mein is baat per heraan hun k aap ko meri afsurda poetry per hasi kyun nahin aae :P Tumare yad ka ub tuk charag jalta ha Ajeeb shideet gum ha ka dag jalta ha Khada ka wasetay roko na muja ko rony do Wagerna sholla dill se damag julta ha Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
molajut 0 Posted February 16, 2004 this one 4 Dil laga hi lia hai tu gina bhi sekh lay Ahsan Warna tera bhi vahi haal ho ga jo divano ka hoa Ashiq hi jane ishq ki lazat ko Ishq se begane ko ishq ka kia pata Main ne tun se piyar kia doka na dena tum Doka dia jo tum ne tu mur jain ge hum Meharbani ker ke kahin aur na dil lagana tum Kisi aur se dil lagaya tu na wo rahe ga na hum Mer jain ge mohabet ashqon ke zaher pe ker Jab tum hi na rahe tu kia karien ge hum gi ker Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 16, 2004 Shart-e-Wafa Is Zamanay Say Na Hum Koi Gilaa Rakhain Gain Dil Lagayein Gain To Na Shart-E-Wafa Rakhain Gain Na Dikhayain Gain Kabhi Dil Pe Lage Zakhm Unhain Dard Uthay Ga Magar Dil Ko Daba Rakhain Gain Jaan De Daingain Agar Aik Ishaara Kar De Ham Usay Apne Liye Bhi Na Bacha Ke Rakhain Gain Sab Hata Daingain Teri Raah Ki Rukawat Hamdam Ghar Ke Darwazay Ko Har Waqt Khula Rakhain Gain Unki Har Baat Ko Bhoolay Say Na Bhoolain Gain Kabhi Unki Yadoon Ko Bhi Seenay Se Laga Rakhain Gain Toot Bhi Jaayegi Umeed Jo Tere Aanay Ki Ek Diya Phir Bhi Hawaaon Main Jala Rakhain Gain Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aawara poet 0 Posted February 16, 2004 thnx guyz for the appreciation here's something i found: Nadaan, nasamajh, pagal, deewana, Sab ko upna mana tune magar ye na jana, matlabi hain log yahan pe matlabi zamana, socha saaya assth dega nikla wo begana. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
aawara poet 0 Posted February 16, 2004 here's another one i read: Hum jaante hain tum humein naashad karoge, Toroge mera dil mujhe barbaad karge, Dil phir bhi tumhein detey hain kia yaad karoge. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
umair.zm 0 Posted February 16, 2004 shabo>> so nice yar :) ...well der was prob in ma pc dats bcaz i was not able to come here ;) ... thanks for missing :D sanober>>> superb molajut,decent,awara poet>>> u guyss r really gr8 :hi: welcome back from basant Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shabo 0 Posted February 16, 2004 (edited) Salaam friends :hi: Very nice poetry submitted by u all decent, Sanober, Molajut> AP> well done!! Umair> :hi: Molajut> @ ur NICE shairi!! Tu door hai mujh sey or paas bhi hai, Teri kami ka kahin ehsas bhi hai, Dost lakhon hain jahan mein meray Par TU pyara bhi hai aur khaas bhi hai ;) Sx Edited February 16, 2004 by Shabo Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 17, 2004 Thanks to u shabo.umair and all of u Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
decent 0 Posted February 17, 2004 Aur abb Kuch Funny KÄçĥ ßÄTÄÖÖN K£¥ TÃœM M£RÄà KÄÜN HÖÖ.... Kaisay Bataoon Key Tum Merai Kaun Hoo, Walls Ki Ice Cream Ho Polka Ki Cone Ho, Kesey Bataoon Key Tum Poorani Dheet Ho, Aik Bohat Bari Phateek Ho , Tum Orangi, Tum Korangi, Tum Hi Ho Meri Nagan Chowrangi , Liyari Ki Tum Football Ho, Kimari Ka Tum Bund Ho, Manora Ki Tum Thand Ho, Tum Kharadar, Tum Methadar, Tum Hi Meray Liye Goolimar Ho. Tum Hi Gutka, Tum Hi Mempoori, Tum Hi Mix Patti Ka Pan Ho. Kaisey Bataon Tumhay Key Tum Meri Koon Ho. Lalookhait Main Rehti Ho Tum Khud Ko Defence Ka Kheti Ho Tum, Lambi Lambi Chorti Ho Tum, Hamish Say Ho Kowari, Tum Ho Sari Ka Bother, Tum Shikarpur Ka Achar, Tum Peshawar Ki Naswar, Tum Aur PIA Ka Jahaz Ho Jo Kabhi Waqt Par Nahi Milti, Wo Parwaz Ho Jo Hamish Short Rehti Hai, Wo Piyas Ho, Mahengai Kay Is Dor Mey Sawa Rupey Ki Niyaz Ho , Aur Mera Aghaz, Tum Mera Anjam, Tum Mera Public Evening Special, Mera Parcham, Mera Awaam Tum, Tum Hi Jurat , Tum Hi Ummat , Tum Hi Jasarat , Tum Hi Nowaey Waqt , Jang Ho Aman Ho, The News Ho, Ya Dawn Ho, Kaisey Bataon Tumhay Key Tum Meri Koon Ho. Key Main Rokta Bus Tum Ko Hoon, Main Tookta Bus Tum Ko Hooon, Tum Hi Mera Kal Thin , Tum Hi Mera Aaj Ho , Tum Hi Marshallah , Tum Hi Jamhoriat , Tom Hi Governer Raj Ho, Aur Meri TT Tum ,Mera Repeater Tum, Mera Rokket Lunchar Tum , Tum Hi Meri Soch Ho, Meray Paaon Ki Moch Ho, Aur 9 Rupees Wali Coauch Ho, Aur Vespa Main Tum, Aur Rakshey Main Tum, Taxi Main Tum ,Mazda Main Tum, Truck Main Tum Troller Main Tum ,Meri Honda 50 Tum, Meri 70 Tum, Lahore Ka Tanga Ho Tum, Sukhur Ki Suzuki Ho Tum, Aur Kya Bataoon Meri Jaan Tum Meray Liya Kya Ho., Arey Tum Tu Pora PAKISTAN Ho, Karachi Ki Jaan Ho, Aur W11 Ki Paihchan Ho, Kaisey Bataon Tumhay Key Tum Meri Koon Ho :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
