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welcome..2 witness..Aimon n Silver...in baitbazi..

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Arz kia hai..

Aimon says: ab dil lagane ko dil nahi kerta

Usman says: dil lagi se barh gaye hum .. wah wah wah..

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arz kiya hai

Silver says: qarb ki rataain hai aur chaand khil utha hai

Ooky says: uth ja vay kuriyay din chrh gaya hai

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arz kiya hai

dil mai khayaal aya to tum yaad aayay

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arz kiya hai

dil mai khayaal aya to tum yaad aayay

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:P ooo chadoo jii...dil tey pagal ayee :banghead:

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ohh thanks Kashish.. :D hahahahah!

USMAAAAAAAANNNNNNN ... oye yeh mera shair nahi hai.. jhooteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... :firing:

aur yeh post edit kyun ker lee? I like the first intro that sed "Most wonderful 8th wonder (silver n ooky)" better.. chalo shabash ise theek kero ... warna mujhe apna password sharafat se pm kero..

ohh haan next shair for Usman is..

Is tanhayi mai tanha hona chahta hai dil...

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arz hai

is tanhaai mai tanha hona chahta hai dil

dil kay behlavay ko yeh khayal acha hai ghalib>>>>>>>...

aik aur

is tanhaai mai tanha hona chahta hai dil

vahshatoon ka sabab maloon nahin mujhe

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next one is

aik yeh bhi zamana tha aik woh bhi zamana tha

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mm hmm .. mm hmm.. mhhm..

NAHIIIIIIIIIII SILVERRRRRRRRRR.. I was hoping to hear..

Is tanhayi mai tanha hona chahta hai yeh dil..

in hawaon se kaho shor na kare ( my very personal shair)

chal khair.. now to urs..

Silver: aik yeh bhi zamana tha aik woh bhi zamana tha

Ooky: agar tum mil jao to dono ke dono zamane chore denge hum ;) lolzzzz..

emm another one cud be...

aik yeh bhi zamana tha aik woh bhi zamana tha

ek yeh bhi bahana tha ek woh bhi bahana tha.. ab is ke agay tum kuch likho.. lolzzz... :P

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agla shaair to do...pagli...

khair

Silver says: hum mai tum mai kuch to hai yeh baat samajh mai na aai

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ullu.. ooper dekho.. I sed isi shair ke agay bhi kuch likho.. uff!!

Khair aur yeh kia woh dil to pagal hai wala gana.. hum mai tum mai kuch to hai kuch nahi hai kia le ker use bigar dia.. yar thora intizzar ker lete .. mai hi kuch acha sa shair likh deti.. ok ok...

emm

Silver says: hum mai tum mai kuch to hai yeh baat samajh mai na aai

ooky says: aye Nasamajh dekh ker likh, keh ehl-e-dunya ki nazar "ham" per hai! :P

Next:

Aimon says: bandar ko bandar ki pehchan hoti hai waise,

:D complete it.. hamare bare mai hai ;)

Aimon.

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:banghead: Edited by silver

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:alien:

hmmmmm.....

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:drive2:

im 2 fast..2 furious..beware

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oyay,...yar..yeh shaair mera hai..aur main nay issay nahin biogara..remember my shaair..

hum mai tum mai kuch to hai yeh baat samajh mai na aai

yeh raat itni kali kyuun hai iss mai kyuun hai tanhayee..

kuch yaad aya???????

Aimon says: bandar ko bandar ki pehchan hoti hai waise,

Silver says: issi liyay dil ka haal behtar jaantay hain hum ;)

next

Silver says: khoob samjha zamany ko tumharay aanay say pehlay

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Aimon You Go Girl!

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oyay/..meray acc mai say kya kya tum nay delete kiya hai.;)///hain...

Rowazee shpey terawooma, kala cherta, kala cherta!

shikdum shikdum shikdum shikdum shikdum shikdum

kaisa hai yeh shaair???

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hmmmmm

so..next shaair is

Silver says: dil ka haal kahain tum say acha nahin lagta

ab jaldi reply karna...waitin

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Hey why did u change it mujhe tumhara pehla wala shair ziada pasand aya..

wuhi Silver: Dil ka haal kaha tum se

ooky: tabhi to uth ker chal diey teri bazm se hum!

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Aimon says: Woh joh hum ko adna khud ko mahaan samajhte hain...

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Silver says: dil ka haal kahain tum say acha nahin lagta

Ooky says: keh hum jafaiyen seh ker bhi khamosh rehne walon mai se hain

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mujhe bhi pehlay wala shaair acha lagta tha......lakin tum nay kaha asaan karo to,..aasaan kar diya..aap ka hukum sar ankhoon par.....khair....get online sumhow....msn nahi hai to yahoo chalay ga...khair...

Aimon says: Woh joh hum ko adna khud ko mahaan samajhte hain...

Silver says: dil mai rehtay huay bhi makaan rakhtay hain

Silver says: Andheeri raatoon mai aksar yeh soochtay hain

:P

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silver & ooky.............if u dont mind ye shair main complete ker doon..hmmmm

qurb ki raatoon mai tanha yeh soochtay hain

kambakht ye subah kab ho gii yeh sochtey hain

dont mind :P ab app dono ye shair apney alfaz main complete ker saktey hoo....lolzz :P

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lolz once again thanks Kashish.. yar u completed it really well.. I dun need to say another one..

Acha..

Aimon says: Bewafa se wafa ki umeed ker bethe hum :(

Complete it Silver...

Aimon..

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thankz kashis 4 the reply...it was nice 1..

but aimon yar yehi shaair ab tumlikho then mai tumharay walay shaair ka reply karoon ga..fair game..okz...

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